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- 1. Treatment- FilmIdea2 Max Cheshire 03/10/2018 Workingtitle – Shadymovement. Length– Roughlybetweenfivetoten minutes,thisallowsme toshow mycinematographyskillsas well astry and clearlyillustrate mystoryline. Tagline – be careful whoyoutrust. Keycharacters – Three keycharacters,Adam, Ben andChloe.AdamandBen are bestmates,Chloe is Adam’sgirlfriend. HoweveritturnsoutChloe hasbeencheatingonAdamwithBen,his bestmate. Samirais Chloe’sbestmate,butshe onlymakesacameoappearance. Synopsis(Breakdownof three clearacts) ACT1 – Adamand Benare at Adamshouse playingXbox,musicisblastingandtheyare just chilling, Adam’sphoneringsanditsChloe,hisgirlfriend,Adamlooksathisphone andgoesto answer,howeverhe leavesituntil he finisheshisgame. An hourpassesbyand it realiseshe hasn’tphonedChloe back,he goestodo justthat butthere isno answer.He triesagainbut yetthere isstill noanswer, we cut to a scene of where Chloe isandshe’s on face time withherbestfriendSamira,talkingabouthow she hasdone somethingawfuland doesn’tknowwhattodo. Samiraasks whatshe’sdone butit’sinterruptedbyanothercall from Adam.Chloe finallypicksupbutisnot happybecause he hasn’tphonedherfora while andalso interruptedaconversationwithSamira. Chloe notices thatBeniswithhim.She doesn’treallywanttotalkto Adam, it’smore Benshe’s interestedin. Chloe keepstalkingtobenandAdamis fine withitat firsthoweverthe more he thinks aboutit he is annoyed.He finishesthe phone call withChloeandchuckshisphone tothe side in anger.Benasks what’supand Adam repliessayingthathe thinksshe ischeatingonhim. ACT2 – Chloe isonher phone;we don’tknow whatshe’slookingathoweverit’sevidentthatshe’s on it.She thengetsa call fromher mumto go downstairsandas she getsup she plugsherphone intocharge,as she leavesherroom,Bensendshera message,thenanotherandanother. We cut to see Bensendingthese messages,he thengoestophone Chloe butthendecidesagainstit. He thengoesto puthisshoeson as he’sjustaboutto leave hishouse,hisphone startstoringand surprise,it’s Chloe we seemthemtalkinghowevermusicisoverthe top,thistransitionsinto Adam inhis room,listeningtomusiche.We are cuttingbetweenChloeandBentalkingandAdamscrolling throughhispicturesof himself andChloe,he triestophone herhoweveritcomesupwith‘user busy’. AdammessagesSamira,askingaboutChloe andhow she’sbeenactingweirdof recent.Samira simplyreplieswith‘Don’ttalktome abouther,god I don'twant to be friendswiththatsnake.This worriesAdammore aboutthe whole cheatingside tohisthoughts. We thencut back to Ben and Chloe finishing theirconversation,Bengoestomessage Adambutthe latterisphoningBen,‘Jhee,Iwasjustaboutto textyou,what’sup bro.I was textingyoutosay I can’t come roundtonight,I got bareeee worktodoman sorry.’ Adamis silent,benkeepscallinghis name.The call endsandAdamthrowshisphone to the side ina similarfashiontothatof earlier.
- 2. Treatment- FilmIdea2 Max Cheshire 03/10/2018 ACT3 – The followingmorning Adamisleavinghishouse;he shoutstohismum‘I’mjustgoingto Chloe’squickly’ ashe arrivesat Chloe,he isslightlynervous,handstwitchingandhe keepsre adjustinghishair.He knockson the door andthe isno answer,he phonesChloe andwe cutto it ringing,Chloe realiseswhoitisandanswers.‘Canyouopenthe doorplease’it’swhatAdamsays, whilsthe saysthat bensays‘Who isit?’ Adamhears thisandgets angry,he doesn'tknow itsbenbut that doesn'tmatterhe’salreadymad. Loud shoutingisheardandBenrealisesitisAdam, he doesn’tknow whattodo, Chloe isrushing aroundpanicking,Adamstartsbangingat the door. Bengetshisstuff and runsout the back, Adam has run roundto the back of the house toget in,he’sfuminghe seesbenandrunsafterhimhe catchesup and hitsben,theyfightandChloe runsout to stopit,Ben swingsforAdamandmisses hittingChloe inthe head. Benturnsto face Adam it’sa povshotfrom Benand adam punchesthe camera we sendthe screenblackand thatthe endof the film. Target