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IELTS Writing Correction and
Feedback
Getting your IELTS writing corrected by a professional is one of the effective
ways to improve your writing. I will check your writing and give you
feedback on errors and ways to improve your writing. My correction service
includes task 2 essays, task 1 academic reports, and task1 general
letters. Receive valuable feedback on your mistakes from an IELTS
examiner.
Question
Although many benefits may result from space
exploration, the costs involved are enormous.
There is some debate as to whether this money
could be more wisely spent to provide for the basic
needs of mankind such as food, clean water, and
housing.
To what extent do you agree?
Student's Answer:
1. Feedback from IELTS examiner
Criteria Grade Feedback
Task
response
6
Well structured and addresses all parts of the question.
Arguments relate well to the question. Logical conclusion based on
arguments. However,
Over 350 words, write less and use the extra time to check your answer
Cohesion
and
coherence
6
Wide range of connectors used: furthermore, in addition etc.
Clear progression of argument. However, the high frequency of errors
with language interferes with the coherence
Vocabulary 5
Some level 7 words like:phenomenon,nethertheless, but frequent errors
with word choices (e.g. “emergent”)
Many errors with verb endings
Grammar 5
Too many short simple sentences
Confusion of singular and plural
Errors with articles, especially missing out “the”
overall 5.5
You have good arguments to support your point of view and your essay
is well structured.
Some use of high level vocabulary. Nethertheless, High frequency of
grammatical and lexical error limit the quality of your response.
Suggested Next Steps:
1. Grammar is a serious issue, you need to work on singular/plural, articles,
and verb endings. I suggest you go tomy grammar page.
2. Work on connecting more of your simple sentences together to create
more compound and complex sentences. An excellent site that explains
sentence parts and allows you to do practice quizzes is
athttp://esl.about.com/od/intermediatewriting/a/cplex_sentence.htm
2. Getting your IELTS writing checked
If you are interested in having me check your IELTS writing you can go
to website: www.IELTSanswers.com
More detailed information of how this works.
http://www.ieltsanswers.com/writing-correction-ielts.html
3. Process for correction
1. Make a payment for my correction. Four tasks for $30
2. Email me your writing task. This can be in the following formats: ms-
word, pdf, photo of a handwritten task. I suggest you send your tasks one at
a time, so that you can use the feedback from each task to improve the
subsequent task.
examiner@ieltsanswers.com
3. Choosing Tasks. You can select your own task questions or choose
them using the links below:
Task 1 Academic
Task 1 General
Task 2 Essay Topics
4. Writing your task: When you do a practice test I suggest you time
yourself - 1 hour for the whole writing exam or 40 minutes for an essay and
20 minutes for a Task 1. Part of the reason for doing practice writing tests is
to push yourself to complete the task within the required time.
5. I will usually send back your task with corrections and feedback within 24
hours.
6. Review your essay and you are welcome to ask questions if anything is
unclear.
4. How I will assess your essay
Your essay will be assessed against IELTS test criteria which include:
Task Response: How well did you meet the task requirements
Coherence and Cohesion: the structure and ease of understanding your
response
Lexical Resource: The level of vocabulary and errors in word choice or form
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: The frequency of grammatical errors and
the range of sentence types used.

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Ielts writing correction

  • 1. IELTS Writing Correction and Feedback Getting your IELTS writing corrected by a professional is one of the effective ways to improve your writing. I will check your writing and give you feedback on errors and ways to improve your writing. My correction service includes task 2 essays, task 1 academic reports, and task1 general letters. Receive valuable feedback on your mistakes from an IELTS examiner. Question Although many benefits may result from space exploration, the costs involved are enormous. There is some debate as to whether this money could be more wisely spent to provide for the basic needs of mankind such as food, clean water, and housing. To what extent do you agree? Student's Answer:
  • 2. 1. Feedback from IELTS examiner Criteria Grade Feedback Task response 6 Well structured and addresses all parts of the question. Arguments relate well to the question. Logical conclusion based on arguments. However, Over 350 words, write less and use the extra time to check your answer Cohesion and coherence 6 Wide range of connectors used: furthermore, in addition etc. Clear progression of argument. However, the high frequency of errors with language interferes with the coherence Vocabulary 5 Some level 7 words like:phenomenon,nethertheless, but frequent errors with word choices (e.g. “emergent”) Many errors with verb endings
  • 3. Grammar 5 Too many short simple sentences Confusion of singular and plural Errors with articles, especially missing out “the” overall 5.5 You have good arguments to support your point of view and your essay is well structured. Some use of high level vocabulary. Nethertheless, High frequency of grammatical and lexical error limit the quality of your response. Suggested Next Steps: 1. Grammar is a serious issue, you need to work on singular/plural, articles, and verb endings. I suggest you go tomy grammar page. 2. Work on connecting more of your simple sentences together to create more compound and complex sentences. An excellent site that explains sentence parts and allows you to do practice quizzes is athttp://esl.about.com/od/intermediatewriting/a/cplex_sentence.htm 2. Getting your IELTS writing checked If you are interested in having me check your IELTS writing you can go to website: www.IELTSanswers.com More detailed information of how this works. http://www.ieltsanswers.com/writing-correction-ielts.html 3. Process for correction 1. Make a payment for my correction. Four tasks for $30
  • 4. 2. Email me your writing task. This can be in the following formats: ms- word, pdf, photo of a handwritten task. I suggest you send your tasks one at a time, so that you can use the feedback from each task to improve the subsequent task. examiner@ieltsanswers.com 3. Choosing Tasks. You can select your own task questions or choose them using the links below: Task 1 Academic Task 1 General Task 2 Essay Topics 4. Writing your task: When you do a practice test I suggest you time yourself - 1 hour for the whole writing exam or 40 minutes for an essay and 20 minutes for a Task 1. Part of the reason for doing practice writing tests is to push yourself to complete the task within the required time. 5. I will usually send back your task with corrections and feedback within 24 hours. 6. Review your essay and you are welcome to ask questions if anything is unclear. 4. How I will assess your essay
  • 5. Your essay will be assessed against IELTS test criteria which include: Task Response: How well did you meet the task requirements Coherence and Cohesion: the structure and ease of understanding your response Lexical Resource: The level of vocabulary and errors in word choice or form Grammatical Range and Accuracy: The frequency of grammatical errors and the range of sentence types used.