How to write a Villanelle
Emily Knighton
What is a Villanelle
A villanelle is an type of poem that is nineteen lines long, split into 4 three line verses and one 4
line verse.. Certain lines repeat and specific word rhyme. Below is an example of a villanelle
written by Sylvia Plath which is called “Mad girls love song.” the rhyming (or half rhyming)
words are in red font / blue font.
"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead; I should have loved a thunderbolt instead;
I lift my lids and all is born again. At least when spring comes they roar back
again.
(I think I made you up inside my head.) I shut my eyes and al the world drops
dead.
(I think i made you up inside my head.)”
The stars go waltzing out in blue and red,
And arbitrary blackness gallops in:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.
I dreamed that you bewitched me into bed
And sung me moon-struck, kissed me quite insane.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)
God topples from the sky, hell's fires fade:
Exit seraphim and Satan's men:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.
I fancied you'd return the way you said,
But I grow old and I forget your name.
The Structure
The structure of the villanelle is very complex. Certain words have to rhyme and
certain lines must be repeated throughout the poem. The end words of the lines
marked A must rhyme and the same for B. Blue lines must be the same, green lines
the same and all the whites lines are different.
A
B
A
A
B
A
A
B
A
A
B
A
A
B
A
A
B
A
A
How to go about writing a
Villanelle
1) Start by thinking up some really good words
that rhyme and some that can be different parts
of speech. (e.g light can be an adjective, noun
and a verb.)
2) The next step is to come up with two repeating
lines. For these it is best that by adding or
taking a way punctuation marks you can
change the meaning.
3) Once you have the repeating lines you can
begin to fill in the gaps making sure that you
stick to the rhyming pattern.
4) Once you have finished ( or simply filled in the
other lines) read the poem to yourself to see if
you want to make any changes. Don’t worry if
you take out whole lines each change make
you poem better.
Other uses of the structure
The structure used for writing a villanelle does not simply have to be kept to poetry. A
villanelle structure could also be used for writing a piece of music. For example the
repeating lines (or phrases) are as in the poetry repeated. The rhyming words are the
same last bar of each phrase. Not just the structure for a villanelle can be used to write a
piece of music. Other poetic structures such as a Luc Bat and others. Types of musical
structure can also be applied to poetry such as ----------- and ----------. Below is the first
verse ( three phrases) of a piece of music following the structure of a Villanelle.
2
4
“A” rhyming word
Line 1 ( repeating line 1) Line 2
“B” rhyming word Line 3 ( repeating line 2) “A” rhyming
word

How to write a villanelle

  • 1.
    How to writea Villanelle Emily Knighton
  • 2.
    What is aVillanelle A villanelle is an type of poem that is nineteen lines long, split into 4 three line verses and one 4 line verse.. Certain lines repeat and specific word rhyme. Below is an example of a villanelle written by Sylvia Plath which is called “Mad girls love song.” the rhyming (or half rhyming) words are in red font / blue font. "I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead; I should have loved a thunderbolt instead; I lift my lids and all is born again. At least when spring comes they roar back again. (I think I made you up inside my head.) I shut my eyes and al the world drops dead. (I think i made you up inside my head.)” The stars go waltzing out in blue and red, And arbitrary blackness gallops in: I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. I dreamed that you bewitched me into bed And sung me moon-struck, kissed me quite insane. (I think I made you up inside my head.) God topples from the sky, hell's fires fade: Exit seraphim and Satan's men: I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. I fancied you'd return the way you said, But I grow old and I forget your name.
  • 3.
    The Structure The structureof the villanelle is very complex. Certain words have to rhyme and certain lines must be repeated throughout the poem. The end words of the lines marked A must rhyme and the same for B. Blue lines must be the same, green lines the same and all the whites lines are different. A B A A B A A B A A B A A B A A B A A
  • 4.
    How to goabout writing a Villanelle 1) Start by thinking up some really good words that rhyme and some that can be different parts of speech. (e.g light can be an adjective, noun and a verb.) 2) The next step is to come up with two repeating lines. For these it is best that by adding or taking a way punctuation marks you can change the meaning. 3) Once you have the repeating lines you can begin to fill in the gaps making sure that you stick to the rhyming pattern. 4) Once you have finished ( or simply filled in the other lines) read the poem to yourself to see if you want to make any changes. Don’t worry if you take out whole lines each change make you poem better.
  • 5.
    Other uses ofthe structure The structure used for writing a villanelle does not simply have to be kept to poetry. A villanelle structure could also be used for writing a piece of music. For example the repeating lines (or phrases) are as in the poetry repeated. The rhyming words are the same last bar of each phrase. Not just the structure for a villanelle can be used to write a piece of music. Other poetic structures such as a Luc Bat and others. Types of musical structure can also be applied to poetry such as ----------- and ----------. Below is the first verse ( three phrases) of a piece of music following the structure of a Villanelle. 2 4 “A” rhyming word Line 1 ( repeating line 1) Line 2 “B” rhyming word Line 3 ( repeating line 2) “A” rhyming word