Unit 30 LO5 written report of graphs

1. I completely
understood the
content
83%
I understood
some of the
content
17%
I did not
understand the
content at all
0%
How well did you understandthe
content within the presentation?
Survey Monkey results
Candidate Name: Carmel Seager
Candidate Number: 4127
After my pitch I sent a survey to the publisher and the audience so that I could receive some feedback. The
questions I included in the survey varied from multiple choices to asking for opinions. These results have
helped me to see how successful my pitch was. This survey has also helped me to pick out the strengths
and weaknesses of my pitch, along with the feedback from my witness statements.
1. How well did you understand the content within the presentation?
As seeninthe pie chart above there wasnoone who saidtheydidn’tunderstandthe contentatall.The resultcame
back that mostpeople understoodall the content;thisisgoodasit meansI wassuccessful atexplainingmycontent
and displayedthe contentwell. There are asmall percentage of people whosaidtheyunderstoodsomeof the
content,thiscouldbe the resultof not explainingsome topicsindepth. Overall,Ithinkthisshows thatthe majority
of contentwasexplainedandpresentedwell,althoughthere isstill roomforsome improvementinorderformy
audience tofullycomprehendthe wholeof mypresentation. FurtherresearchthatI couldconductto findoutwhich
parts people struggledwithisinterviewsorsimplysendingoutanothersurvey.

2. 0
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4
6
8
10
12
14
Yes No
Was the presentation of the content
suitable? If not why?
Yes
67%
No
33%
Was there any more informationthat
could have been added to the
presentation?
Was the presentation of the content suitable? If not why?
Thisnextquestionhelpedme tounderstandif the contentwasappropriate andif the reasonof misunderstanding
was because the contentwasnotsuitable forthe pitch.Bylookingatthe resultsof thisquestionIhave come tothe
conclusionthatthiswasnot the case as I receivedresultstosaythat everyone thoughtthe content wassuitable. This
isone of the strengthsof my pitchas it showsthatall the contentthatwas presentedwascorrectandI was not
wastinganytime talkingaboutthingsthatdidnot needtobe said.
2. Was there any more information that could have been added to the presentation?
The resultof this questionshowsthatthiswasa weaknessof mypresentationasthe audience/publisherbelieved
that there shouldhave beenmore informationwithinmypresentation.There wasnocommentstosaywhat
informationshouldhave beenadded,butIbelievethatIdidnot explainall mypointsvocallywhichcouldhave
resultedinmore informationneededtobe addedintomypresentation. Tofindoutif thisisthe case I couldconduct
some more researchto findout what informationcouldhave beenadded.The type of researchthatIwouldconduct
isan interviewwiththe publisher orsendinganothersurveyout.

3. 0
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
1/5 2/5 3/5 4/5 5/5
How would you rate the presentation
overall?
3. How would you rate the presentation overall?
The resultof my ratingsshowsthat I had some improvementsthatcouldhave beenmade butthe pitchwasat a
goodstandard overall.IampleasedwiththisresultasitshowsI successfullypitchedmymagazine ideatothe
publisherwithout anylarge faults.
5. Do you have any other comments, questions, or concerns?
The last question helpedtosee where Icouldmake improvementstomypitch,the mainimprovementsaddressed
was eye contactand the volume of speech.If Iwas to pitch againthiscouldbe easilyimproved asIwouldneedto
presentitbetter.AnotherimprovementthatIhave noticedfromthese commentsandquestionsisIneedtoexplain
all my contentclearly,asI didnotgo intodepthabout the simple pointssuchasthe price of the magazine for
example.
In conclusion fromlookingatthe resultsof my SurveyMonkeyIcan see that my pitchwassuccessful withportraying
my ideaof a magazine tothe publisher.Althoughthere are some roomforimprovementsthatcouldhave been
made I am satisfiedwiththe resultsIhave received.
Well done atkeepingcalmwhenaskedthe questionsatthe end.
Well done - Make sure your final editsare the final editsaswell (forexample the frontcover)
You needtobe more persuasive andmake more eye contactwiththe audience.
Nice one!!!
Excellentpitch - all aspectscovered - well played,Carmel:)
Perhapsspeaklookingatthe audience abitmore and a bit louder
Speaklouderbecause Iwasstrugglingtohear
Notsure how much the magazine is?