The document contains feedback from three people on pitching a new music magazine. Person 1 suggests that a large publishing institution with money would be best suited due to their industry knowledge and contacts. They also think a glossy modern look would appeal to young adults. Person 2 thinks a bigger publication could feature big names but may not suit the target audience due to age. Person 3 believes a smaller publication could help focus on genre but may not attract audiences without sufficient money. They suggest the name "Bass" as it reflects the urban genre. The feedback provides opinions on formal vs upbeat articles, bright colors, and whether the magazine proposal brings something new or faces competition.

1. PITCH FEEDBACK
FOR MY MUSIC MAGAZINE

2. WHICH INSTITUTION WOULD BEST SUIT MY
MAGAZINE?
Person 1
Somebody with a big publishing background and has a lot of money would suit your magazine because of their
knowledge in the industry and their contacts to big bands. As you are also targeting young adults big glossy
modern product target young people.
Person 2
The bigger publication would suit your magazine because they can feature big names in your magazine and still
stick to your genre however it might no suit your target audience because their age.
Person 3
The smaller publication would help you focus on your genre however if there is not much money going into it the
target audience won't be as interested because it won't be

3. WHAT NAMES DO YOU FIND MOST SUITABLE FOR THE
MAGAZINE?
Person 1
I like bass it gives an urban feel which reflects your genre.
Person 2
I think louder sounds to much like a pop magazine or for a younger target audience I would choose bass.
Person 3
Bass I'd the suitable choice as it is relevant to your genre of main having bass guitars and instruments and
it is short and snappy like other magazines you see.

4. DO YOU LIKE THE IDEA OF HAVING UPBEAT ARTICLES
OR WOULD YOU LIKE IT TO BE MORE FORMAL?
Person 1
I like the idea that it will be upbeat the articles however I think that it should have a more formal tone to it
as this would change the magazine so it different to others.
Person 2
The target audience would suit a lively formal tone so somewhere in the middle this makes the audience
engage as it would suit their older age.
Person 3
I like the more upbeat article as it would suit your genre however the target audience wouldn't suit as it is
too young of an audience.

5. DO YOU LIKE THE IDEA OF BRIGHT VIBRANT COLOURS
Person 1
I like the idea however I don't think it would suit your genre I do think it would suit your target audience
Person 2
The bright colours would suit the audience however to bold for the genre
Person 3
The colours makes the magazine look modern which would appeal to the target audience. Yes I like the
idea.

6. DO YOU THINK THERE IS COMPETITION WITH THIS
MAGAZINE PROPOSAL? OR WILL THIS MAGAZINE
BRING SOMETHING NEW?
Person 1
The competition would be bigger magazine that have a big name for the selfs this would be hard to stand
out from however I think if you make the genre more formal there is a gap in the market.
Person 2
There is a chance to bring something new as their isn't many big magazine that suit that typical genre. The
formal tone would suit your target audience.
Person 3
There is a danger with billboard magazine as it is very similar however you are targeting it at people with
less money but keeping the classy parts of it this would make it stand out.