Deciphering the writing
task 2
band descriptors
MAHDI MODARRES
AIMS OF THE SESSION
 To enable the teachers to appropriately reshape their focus of instruction in
writing task 2 for band scores 4, 5, 6.
 Present to the teachers a short list of activities that can be combined with
writing class activities or homework.
Writing task 2 topic:
 A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a
self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without
the assistance of a teacher students often find it difficult to manage
their studies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge and example.
Write at least 250 words.
Now grade the papers
Assessment Criteria and the types of
scoring
 Task response
 Coherence and Cohesion
 Lexical resource
 Grammatical range and accuracy
 Impression scoring
 Text-based evaluation
 Rubric-based evaluation
Scoring types
 Impression scoring:
Examiners impose their view to the text and the band descriptors
 Text-based evaluation:
A quick impression and assigning a grade
 Rubric-based evaluation:
Read the rubric first before assigning a grade
Task response
 Position
 Idea
 Task (be on topic [the keywords in a topic] and write
about what you should [i.e. agree/disagree, discussion,
questions etc.])
Task response from 3 to 4
Band score 3
 No adequate task response (below
160 words)
 Too few keywords from the topic
 Writer’s position is not clear at all
Band score 4
 Some keywords from the topic are
missing.
 There is a position (I believe, I
think) but it does not make any
sense
 Some main ideas but very low in
quality or relevance
Task response from 4 to 5
Band score 4
 Some keywords from the topic are
missing.
 There is a position (I believe, I
think) but it does not make any
sense
 Some main ideas but very low in
quality or relevance
Band score 5
 One or a few of the keywords are
missing (especially in the
introduction)
 Position is not so clear
 Writing is not complete (conclusion
is missing)
Task response from 5 to 6
Band score 5
 One or a few of the keywords are
missing (especially in the
introduction)
 Position is not so clear
 Writing is not complete (conclusion
is missing)
Band score 6
 All the keywords are there (even if
mentioned once throughout the
text)
 There is a position and all the
ideas are understandable to a
native speaker even though
remotely or in a confusing way.
Task response in 7
 All the keywords are there
 A clear position in each paragraph
 Main ideas are fairly clear
Coherence and cohesion
Coherence (72%)
 Logic in organization and
progression, semantic links
between ideas
 The flow, fluency and overall
clarity of the text
 paragraphing
Cohesion (28%)
 Explicit discourse markers
 Reference
(Cotton and Willson, 2011, IELTS
Research Report)
Moving from 3 to 4 in CC
Band score 3
 No logical organization
 Few Linkers
Band score 4
 Ideas are presented through
writing
 No clear progression or
arrangement
 Some linkers
Moving form 4 to 5
Band score 4
 Ideas are presented through
writing
 No clear progression or
arrangement
 One or two linkers
Band score 5
 Some organization and progression
but not clear
 Cohesive devices are there but not
used appropriately
 Paragraphing is weak or absent
 It, he, she….. References are not
clear
Moving from 5 to 6
Band score 5
 Some organization and progression
but not clear
 Cohesive devices are there but not
used appropriately
 Paragraphing is weak or absent
 It, he, she….. References are not
clear
Band score 6
 All the ideas are coherent and
progression is clear form
introduction to conclusion
 Cohesion (linkers, reference etc.)
is not so effective inside each
paragraph, though coherence is
fine from one paragraph to the
next
CC in 7
 Logic is well developed, each sentence
contributes to the whole meaning
Lexical resources
The Keywords
 Precision
 Flexibility
 Less common lexical items/collocation
 Accurate word formation
Lexical resource
Keywords 3 4 5 6
Precision and
flexibility
--- ---- ----
Slight
attempts
Range of
vocabulary
Very limited Basic
vocabulary for
the task
Almost enough
to express
ideas
Just OK to
express
intended
meaning
Less common
lexis/
collocation
--- --- ---
To some
extent
Accurate word
formation
Very limited Limited
control
Some errors
which affect
meaning
Is OK
Grammatical range and accuracy
Keywords
 Grammar control
 Variety of structures
 Punctuation
25
38 38
40
25
30
50
40
10
55
43
3
TR & CC LR GRA
The Focus in instruction in WT2
Out of 100%
band 4 band 5 band 6 band 7
Extensive reading with the focus on
 The content so it helps learners with developing logic and idea progression.
