The Writing Process
Or… Zen and the Art of Essay Craft
Getting Started
First and foremost…
DON’T PANIC!
GETTING STARTED II
Habits That Will Result in a Poor Paper
 Procrastinating
 One-draft writing
 Massive self-criticism
 Thesaurus abuse
 Marriage to first draft
 Plagiarism
Habits That Will Result in a Successful
Paper
 Pre-writing
 Developing
 Revising
 Collaborating
 Re-writing
 Conferencing
Understand Your Assignment
Then Forget About it For Awhile
Getting Started
 Thoroughly read your assignment
prompt.
 What, specifically, is your topic?
 Who is your audience?
 How long should your essay be?
 Are there special requirements?
 Ask questions if you don’t
understand.
Getting Ideas
After figuring out your assignment - you need to
generate ideas before you begin drafting.
Forget about the end product for a bit and just get
creative.
Try listing, mapping/clustering/webbing, free-writing,
journalist questions, cubing, or any other method of pre-
writing that works for you.
Listing
 Listing is a good way to
quickly gather many ideas on
paper.
 Simply make a list of as many
ideas as come to you as
quickly as possible.
 Topic: Essay About An
Important Place
 List:
 Bed, my comfy chair, the
mountains, the ocean, my
office, the garden, anywhere
with a book, Starbucks,
home, the shower, the right
state of mind…
Mind Mapping-Clustering-
Webbing- Bubbling
 Mapping is a form of free
association that creates a
visual image of ideas and their
connections. Using mapping
can give you not only ideas
for an essay - but connecting
ideas that may turn into
paragraphs.
Favorite Place
Comfort
Starbucks
Aesthetics
Books
Tastes
Smell
Hanging out
with friends
Writing Studying
Energy
Freewriting
 Write, write, write and don’t
stop. Freewriting means
taking an idea and running
with it wherever it leads.
Don’t think about it - just
keep writing. When you free
yourself and just allow the
ideas to come, you might end
up with a great essay topic
that you wouldn’t have
thought of otherwise.
Starbucks
Coffee calls from shelves and
walls. I can’t not stop in. Who
will be waiting for me today?
Chatting till I have to run to
class, my latte sloshing with
each step. I don’t even mind
when it splashes on my
fingers: my sugar-free, non-
fat liquid gold. Keeping me
sane. The barista knows my
name. Here I sip the taste of
home.
Journalist/Reporter Questions
 Use the standard questions every
journalist must answer.
 Who
 What
 When
 Where
 Why
 How
 Thinking of different ways to answer
those questions might lead to a fresh
perspective on your topic.
The Taste of Home
Who: Either alone or with friends.
What: Coffee, coffee, coffee!
When: Day, night, when studying, when
socializing, when thinking, when
chilling…
Where: Starbucks, Coffee Haus, my
office, home, pretty much anywhere
Why: Energy, inspiration, comfort, mental
and emotional health
How: With all the senses engaged.
Cubing
 Similar to Journalist Questions,
cubing involves considering your
topic from six different angles.
 Describe it (colors, shapes, sizes,
etc.)
 Compare it (What is it similar to?)
 Associate it (What does it make
you think of?)
 Analyze it (Tell how it's made)
 Apply it (What can you do with it?
How can it be used?)
 Argue for or against it
Describe it: Engage the senses - how does it
look and taste and feel - what do you
hear and smell?
Compare it: Like finding my muse.
Associate it: A luxurious bubble bath;
slipping into silk pajamas.
Analyze it: It gives me a moment to breathe
in my surroundings, to organize my
thoughts. When drinking a cup of
coffee with friends, I am sharing my real
self.
Apply it: Coffee can be an effective and
relatively safe energizer. It can help get
through massive amounts of graduate
school readings.
Argue for or against it: Strangely, I think of
home and comfort when I drink a cup
of coffee during the day, despite the
fact that no one in my home is terribly
fond of coffee. When I make coffee at
home, it never seems to be as
comforting as coffee I share with friends
at work.
The VRD
(Very Rough Draft)
The VRD is rough - very rough.
