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Something people said about my pitch
was that they think it will probably be
achievable, I agree with this since I kept
it simple yet effective however there
could be too much going on. I agree that
my pitch could have had more info
however I wanted to keep it simple so I
didn’t over complicate it for myself
something I learned from this feedback is that I have
definitely aimed my advert at the target audience which
is very good considering the whole purpose of the advert
is to have it aimed at a certain audience, for example if
the audience was aimed at older people and I put things
that related more to teens it wouldn’t work since it would
be aimed to the wrong audience
Something I learned I can improve on is I could be more
prepared and have more detail in my pitch, this would
help people get a better idea of what I want my advert to
be like. I also think I should spend more time on my pitch
and add more evidence of how I know what I want to do
to make it stronger
The majority of people said that they
think my pitch will be successful, I think
the main reason people voted maybe
was because I didn’t put too much effort
into the pitch. I think my advery could be
successful I just need to focus on time
and concentrate more.

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Pitch feedback

  • 2. Something people said about my pitch was that they think it will probably be achievable, I agree with this since I kept it simple yet effective however there could be too much going on. I agree that my pitch could have had more info however I wanted to keep it simple so I didn’t over complicate it for myself
  • 3. something I learned from this feedback is that I have definitely aimed my advert at the target audience which is very good considering the whole purpose of the advert is to have it aimed at a certain audience, for example if the audience was aimed at older people and I put things that related more to teens it wouldn’t work since it would be aimed to the wrong audience Something I learned I can improve on is I could be more prepared and have more detail in my pitch, this would help people get a better idea of what I want my advert to be like. I also think I should spend more time on my pitch and add more evidence of how I know what I want to do to make it stronger
  • 4. The majority of people said that they think my pitch will be successful, I think the main reason people voted maybe was because I didn’t put too much effort into the pitch. I think my advery could be successful I just need to focus on time and concentrate more.