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Why
writing
can be
boring
Writing without
examples is hard to
grasp. Details are
necessary to help us
envision what you are
writing about.
Why
writing
can be
boring
Opinions based on
emotions should not be
trusted because there
are no facts. Facts are
necessary to know
whether something is
important or not.
Nothing
Concrete
in here
WRITE
PHYSICALLY!
Concrete
Showing Telling
vs.
My brother is
an amazing
athlete.
My brother can run
down a cheetah, lift
a small automobile
over his head, and
throw a baseball
into low Earth orbit.
Showing Telling
vs.
Miriam is
brilliant.
Before she was 14,
Miriam had already
solved the Poincare
equation, memorized pi
to 1000 decimals, and
figured out how to
make Hot Pockets taste
homemade.
Examples
I’ve always
loved
music.
I’ve always
loved
music,
especially
jazz.
I’ve always
loved jazz
—Coltrane,
Miles, Bird,
Monk,
Mingus,
Kenny G.
SIGHT
SENSORY

DESCRIPTION
MOVEMENT
TOUCH
TASTE/SMELL
SOUND
SIGHT
SENSORY

DESCRIPTION
MOVEMENT
TOUCH
TASTE/SMELL
SOUND
Summertime
Swimming
Pool
SIGHT
Personification
"There was a desert wind blowing that night.
It was one of those hot dry Santa Ana's that
come down through the mountain passes and
curl your hair and make your nerves jump
and your skin itch… Meek little wives feel the
edge of the carving knife and study their
husbands' necks. Anything can happen.”
Raymond Chandler
Metaphors
“Time has not stood still. It has washed over
me, washed me away, as if I’m nothing more
than a woman of sand, left by a careless child
too near the water.”
— The Handmaid’s Tale, by Margaret Atwood
Metaphors
“She entered with ungainly struggle like some
huge awkward chicken, torn, squawking, out
of its coop.”
— The Adventure of the Three Gables,
by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
Cliche
The cat
was as
cute as a
button.
The cat was
as cute as
Princess
Edwina III.
Obscure
Just right?
Allusions
I’ve always aspired to be a SpongeBob—
always upbeat, always hopeful, always
getting into trouble with Squidward.
Make references that your audience will get.
Stories
Advice: Be efficient. Don’t be the person who
drones on and one. Don’t be that person who
focuses on irrelevant details.
Show don’t Tell
Getting
better
ideas
Metaphors
Sensory Elements
Stories
Allusions
Examples
What
if I
get
stuck?
4 Stages of Creativity
1) Preparation
2) Incubation
3) Illumination
4) Verification
Learning, reading, thinking
Relaxing, allowing, exploring
Lightning flash!
Considering, evaluating,
collaborating
Creativity takes time
“We have to continually be
jumping off cliffs and developing
our wings on the way down.” 
― Kurt Vonnegut, If This Isn't Nice,What
Is?: Advice for theYoung

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