We created a script for our documentary. This was to help us know, in detail exactly what we would filming, know who would be doing what, how they were doing it, where they would be and what they would say.

1. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
THE REDBRIDGE RISE IN CRIME
BY
L.ROSENFELD
M.WEST
B.KARRASS
B.GOLDSTONE
N.AHAMED
SCENE ONE

2. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
EXT.HIGH STREET, DAYLIGHT, BEN GOLDSTONE AND MILLIE WEST
STAND SMART CASUALLY DRESSED TO INTRODUCE THE DOCUMENTARY.
BEN GOLDSTONE
(LS,MS)
The crime rate in Redbridge has been on the rise lately.
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MILLIE WEST
(MS)
And something needs to be done.
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(TWO SHOT, MS)
This is Vibe Reports on the Redbridge Rise In Crime.
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MONTAGE OF WHAT'S TO COME IN THE DOCUMENTARY, TRACKING, INTERVIEWS,
RECONSTRUCTION.
SCENE TWO
EXT.RESIDENTIAL NEIGHBOURHOOD
MILLIE WEST
(TRACKING, MS)
I'm on my way to meet a girl who has been a victim of sexual
assault, called xxxxx.
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MILLIE WEST
(MLS,MS)Holds hand out to greet
Hi, how are you?
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VICTIM
(MS)Holds hand out to greet
I am well, thank you.
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MILLIE WEST
(MS)
So can you walk us through what happened to you, if you feel
uncomfortable you do not have to answer the question.
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VICTIM (VO)

3. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
(MS,CU)
(EXPLAINS STORY)
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EXT. DARK ALLEYWAY, AFTERNOON
WOMAN
(LS, TRACKING)Walks into alleyway
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ATTACKER
(MS,TRACKING)Follows woman into alley
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WOMAN
(CU) Looks behind her, anxious
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ATTACKER
(LS,MS,LA) Pushes woman up against wall, tries to rip clothes
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TEENAGER (WITH FRIENDS)
(LS,MS)
Stop!!!
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ATTACKER
(MS) Startled, runs off
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WOMAN
(HA,MS) Crying, falls to floor
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TEENAGER (WITH FRIENDS)
(LS,MS,CU) Run over to woman, call police
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MILLIE WEST
(MS,OTS)
What did you do after the event happened, did you report it to
anyone?
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
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4. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
MILLIE WEST
(MS,OTS)
How have you changed, do you feel different?
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS,OTS)
What would you say to victims of assault who have not reported it?
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS,OTS)
How should perpetrators be dealt with?
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
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SCENE THREE
INT.SCHOOL CORRIDORS
BEN GOLDSTONE
(TRACKING, MS)
I’m meeting “ “, a statistical analyst specialist, who came to
talk to me about the facts and figures of annual, and regional crime
related data. He will also be able to tell me about what he believes
are the causes for this huge increase in numbers.
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INT. Well lit office/ room, daytime
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)

5. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
Thank you so much for coming to meet us today, and
agreeing to be part of our documentary.
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STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
What changes have you seen regarding crime in Redbridge over recent
years?
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STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
How do these figures change regionally and in comparison to other
boroughs?
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STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
What do you believe is the cause for the increase in crime figures?
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STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
Are there any specific trends that can be seen regarding the amount
of crime in specific Redbridge region areas or a specific time of
year?
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STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)

6. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
What do statistical analysts predict for the coming year
regarding the amount of crime reported and occurring?
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STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
Thank you so much for your time.
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STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
(SHAKE HANDS)
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SCENE FOUR
EXT.BARKINGSIDE HIGH STREET, MORNING, BEN GOLDSTONE STANDS TO
INTRODUCE THE NEW SEGMENT.
BEN GOLDSTONE
(LS,MS)
I’m here today on Barkingside High Street, to ask the public about
their experiences with crime within the borough.
BEN GOLDSTONE
(VOX POPS)
Hi, we're creating a documentary on the rise in Redbridge crime,
would you mind if i asked you a few questions?
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INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
Have you been a victim of crime?
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INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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INTERVIEWEES (2)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
How did you deal with this experience?
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INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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INTERVIEWEES (2)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
What would you do and your first instinct be if you witnessed a
crime being committed?
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INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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INTERVIEWEES (2)
(MS,CU)
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(ANSWERS)
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SCENE FIVE
EXT. DAY, ON RESIDENTIAL STREET
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MILLIE WEST
(LS,MS,TRACKING, ES) Walks through street and into house
I’am about to interview another victim of a crime, that has been
increasing rapidly over the past five years, burglary.

8. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
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MILLIE WEST
(MLS,MS)Holds hand out to greet
Hi, thank you for meeting with me today.
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VICTIM
(MS)Holds hand out to greet, sits down
(ANSWERS)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
So you were a victim of a burglary.
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
When did you realise that you had been burgled?
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
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EXT.RECONSTRUCTION, NIGHT.
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MAN
(LS,MS,CCTV) Walks up to house, looks through windows, looks around,
forces door open.
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MAN
(MS,CU,LS) Piles valuables into a backpack, runs off
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MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
Wow, so you actually saw the man burgle you from your phone?
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
What happened to the burglar, was he caught?
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
Did you feel different in your home, after the crime? How did you
cope?
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
What would you say to others in the neighbourhood about burglary and
what can be done to stop it.
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VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
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(ANSWERS)
SCENE SIX
EXT.BARKINGSIDE HIGH STREET, MORNING
BEN GOLDSTONE
(VOX POPS)
Hi, we're creating a documentary on the rise in Redbridge crime,
would you mind if i asked you a few questions?
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INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)

10. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
Have you been a victim of crime?
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INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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INTERVIEWEES (4)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
How did you deal with this experience?
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INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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INTERVIEWEES (4)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
What would you do and your first instinct be if you witnessed a
crime being committed?
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INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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INTERVIEWEES (4)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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BEN GOLDSTONE

11. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
(MS/CU)
What do you believe can be done to help try and prevent crime?
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INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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INTERVIEWEES (2)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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INTERVIEWEES (4)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
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SCENE SEVEN
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EXT. WALKING DOWN ROAD, AFTERNOON
MILLIE WEST
(TRACKING, MS)
I’m on my way to a local Redbridge police station to talk to one of
the officers “ “ about the recent and dramatic increase in crime
figures, and what we can do to try and stop it.
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EXT. Outside police station
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MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
What changes have the police force seen regarding crime in recent
years?
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POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)

12. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
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MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
How have these changes impacted the local police force?
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POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
What do you believe can be done to help lower the amount of crime
occurring in Redbridge?
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POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
If you could give any advice to those who may have been subject to
becoming a victim of crime or to those who may have witnessed one,
what would you say?
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POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
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MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
Thank you so much for your time.
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POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
(SHAKE HANDS)
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SCENE EIGHT
EXT. BARKINGSIDE HIGH STREET, DAYTIME.
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS,CU, TRACK)
So there you have it, we have seen that crime is significantly on
the rise and we need to try and do everything we can to try and stop
it.

13. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
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MILLIE WEST
(TWO SHOT, MS, TRACK)
Whether that be to report any incidents that are witnessed, increase
the amount of police patrolling on the streets or simply try to
improve the connection between the police force and the public, we
must do something.
BOTH
(MS-LS)
STOP WALKING - STAND STILL
Shocking, scary and startling - What can you do to help prevent
crime?
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