This document consists of a slideshow presentation by Lawrie Hunter at Kochi University of Technology. The presentation covers several key lessons and discoveries from Hunter's career in education, including that grammar is less important than pattern recognition and readability in language learning, argument structure is easier to map than write as text, and authentic tasks that help learners forget they are learning are most effective. Hunter also shares examples of presentation and writing exercises designed to improve learning. The overall message is gratitude to students for the insights they provided into how to design every moment for optimal learning.
28. KUT, my sandbox
KUT Press
2004
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2007
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2005
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2006
南の風社の細迫社長、
ありがとうございます。
Thanks so much to
Mr. Hososako
of Minaminokazesha
29. KUT, my sandbox
KUT Press
2008 2013
KUT Press
2010
2012
*SSP program started in 2003,
bringing PhD students from all over Asia.
53. Pattern recognition
Design discovery #1
I think we should get a new car,
because our car is getting old.
I don’t agree. Our car is running fine.
That’s true, but the tires are bald and
the paint is faded. It looks bad.
You’re right, but we can get new tires
and a paint job, cheaply.
I guess you’re right. We should save
money and get a new car when we
need one.
Thinking in English, info structure 6: pro-con ( 賛成ー反対 )
54. Pattern recognition
Design discovery #1
new car
getting old
running fine
tires bald
paint faded
new tires
paint job, cheaply
save money
get when we need
58. PhD writing:
Coded
readability
feedback.
-big learning
Design discovery #2
agr mistake with subject-verb agreement
awk A phrase or sentence is awkward (awkward = not smooth)
cas This language is casual, not formal.
comb Combine sentences.
conj This is a conjunction (don’t start a sentence with it).
gr grammar mistake
non-std this phrasing is not standard
par mistake with parallel structure
red
redundant (some information has been repeated,
e.g. The temperature was also recorded as well.
ref
pronoun reference problem (what is the reference? is it correct
form?)
rep repetitive
rephr Rephrase this.
run-on This is a run-on sentence; it's too long to be readable.
sp spelling mistake
S-V The subject and verb in a sentence do not agree in some way.
tense
You have used the wrong verb tense (past/present/future)
e.g. Yesterday I am going to Tokushima.
vag This phrasing is vague or ambiguous.
voice
Change from the passive voice to active voice, or vice versa.
e.g. The ball was hit by the batter. ('voice' means change to “The
batter hit the ball.”)
windy This writing is run-on, it could and should be much shorter.
word Find a better word for your meaning.
Add something here (often an article).
verb
Add a verb here.
Mentor marks
63. For mapping approaches to
summarizing and argument, graphics
software and mapping software in
general are preferable to pencil and
paper because of ease of revision and
restructuring. Among those software,
Cmap Tools freeware has the further
distinct advantage that it forces the
user to specify the relations between
links and thus reveals rhetorical
structure or orchestration (or their
absence) that is not visually apparent
in text.
What structure can you see?
Argument
is easy to map.
65. See the trees:
Concept mapping for text analysis
Lawrie Hunter
Kochi University of Technology
http://www.core.kochi-tech.ac.jp/hunter
5th
Symposium on Writing Centers in Asia
April 20, 2013
70. Many ways to show information
Graphic: thank you Bret Victor
71. What does language
show us
about information?
Information structures
-are signaled in language
72. What does language
show us
about information?
Information structures
-are signaled in language
Vancouver is bigger than Kochi.
Then I peeled it and ate it.
It melted because it was hot.
A buntan is a kind of citrus.
73. Structures that do not vary
across languages
Classification Cause-effect Value
Description Sequence Choice
Mohan, B.A. (1986) Language and Content. Addison and Wesley.
Mohan's 'knowledge structures'
Argument structures
Information organization
Knowledge structures
Syntax structures
Grammar structures
79. Unique signs for plural utterances:
alleviating doubt in the language learner
Lawrie Hunter
Kochi University of Technology, Japan
http://lawriehunter.com
lawrie@ace.ocn.ne.jp
89. Design example 2:
Rewriting to perfection
The only way to become a master
Learner takes control of her learning
90. Design example 2:
Rewriting to perfection
L studies a
writing
skill
L writes
HW
Teacher
marks
the errors
Learner
sees her
errors
91. Design example 2:
Rewriting to perfection
L studies a
Writing
skill
L writes
HW
Teacher
marks the
errors
(coded)
Learner
rewrites
Teacher
marks the
errors
(coded)
Learner
rewrites
Teacher
marks the
errors
(coded)
…again
and again
until perfect.
93. Design example 2:
Rewriting to perfection
L studies a
Writing
skill
L writes
HW
Teacher
marks the
errors
(coded)
Learner
rewrites
Teacher
marks the
errors
(coded)
Learner
rewrites
Teacher
marks the
errors
(coded)
…again
and again
until perfect.
What’s the
hidden
agenda?
94. Design example 3:
Video of learner
performance
Learners perform a drama
that they have written
Teacher watches, evaluates,
AND makes a VIDEO!
What’s the
hidden
agenda?
95. My lovely students
Thank you so much.
You made my life rich.
I will never forget you.
Please don’t forget me!
lawriehunter@gmail.com
97. 97
Dimensions of
Media Object Compehensibility
Lawrie Hunter
Kochi University of Technology
http://www.core.kochi-tech.ac.jp/hunter/
KUT
Island of Shikoku