Take your idea and start writing about it.
Don’t worry too much about spelling, punctuation,
organization or grammar. Just make sure it’s marginally
readable.
It’s like freewriting - but attempts to stick to the topic and gets
typed.
It CAN be nutty, horrible, abysmal, disorganized, slangy and
even silly.
The idea is to just get started.
“Polaroids”
 Anne Lamott, in Bird by Bird,
describes the next part of the
process as “seeing what develops” -
like a polaroid.
 After writing your VRD, let it
breathe for a day or so and then
read it again.
 Do you see anything different
there?
 Can you see a more interesting
direction for your essay
developing?
 Is there more to explore?
Anne Lamott’s
Three Draft Essay
After gathering ideas, you can think of your essay writing
process in three drafts:
The Down Draft: Just get it all down (aka - the VRD).
The Up Draft: Then fix it up (revision and organization).
The Dental Draft: Check every ‘tooth’ carefully - work on
word choice and sentencing to make it sound better
(tweaking).
Read it Out Loud
During the revision phase - read your paper slowly, out loud to
yourself.
Better yet, read it out loud to a friend or tutor.
Even better - have someone read it out loud to you!
You will be amazed what paper issues you can ‘hear’ that you
missed when reading.
If parts are awkward, confusing, choppy or repetitive, you’ll
notice.
You might feel a little silly - but it may mean the difference in
your paper grade.
Formatting and Requirements
If you haven’t already - it’s time to revisit your
assignment sheet.
Notice the requirements for paper length, font,
margins, etc.
Does it need a cover sheet? A creative title?
What should be included in your portfolio/folder
with the final draft?
After all your hard work - don’t loose points by
neglecting the requirements.
Finish It!
 At this point - if you’ve gone through the process - you should be
proud of your essay.
 If you’ve also gone to the Writing Center and conferenced with me -
you should be proud and confident.
 Give it one last check for those sneaky, ‘dum’ errors (like writing ‘to’
instead of ‘too’ or ‘your’ instead of ‘you are’)
 And all that’s left to do is…
Organize it-put it in your portfolio folder with the process pieces and
celebrate!

the writing-process

  • 1.
    The Writing Process Or…Zen and the Art of Essay Craft
  • 2.
    Getting Started First andforemost… DON’T PANIC!
  • 3.
    GETTING STARTED II HabitsThat Will Result in a Poor Paper  Procrastinating  One-draft writing  Massive self-criticism  Thesaurus abuse  Marriage to first draft  Plagiarism Habits That Will Result in a Successful Paper  Pre-writing  Developing  Revising  Collaborating  Re-writing  Conferencing
  • 4.
    Understand Your Assignment ThenForget About it For Awhile Getting Started  Thoroughly read your assignment prompt.  What, specifically, is your topic?  Who is your audience?  How long should your essay be?  Are there special requirements?  Ask questions if you don’t understand.
  • 5.
    Getting Ideas After figuringout your assignment - you need to generate ideas before you begin drafting. Forget about the end product for a bit and just get creative. Try listing, mapping/clustering/webbing, free-writing, journalist questions, cubing, or any other method of pre- writing that works for you.
  • 6.
    Listing  Listing isa good way to quickly gather many ideas on paper.  Simply make a list of as many ideas as come to you as quickly as possible.  Topic: Essay About An Important Place  List:  Bed, my comfy chair, the mountains, the ocean, my office, the garden, anywhere with a book, Starbucks, home, the shower, the right state of mind…
  • 7.
    Mind Mapping-Clustering- Webbing- Bubbling Mapping is a form of free association that creates a visual image of ideas and their connections. Using mapping can give you not only ideas for an essay - but connecting ideas that may turn into paragraphs. Favorite Place Comfort Starbucks Aesthetics Books Tastes Smell Hanging out with friends Writing Studying Energy
  • 8.
