Holding a part-time job while studying can disrupt a student's studies in three main ways: 1) It causes stress as students must juggle schoolwork and job responsibilities which mixes problems from both. The stress lacks energy and harms study spirit. 2) It makes students lose focus on their studies as they have to divide attention between work and school instead of focusing solely on studies. 3) It leaves less time for students to study and prepare for exams as packed schedules at work and school leave no extra time for academic activities. While some can manage both, most students lack time management skills to avoid disrupting their studies.

1. MUET EXTENDED
WRITING
Amirul Hakim
Nur Farahin
Amir Akmal
Kanageshwari
Jevinya

2. QUESTION 7 :
“HOLDING A PART-TIME JOB WHILE
STUDYING DISTRUPTS A STUDENT’S
STUDIES”
WHAT IS YOUR VIEW ? YOU SHOULD WRITE
AT LEAST 350 WORDS
In my view, I totally agree with the
statement

3. INTRODUCTION
 It is true that youngsters nowadays are
independent .
 With excuse to gain experience , improve their
potential and money to fulfil their desires , they
go for a part-time job while studying .
 Some people manage to handle both studies
and work but most people are not capable to
do it .
 This is why , I strongly believe that holding a
part-time job while studying disrupts a
student’s studies .

4. YES , A PART-TIME JOB CAN BE DISTRUPTING
BECAUSE OF,
Stress
Lost focus
Less time to study

5. FORMAT
Key point
Main reason 1 (WHY)
Main reason 2 (HOW)
Examples
Strong statement

6. STRESS
 First and foremost – part time job can disrupts a
student’s studies due to stress .
 Going to school or class by day and having a part-
time job by night can stress out people especially a
student .
 Mixing problems at school and working place can
cause students to stress
 For example :
At school – the teachers are pushing on homework
, presentations and exams .
At working place – the managers or boss are
burdening with hardwork , get scolded and tight
with regulations
o Students who rarely know how to handle their
stress can disrupt their studies’ spirit by the
lack of energy .

7. LOST FOCUS
 Besides that, a part-time job is disturbing
because it makes students lose their focus in
studies .
 Having a part-time job can cause student to
forget the importance of focusing in studies
 Where can they focus on one thing at a time if
they had to focus two things at a time .
 Take for example , during examination weeks ,
they are still satisfied with at least excel in
exam by instead of they can do better and excel
well in exam without having a part-time job .
 Most students are blinded by money that cause
their focus have turn to their job .

8. LESS TIME TO STUDY
 In addition , a part-time job can also disrupts one’s
studies as they have less time to study .
 Students do not have extra or even enough
time to study and make revision on their own
for schools or exams.
 Too packed schedules and receiving many
tasks at working place and school happens all the
time for being a worker and student at the same
time
 For example , when one’s schedule is too pack they
are tired and when they are tired they choose to
rest more than doing brainy activities.
 So , I can conclude that most students are lack of
time management skills .

9. IN CONCLUSION ,
 I strongly agree with the statement that
holding a part-time job while studying disrupts a
student’s studies .
 Every student has the right to make their
decision on having a part-time job .
 However , they also have to consider on a few
things about if they are really responsible people
and have the capabilities to manage it well by
mentally and physically ready .
 Only by that , students are allowed to have a
part-time job but still are not recommended .