This document contains Sung-Jin's evaluation notes for David's speech. It includes sections to note the speech title, date, objectives, and criteria for evaluating David's posture, gestures, body movements, facial expressions and eye contact. Sung-Jin provides positive feedback on David's opening, body structure, appearance and ending. Two recommendations are made to further improve future speeches with examples and reasons. The summary concludes that David's speech was commendable but could be enhanced by the recommendations.

1. Sung-Jin’s Note on Evaluation for David’s Speech
1. Speech Title:
2. Date:
3. Time Taken: (outof 5-to-7minutes)
4. Objectives of Speech:
Use stance,movement,gestures,facial expressionsandeye contactto expressyourmessage and
achieve yourspeech’spurpose,“YourBodySpeaks”;Make your bodylanguage smoothandnatural.
5. Evaluation Criteria
POSTURE:
nervous/uneasy  poised
uncertain  confident
uncomfortable  comfortable
slouching  erect
stiff  relaxed
GESTURES:
artificial /wooden  natural / spontaneous
random  meaningful
passive  lively
furtive (=seemingtokeepsomethingsecretorhidden)  expansive
vague  precise
detractedfromverbal message enhancedverbal message
BODY MOVEMENTS
lifeless/dull  fluid/animated
awkward  graceful
random  purposeful
drewattentionawayfromspeech enhancedattentivenesstospeech
FACIAL EXPRESSIONS
deadpan(= appearingtobe seriousandhidingthe factthat you’re joking) animated
unfriendly  friendly
artificial  natural / genuine
incongruent(=not fittogetherwell)  appropriate tospeechcontent
EYE CONTACT
forced / artificial  natural / smooth
followedsetpattern  no setpattern
didnot establishvisual bonds establishedbondswithlisteners

2. Sung-Jin’s Note on Evaluation for David’s Speech
6. Noteson Evaluation
1) It’sa pleasure toevaluate David’sspeechabout_________________________________________.
2) I rememberhis opening because:(immediate engaging/interesting)
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The body structure was:(easyto follow andunderstand,andwell-constructed)
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3) From myseat he:(approach,position,personal appearance,facial expression,gestures,detracting
mannerisms)
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4) He ended strongly by:(reinforcing,climactic)
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5) I have two recommendations thatDavidmightthinkaboutthatwouldmake hisfuturespeeches
even better.
 Recommendation1
- What?
- Alternativeexample!
- Why?
 Recommendation2
- What?
- Alternativeexample!
- Why?
6) In summary,here isa speechthatDavid commended well:
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7) It couldhave beenimprovedby recommendations:
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8) However,it worked becauseDavid
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