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The document discusses edits made to a double page magazine spread copy about celebrity and personal mobile phone obsessions. Small changes were made to highlight producers' and subjects' mobile phone addictions. Celebrity phone obsessions were also emphasized. Grammatical errors were corrected and content was added mentioning the filmmakers' own phone addictions. Tense was adjusted to be from the magazine's point of view rather than the filmmakers'. An expert quote was inserted to add variety and engagement with the documentary.
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The document discusses edits made to a double page magazine spread copy for a documentary. The main changes included highlighting the producers' and subjects' personal obsession with mobile phones, and correcting grammatical errors. Additional changes were made to include the filmmakers in the copy, change tenses to be from the magazine's point of view, and insert an expert quote to add variety and engagement to the documentary's double page spread.
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The document summarizes two meetings with a client. In the first meeting, the client pointed out formatting errors in the script including incorrect stage directions and capitalization of character names. After fixing these errors, a second meeting went better and the client said the script was nearly finalized with just minor revisions needed like adding scene numbers and revising descriptions.
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The client provided feedback on the story, suggesting changes to make the language more understandable. The author made revisions like changing vague words and adding context for dialogue and locations. They believe the updated script now meets the client's expectations and industry standards.
In a SWOT analysis, the author identifies their creative thinking and fast work as strengths. Their second language poses weaknesses and opportunities for improvement. Potential threats include parts of the script still sounding unnatural in English.
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In the first meeting, the client highlighted formatting errors in the product that needed to be fixed. Another meeting would be scheduled after fixing the errors, and the client was otherwise happy with the potential of the product. In the second meeting, all errors were fixed, with just minor additions and changes still needed to complete the nearly final script. This was likely the last meeting needed before completing the script.
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The document summarizes two meetings with a client. In the first meeting, the client pointed out formatting errors in the script including incorrect stage directions and capitalization of character names. After fixing these errors, a second meeting went better and the client said the script was nearly finalized with just minor revisions needed like adding scene numbers and revising descriptions.
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◇在校期间，因各种原因未能顺利毕业……拿不到官方毕业证【q/微741003700】
◇面对父母的压力，希望尽快拿到；
◇不清楚认证流程以及材料该如何准备；
◇回国时间很长，忘记办理；
◇回国马上就要找工作，办给用人单位看；
◇企事业单位必须要求办理的
◇需要报考公务员、购买免税车、落转户口
◇申请留学生创业基金
留信网认证的作用:
1:该专业认证可证明留学生真实身份
2:同时对留学生所学专业登记给予评定
3:国家专业人才认证中心颁发入库证书
4:这个认证书并且可以归档倒地方
5:凡事获得留信网入网的信息将会逐步更新到个人身份内，将在公安局网内查询个人身份证信息后，同步读取人才网入库信息
6:个人职称评审加20分
7:个人信誉贷款加10分
8:在国家人才网主办的国家网络招聘大会中纳入资料，供国家高端企业选择人才
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校名:学校英文全称
授予学位：本部分将注明获得的具体学位名称。
