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Candidate Name: Thomas McEnaney
Candidate Number: 4096
Center: St. Andrew’s Catholic School
Center Number: 64135
OCR –
Level 3 Cambridge Introductory Diploma in Media
Unit 13:
UK Media Publishing
Witness Statement Feedback
Witness Statement Feedback
On the EBI on my witness
statement the front cover font
styles had to be more specific and
relate to the genre of my magazine
more. To make sure that I had
done this I changed my front cover
(Top image 1st and 2nd drafts image
below final copy) which is now
more fitted to the genre of the
magazine and more professional
finish to the magazine
Witness Statement Feedback
 Following on from the previous improvement I have
also adjusted another of my Even Better If changes
to proof read all work fully with no mistakes on my
competitors slide I accidently had an ‘i’ instead of I.
See amendment below.
Changes
This is the first change I made from my original first draft to my final front cover. As you can see the left hand
side of the page has been transformed to more text from the interview as well as the date of the issue being
moved in front of layers so that readers can see it clearly.
The second change I made was to have the image in the middle of the page instead
of the conventional half page as I wanted to share much more of the interview and
this was the only way I could do that. I also added a watermark to my work with
the eye of the artist being the text.
Changes
Following on another change I made to my magazine double page spread
was the use of a drop capital. Before I had just made the letter a larger font
number instead of creating a text box and matching the font style to the
headline.
Furthermore I had to change the pull quote in my double page spread
because the sentence was not exactly the same in the interview and had to
change this because it could mislead readers so I changed it to the exact
quote.
Changes
Following on another change I made to my magazine double page spread
was the use of a drop capital. Before I had just made the letter a larger font
number instead of creating a text box and matching the font style to the
headline.
Furthermore I had to change the pull quote in my double page spread
because the sentence was not exactly the same in the interview and had to
change this because it could mislead readers so I changed it to the exact
quote.

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LO4 U13

  • 1. Candidate Name: Thomas McEnaney Candidate Number: 4096 Center: St. Andrew’s Catholic School Center Number: 64135 OCR – Level 3 Cambridge Introductory Diploma in Media Unit 13: UK Media Publishing
  • 3. Witness Statement Feedback On the EBI on my witness statement the front cover font styles had to be more specific and relate to the genre of my magazine more. To make sure that I had done this I changed my front cover (Top image 1st and 2nd drafts image below final copy) which is now more fitted to the genre of the magazine and more professional finish to the magazine
  • 4. Witness Statement Feedback  Following on from the previous improvement I have also adjusted another of my Even Better If changes to proof read all work fully with no mistakes on my competitors slide I accidently had an ‘i’ instead of I. See amendment below.
  • 5. Changes This is the first change I made from my original first draft to my final front cover. As you can see the left hand side of the page has been transformed to more text from the interview as well as the date of the issue being moved in front of layers so that readers can see it clearly. The second change I made was to have the image in the middle of the page instead of the conventional half page as I wanted to share much more of the interview and this was the only way I could do that. I also added a watermark to my work with the eye of the artist being the text.
  • 6. Changes Following on another change I made to my magazine double page spread was the use of a drop capital. Before I had just made the letter a larger font number instead of creating a text box and matching the font style to the headline. Furthermore I had to change the pull quote in my double page spread because the sentence was not exactly the same in the interview and had to change this because it could mislead readers so I changed it to the exact quote.
  • 7. Changes Following on another change I made to my magazine double page spread was the use of a drop capital. Before I had just made the letter a larger font number instead of creating a text box and matching the font style to the headline. Furthermore I had to change the pull quote in my double page spread because the sentence was not exactly the same in the interview and had to change this because it could mislead readers so I changed it to the exact quote.