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Principles of Plain English
Plain English for Effective Proposals
2
Overview
Definition of plain English
Plain English techniques
Examples
Next steps
3
What is plain English?
Communication that your audience or
readers can understand the first
time they hear or read it.
What are the main elements of
plain English?
– Logical organization
– The active voice
– Common, everyday words
– Short sentences
– “You” and other pronouns
– Lists and tables
– Easy-to-read design features
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Why use Plain English?
We’re all busy people.
We don’t want to waste a lot of
time trying to translate difficult,
wordy documents.
And when we go to the web, we
want to scan, not read.
6
Why use plain English?
To make your
message stand out
7
Why use plain English?
Plain English:
Shows customer focus
Communicates effectively
Eliminates barriers
Reduces time spent explaining
Improves compliance
8
Goals of Plain English
• Help the reader find the information
• Help the reader understand the
information
Remember: If your document
doesn’t do both, it’s not plain
language.
9
Identify your audience
Think of why the user needs to read your document
Keep in mind the average user's level of technical
expertise
Write to everyone who is interested, not just to experts
(focus on the 90 percent of readers in the middle of the
spectrum)
Even an expert will prefer a clearly written document
10
Focus outward--on the reader
 NOT…  BUT…
What do I want to say? What does the audience need to
know?
How can I protect my interests? How can I serve the audience’s
interests?
What can I do to impress you? What can I clearly express to the
audience?
11
Coast Guard Boating
Information
CO Detector Update:
The Coast Guard has conducted an investigation to
determine what carbon monoxide (CO) detection
devices are available to recreational boaters, such
that, when installed and activated could reduce the
risk of being exposed to high levels of CO -THAT
SILENT KILLER. A variety of technologies is available
for detecting the presence of CO on boats and should
be considered by recreational boaters to reduce their
risk of injury or death while boating.
(72 words)
12
Coast Guard Boating
Information
Carbon monoxide is a silent killer. The
Coast Guard recommends that you use a
carbon monoxide detection device on your
boat to reduce the risk of being exposed to
high levels of CO. You may choose from
a variety of devices. (39 words)

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Plain principles for proposals

  • 1. 1 Principles of Plain English Plain English for Effective Proposals
  • 2. 2 Overview Definition of plain English Plain English techniques Examples Next steps
  • 3. 3 What is plain English? Communication that your audience or readers can understand the first time they hear or read it.
  • 4. What are the main elements of plain English? – Logical organization – The active voice – Common, everyday words – Short sentences – “You” and other pronouns – Lists and tables – Easy-to-read design features 4
  • 5. 5 Why use Plain English? We’re all busy people. We don’t want to waste a lot of time trying to translate difficult, wordy documents. And when we go to the web, we want to scan, not read.
  • 6. 6 Why use plain English? To make your message stand out
  • 7. 7 Why use plain English? Plain English: Shows customer focus Communicates effectively Eliminates barriers Reduces time spent explaining Improves compliance
  • 8. 8 Goals of Plain English • Help the reader find the information • Help the reader understand the information Remember: If your document doesn’t do both, it’s not plain language.
  • 9. 9 Identify your audience Think of why the user needs to read your document Keep in mind the average user's level of technical expertise Write to everyone who is interested, not just to experts (focus on the 90 percent of readers in the middle of the spectrum) Even an expert will prefer a clearly written document
  • 10. 10 Focus outward--on the reader  NOT…  BUT… What do I want to say? What does the audience need to know? How can I protect my interests? How can I serve the audience’s interests? What can I do to impress you? What can I clearly express to the audience?
  • 11. 11 Coast Guard Boating Information CO Detector Update: The Coast Guard has conducted an investigation to determine what carbon monoxide (CO) detection devices are available to recreational boaters, such that, when installed and activated could reduce the risk of being exposed to high levels of CO -THAT SILENT KILLER. A variety of technologies is available for detecting the presence of CO on boats and should be considered by recreational boaters to reduce their risk of injury or death while boating. (72 words)
  • 12. 12 Coast Guard Boating Information Carbon monoxide is a silent killer. The Coast Guard recommends that you use a carbon monoxide detection device on your boat to reduce the risk of being exposed to high levels of CO. You may choose from a variety of devices. (39 words)