毕业生姓名：这是最重要的信息之一，标志着该证书是由特定人员获得的。
颁发日期：这是毕业正式生效的时间，也代表着毕业生学业的结束。
其他信息：根据不同的专业和学位，可能会有一些特定的信息或章节。
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2:同时对留学生所学专业登记给予评定
3:国家专业人才认证中心颁发入库证书
4:这个认证书并且可以归档倒地方
5:凡事获得留信网入网的信息将会逐步更新到个人身份内，将在公安局网内查询个人身份证信息后，同步读取人才网入库信息
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7:个人信誉贷款加10分
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留信网认证的作用:
1:该专业认证可证明留学生真实身份
2:同时对留学生所学专业登记给予评定
3:国家专业人才认证中心颁发入库证书
4:这个认证书并且可以归档倒地方
5:凡事获得留信网入网的信息将会逐步更新到个人身份内，将在公安局网内查询个人身份证信息后，同步读取人才网入库信息
6:个人职称评审加20分
7:个人信誉贷款加10分
8:在国家人才网主办的国家网络招聘大会中纳入资料，供国家高端企业选择人才
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如果您处于以下几种情况：
◇在校期间，因各种原因未能顺利毕业……拿不到官方毕业证【微bwp0011】
◇面对父母的压力，希望尽快拿到；
◇不清楚认证流程以及材料该如何准备；
◇回国时间很长，忘记办理；
◇回国马上就要找工作，办给用人单位看；
◇企事业单位必须要求办理的
◇需要报考公务员、购买免税车、落转户口
◇申请留学生创业基金
留信网认证的作用:
1:该专业认证可证明留学生真实身份
2:同时对留学生所学专业登记给予评定
3:国家专业人才认证中心颁发入库证书
4:这个认证书并且可以归档倒地方
5:凡事获得留信网入网的信息将会逐步更新到个人身份内，将在公安局网内查询个人身份证信息后，同步读取人才网入库信息
6:个人职称评审加20分
7:个人信誉贷款加10分
8:在国家人才网主办的国家网络招聘大会中纳入资料，供国家高端企业选择人才
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In the intricate tapestry of life, connections serve as the vibrant threads that weave together opportunities, experiences, and growth. Whether in personal or professional spheres, the ability to forge meaningful connections opens doors to a multitude of possibilities, propelling individuals toward success and fulfillment.
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二、回国进私企、外企、自己做生意的情况，这些单位是不查询毕业证真伪的，而且国内没有渠道去查询国外文凭的真假，也不需要提供真实教育部认证。鉴于此，办理一份毕业证【微信176555708】即可
三、进国企，银行，事业单位，考公务员等等，这些单位是必需要提供真实教育部认证的，办理教育部认证所需资料众多且烦琐，所有材料您都必须提供原件，我们凭借丰富的经验，快捷的绿色通道帮您快速整合材料，让您少走弯路。
留信网认证的作用:
1:该专业认证可证明留学生真实身份
2:同时对留学生所学专业登记给予评定
3:国家专业人才认证中心颁发入库证书
4:这个认证书并且可以归档倒地方
5:凡事获得留信网入网的信息将会逐步更新到个人身份内，将在公安局网内查询个人身份证信息后，同步读取人才网入库信息
6:个人职称评审加20分
7:个人信誉贷款加10分
8:在国家人才网主办的国家网络招聘大会中纳入资料，供国家高端企业选择人才
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我们所定的价格是非常合理的，而且我们现在做得单子大多数都是代理和回头客户介绍的所以一般现在有新的单子 我给客户的都是第一手的代理价格，因为我想坦诚对待大家 不想跟大家在价格方面浪费时间
对于老客户或者被老客户介绍过来的朋友，我们都会适当给一些优惠。
选择实体注册公司办理，更放心，更安全！我们的承诺：客户在留信官方认证查询网站查询到认证通过结果后付款，不成功不收费！
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Are you interested to know what actions help in a job search? This webinar is the summary of several individuals who discussed their job search journey for others to follow. You will learn there are common actions that helped them succeed in their quest for gainful employment.
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2:同时对留学生所学专业登记给予评定
3:国家专业人才认证中心颁发入库证书
4:这个认证书并且可以归档倒地方
5:凡事获得留信网入网的信息将会逐步更新到个人身份内，将在公安局网内查询个人身份证信息后，同步读取人才网入库信息
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Analyising and editing article copy
- 1. Here I only made small changes to the opening paragraph of our double page spread copy; the main change I made was highlighting the fact that we as producers and subjects have a personal mobile phone obsession.
- 2. Here the only changes which have been made are surrounding the obsession of mobile phones with celebrities.
- 3. In this part of our copy I have inserted, edited and changed a number of things. I have included ourselves into the copy and talked about how we are obsessed I also corrected grammatical mistakes and I changed the end part as it didn’t make sense.
- 4. Here I have had to change the tense the copy was written in, it had been written as if we, the filmmakers wrote it whereas it needs to be written from the magazines point of view.
- 5. Here I inserted a quote from one of our experts as it gives the copy for our double page spread more variety and engages more with the documentary.