 The choice of vocabulary
 The linkers and paragraph development (building back a paragraph)
Writing practice from reading by Pualin Cullen:
Some writing grading practice
IELTS writing task 2 (deciphering the band descriptors codes)

IELTS writing task 2 (deciphering the band descriptors codes)

  • 1.
    Deciphering the writing task2 band descriptors MAHDI MODARRES
  • 2.
    AIMS OF THESESSION  To enable the teachers to appropriately reshape their focus of instruction in writing task 2 for band scores 4, 5, 6.  Present to the teachers a short list of activities that can be combined with writing class activities or homework.
  • 3.
    Writing task 2topic:  A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher students often find it difficult to manage their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and example. Write at least 250 words.
  • 4.
  • 5.
    Assessment Criteria andthe types of scoring  Task response  Coherence and Cohesion  Lexical resource  Grammatical range and accuracy  Impression scoring  Text-based evaluation  Rubric-based evaluation
  • 6.
    Scoring types  Impressionscoring: Examiners impose their view to the text and the band descriptors  Text-based evaluation: A quick impression and assigning a grade  Rubric-based evaluation: Read the rubric first before assigning a grade
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    Task response  Position Idea  Task (be on topic [the keywords in a topic] and write about what you should [i.e. agree/disagree, discussion, questions etc.])
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    Task response from3 to 4 Band score 3  No adequate task response (below 160 words)  Too few keywords from the topic  Writer’s position is not clear at all Band score 4  Some keywords from the topic are missing.  There is a position (I believe, I think) but it does not make any sense  Some main ideas but very low in quality or relevance
  • 9.
    Task response from4 to 5 Band score 4  Some keywords from the topic are missing.  There is a position (I believe, I think) but it does not make any sense  Some main ideas but very low in quality or relevance Band score 5  One or a few of the keywords are missing (especially in the introduction)  Position is not so clear  Writing is not complete (conclusion is missing)
  • 10.
    Task response from5 to 6 Band score 5  One or a few of the keywords are missing (especially in the introduction)  Position is not so clear  Writing is not complete (conclusion is missing) Band score 6  All the keywords are there (even if mentioned once throughout the text)  There is a position and all the ideas are understandable to a native speaker even though remotely or in a confusing way.
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    Task response in7  All the keywords are there  A clear position in each paragraph  Main ideas are fairly clear
  • 12.
    Coherence and cohesion Coherence(72%)  Logic in organization and progression, semantic links between ideas  The flow, fluency and overall clarity of the text  paragraphing Cohesion (28%)  Explicit discourse markers  Reference (Cotton and Willson, 2011, IELTS Research Report)
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    Moving from 3to 4 in CC Band score 3  No logical organization  Few Linkers Band score 4  Ideas are presented through writing  No clear progression or arrangement  Some linkers
  • 14.
    Moving form 4to 5 Band score 4  Ideas are presented through writing  No clear progression or arrangement  One or two linkers Band score 5  Some organization and progression but not clear  Cohesive devices are there but not used appropriately  Paragraphing is weak or absent  It, he, she….. References are not clear
  • 15.
    Moving from 5to 6 Band score 5  Some organization and progression but not clear  Cohesive devices are there but not used appropriately  Paragraphing is weak or absent  It, he, she….. References are not clear Band score 6  All the ideas are coherent and progression is clear form introduction to conclusion  Cohesion (linkers, reference etc.) is not so effective inside each paragraph, though coherence is fine from one paragraph to the next
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    CC in 7 Logic is well developed, each sentence contributes to the whole meaning
  • 17.
    Lexical resources The Keywords Precision  Flexibility  Less common lexical items/collocation  Accurate word formation
  • 18.
    Lexical resource Keywords 34 5 6 Precision and flexibility --- ---- ---- Slight attempts Range of vocabulary Very limited Basic vocabulary for the task Almost enough to express ideas Just OK to express intended meaning Less common lexis/ collocation --- --- --- To some extent Accurate word formation Very limited Limited control Some errors which affect meaning Is OK
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    Grammatical range andaccuracy Keywords  Grammar control  Variety of structures  Punctuation
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    25 38 38 40 25 30 50 40 10 55 43 3 TR &CC LR GRA The Focus in instruction in WT2 Out of 100% band 4 band 5 band 6 band 7
  • 22.
    Extensive reading withthe focus on  The content so it helps learners with developing logic and idea progression.  The choice of vocabulary  The linkers and paragraph development (building back a paragraph)
  • 23.
    Writing practice fromreading by Pualin Cullen:
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