Audience– Thisfilmisaimedandtargetedtowardsteenagers,howeverthe message behinditcan be applicable toadultswhohave experiencedorare experiencingthe same thing. Targetingthistowardsteenagerswillhopefullymake themaware of trustingpeople. I hope to displaythistothe maindemographic bykeepingthe plottwisttoaminimal,bythisImean that itwill hopefullybe notobviousonthe twistthatisgoingto happen,thiswill re inforce the message behindthe film. Withinthe primarydemographic,we’dseethe ‘aspirers’type thisisthe type of people whoare orientedaroundapersonaand appearance.Inaddition,the filmwillbe shownonYouTube,meaning it’sa free filmtowatch.This thenalsomakesadvertisingeasieronsocial mediasuchasInstagram and snapchat,theirsimple ‘swipe up’feature hasbecome verypopularinrecentmonths,allowing youto viewthe advertbysimplyswipinguponthe post. Formand style – I will be filmingthisonahighspecDSLR, usinga highspec setof lenses allowingme tocapture clean,professional shots.Iwill be lookingtoshare asimilarstyle tothatseen inshirosstory,the reasonI have basedmy case studyonshirosstory isbecause the formand style withinthatfilmissomethingthatappealedtome massively.Itisshotwitha lotof movement,alot of cutsand many differentcameraangles,thisissomethingIhope toportraywithinmyfilm
- 3. Treatment- FilmIdea2 Max Cheshire 03/10/2018 Marketplace - There’snopointelongatingamessage overprequelsandspinoffstorake in moneyor winawards,portrayingamessage shouldbe concise andstraighttothe point,thisiswhyI feel there isnointentionsforasequel/prequel orspinoff. YouTube isverymuch a platformwhichallowspeople toshowcase theirworkwhetheritbe highor lowbudget.ThistiesintoYouTube’ssloganof ‘broadcastyourself’andalsoitallowsmyprimary demographictoeasilyaccessthe film,the free platformwillallow audiencestowatchthe filmson repeatandas manytimesastheylike.Inadditiontothis,videosthatare publishedontoYouTube are a loteasierto share aroundthan say a filmthat’sinthe cinema Storyboard Thisscene isthe openingtothe film,itmatchesstereotypical connotationsof ateenage lifestyle, loudmusic,relaxingandplayingvideogames,thisshouldimmediatelyengage withthe target audience.The wide varietyof shotswithinthisopeningsequence will keepthe audience engagedin a scene where itisnothingmore than2 guysplayinga videogame.
- 4. Treatment- FilmIdea2 Max Cheshire 03/10/2018 SCRIPT SHADY MOVEMENTS by Max Cheshire SCENE 1 (OPENINGOFFILM) SHOT 1 LONG SHOT Ben and Adamareplaying Xbox MOVEMENT INTOWARDSADAMAND BEN MUSIC PLAYING GAMEPLAY AUDIO SHOT SHOULD BE 5 SECONDS SHOT 2 MEDIUM SHOT Ben and Adamareplaying Xbox BEN MAN THAT'S A JOKE,SHOULD'VE SCORED ADAM YOU'RE SHIT BRO AHHAHAHA NO MOVEMENT, ON TRIPOD MUSIC PLAYING GAMEPLAY AUDIO 3 SECONDS
- 5. Treatment- FilmIdea2 Max Cheshire 03/10/2018 SHOT 3 LONG SHOT NO MOVEMENT, ON TRIPOD MUSIC PLAYINGHOWEVER FADES ASPHONE RINGS CHARACTER ON THE LEFT OF FRAME, PHONE ON THE RIGHT OF FRAME, FOLLOWSTORY BOARD. SHOT 4 CLOSE UP NO MOVEMENT, ON TRIPOD PHONERINGING ADAM (CONT’D) AH IT'S CHLOE, I'LL ANSWER IN A BIT ZOOMINTO PHONE SHOT SHOULD BE 5 SECONDS HOUR LATER SHOT 5 MEDIUM SHOT NO MOVEMENT, ON TRIPOD ADAM (CONT’D) LEMME PHONEHER BACK
- 6. Treatment- FilmIdea2 Max Cheshire 03/10/2018 PHONERINGING LOCATION CHANGE CHLOE'S HOUSE SHOT 6 MEDIUM SHOT PHONERINGING CHLOE PICKSUP PHONE MAKE SURE IT'S FACETIME. CHLOE HEYYYY ADAM HEY, HOW YOU DOING CHLOE YEH IMGOOD, OH HEY BEN BEN OH HEY CHLOE CHLOE HOW YOU DOING BEN YEH GOOD THANKS,WHATYOU UP TO
- 7. Treatment- FilmIdea2 Max Cheshire 03/10/2018 MUSIC PLAYS OVERTHE TOP,SHOTS SHOW AdamGETTING ANNOYED THAT BEN ANDChloe ARETALKING. PHONECALL ENDS,ADAMTHROWS PHONE DOWN AT SOFA. ADAM URGH, FUCKSAKE. BEN WHAT'S UP BRO? ADAM CHLOW IS MOVINGWEIRD BRO, I DUNNO MAN SCENE1 ENDS. AUDIO THAT WILL BE USED Phone ringtones. GameplayaudiofromXbox Music,this will have to be royaltyfree. I will use a microphoneto record audiowhichcan be overlappedby the audio.