Here are the corrections to the sentences: I am a boy. I am sitting in a cafe. We are writing this postcard in one of the most famous theme parks in Hong Kong. We will have a great time tomorrow. Mr Li is going sightseeing in Seoul. I will watch fireworks tonight in the Buddhist Mau Fung Memorial School. Mary is trying some local food in a famous restaurant. We are taking a boat trip in Tin Shui Wai River. Jessie is watching a concert in Hung Hom. Next time I will go to another theme park in Hong Kong, which is called Disneyland. Ron and

1. Lam Fong Ching
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Dear David
22nd February, 2011
How are you? I am now traveling with Tom in Hong Kong.
We are having a wonderful time in Ocean Park. It’s a very interesting park.
There are lots of things to do. This morning, we went to the Giant Panda
Habitat. The panda was very lovely. We rode on the roller coaster. It was
very exciting. Now, we riding a cable car. We can enjoy the seaview. Tom will
buy some souvenirs in the souvenir shop.
Then, we will went to the Grand Aquarium. We will watch the beautiful
fishes, sea stars and jellyfishes. We will take a lot of potos. Tomorrow, we
will go the bleach on Hong Kong island.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Bye for now.
Amy

2. Yeung Zi Teng 2
Dear David
22nd February, 2011
How are you? It’s a pity that you couldn’t come with us. Hong Kong is
an ace city!
I am writing this postard in one of the most famous feme parks in
Hong Kong. It’s called Ocean Park. We’re having a great time! LiLi and I
are sitting in a cafe. We are eating cheese cake. It’s my favourite food.
Wendy and Tom are outside. They are buy souvenirs. They will buy
some dolls about Wei Wei.
There are lots of things to do at Ocean Park. This morning, we watched
a panda. It’s very cute! In the afternoon, we rode the cable car and
enjoyed the seaview. Then, we will go to the Grand Aquarium. We
will watched the fishes and sea stars. See you soon. Don’t eat too
much chocolate!
Angel

3. Chow Ka Po 1
23rd February, 2011
Dear David
How are you? I am now traveling with Amy in Hong Kong! It is now 10 a.m.
on the 23rd February, 2011. We set off for Disneyland. At 3:30pm, we will
watch the Disney Palade. The palade should be fun. After we have our
afternoon tea, we will goed to Adventure Theatre at 4:30 p.m. to watch
“the Lion King Celebration”. Then we will meet some cartoon characters
like Mickey Mouse and the Princess.
After dinner, we will watch firemorks outside the Sleeping Beauty Castle.
Amy go to another theme park in Hong Kong, Ocean Park tomorrow.
Finally, I also bought a souvenir for you! I hope to hearing from you soon.
Bye!
Chow Ka Po

4. Proofreading game

5. I am a boy.

6. I am siting in a cafe.

7. We are writing this postcard in one
of the most famous theme parks in
Hong Kong.

8. We will having a great time
tomorrow.

9. Mr Li go sightseeting in Seoul.

10. I will watch fineworks tonight in
Buddhist Mau Fung Memorial
School.

11. Mary are trying some local food
in a famous restaurant.

12. We is taking a boat trip in Tin
Shui Wai River.

13. Jessie is watching a concert in
Hung Hom.

14. Next time I will go to another theme
park in Hong Kong,
which is called Disneyland.

15. Ron and John
is going scuba diving.

16. Mr Wan is shoping in
Tin Yiu Estate.

17. Wendy and I are waiting
for our foot.

18. We are staying in a hotle.

19. We are watching parades.

20. Our class is visiting a theme park.