    Freewriting  Write, write,write and don’t stop. Freewriting means taking an idea and running with it wherever it leads. Don’t think about it - just keep writing. When you free yourself and just allow the ideas to come, you might end up with a great essay topic that you wouldn’t have thought of otherwise. Starbucks Coffee calls from shelves and walls. I can’t not stop in. Who will be waiting for me today? Chatting till I have to run to class, my latte sloshing with each step. I don’t even mind when it splashes on my fingers: my sugar-free, non- fat liquid gold. Keeping me sane. The barista knows my name. Here I sip the taste of home.
  • 9.
    Journalist/Reporter Questions  Usethe standard questions every journalist must answer.  Who  What  When  Where  Why  How  Thinking of different ways to answer those questions might lead to a fresh perspective on your topic. The Taste of Home Who: Either alone or with friends. What: Coffee, coffee, coffee! When: Day, night, when studying, when socializing, when thinking, when chilling… Where: Starbucks, Coffee Haus, my office, home, pretty much anywhere Why: Energy, inspiration, comfort, mental and emotional health How: With all the senses engaged.
  • 10.
    Cubing  Similar toJournalist Questions, cubing involves considering your topic from six different angles.  Describe it (colors, shapes, sizes, etc.)  Compare it (What is it similar to?)  Associate it (What does it make you think of?)  Analyze it (Tell how it's made)  Apply it (What can you do with it? How can it be used?)  Argue for or against it Describe it: Engage the senses - how does it look and taste and feel - what do you hear and smell? Compare it: Like finding my muse. Associate it: A luxurious bubble bath; slipping into silk pajamas. Analyze it: It gives me a moment to breathe in my surroundings, to organize my thoughts. When drinking a cup of coffee with friends, I am sharing my real self. Apply it: Coffee can be an effective and relatively safe energizer. It can help get through massive amounts of graduate school readings. Argue for or against it: Strangely, I think of home and comfort when I drink a cup of coffee during the day, despite the fact that no one in my home is terribly fond of coffee. When I make coffee at home, it never seems to be as comforting as coffee I share with friends at work.
  • 11.
    The VRD (Very RoughDraft) The VRD is rough - very rough. Take your idea and start writing about it. Don’t worry too much about spelling, punctuation, organization or grammar. Just make sure it’s marginally readable. It’s like freewriting - but attempts to stick to the topic and gets typed. It CAN be nutty, horrible, abysmal, disorganized, slangy and even silly. The idea is to just get started.
  • 12.
    “Polaroids”  Anne Lamott,in Bird by Bird, describes the next part of the process as “seeing what develops” - like a polaroid.  After writing your VRD, let it breathe for a day or so and then read it again.  Do you see anything different there?  Can you see a more interesting direction for your essay developing?  Is there more to explore?
  • 13.
    Anne Lamott’s Three DraftEssay After gathering ideas, you can think of your essay writing process in three drafts: The Down Draft: Just get it all down (aka - the VRD). The Up Draft: Then fix it up (revision and organization). The Dental Draft: Check every ‘tooth’ carefully - work on word choice and sentencing to make it sound better (tweaking).
  • 14.
    Read it OutLoud During the revision phase - read your paper slowly, out loud to yourself. Better yet, read it out loud to a friend or tutor. Even better - have someone read it out loud to you! You will be amazed what paper issues you can ‘hear’ that you missed when reading. If parts are awkward, confusing, choppy or repetitive, you’ll notice. You might feel a little silly - but it may mean the difference in your paper grade.
  • 15.
    Formatting and Requirements Ifyou haven’t already - it’s time to revisit your assignment sheet. Notice the requirements for paper length, font, margins, etc. Does it need a cover sheet? A creative title? What should be included in your portfolio/folder with the final draft? After all your hard work - don’t loose points by neglecting the requirements.
  • 16.
    Finish It!  Atthis point - if you’ve gone through the process - you should be proud of your essay.  If you’ve also gone to the Writing Center and conferenced with me - you should be proud and confident.  Give it one last check for those sneaky, ‘dum’ errors (like writing ‘to’ instead of ‘too’ or ‘your’ instead of ‘you are’)  And all that’s left to do is… Organize it-put it in your portfolio folder with the process pieces and celebrate!