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We have been told that our lip syncing
needs to be improved because it is not up
to the best of standards. There are some
parts that are out of sync which doesn’t
help with the realistic view.
In the last cut we can hear the phone from
the actual room. This has to be addressed
because it is not professional. We muted
out most of the video but then the last bit is
the only piece which we struggled with but
we will look to amend it.
We have been told that there are a good
amount of cuts and that we didn’t take a
shortcut with the song. The song that we
chose doesn’t have many cuts in the first
30 seconds but we decided to go further
just so we could get a bigger variety of
cuts in there.
We have been told that the real video and
ours are not too similar. It is obviously not
up to the standards that Labyrinth's video
is up to. The way that we done it is good
compared to an amateur video. We did get
the cuts in to where we could which would
make it as similar as possible.

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Prelim feedback

  • 1.
  • 2. We have been told that our lip syncing needs to be improved because it is not up to the best of standards. There are some parts that are out of sync which doesn’t help with the realistic view.
  • 3. In the last cut we can hear the phone from the actual room. This has to be addressed because it is not professional. We muted out most of the video but then the last bit is the only piece which we struggled with but we will look to amend it.
  • 4. We have been told that there are a good amount of cuts and that we didn’t take a shortcut with the song. The song that we chose doesn’t have many cuts in the first 30 seconds but we decided to go further just so we could get a bigger variety of cuts in there.
  • 5. We have been told that the real video and ours are not too similar. It is obviously not up to the standards that Labyrinth's video is up to. The way that we done it is good compared to an amateur video. We did get the cuts in to where we could which would make it as similar as possible.