1. Universities should allocate the same amount of money to their sport activities as they
allocate to their libraries. Do you agree or disagree?
1. Yes, I do feel that universities should allocate the same amount of money to
2. their sport activities as they allocate to their libraries. It is our general belief
3. that a good player can not be good student and hence we restrict our
4. childrens sport activities at college level. Moreover, an academic degree has
5. much more value thansport activities which naturally compels students to
6. focus more on his studies than their interest in sport.
7. Most of the universities keep sports at last number of their priority
8. list, because of which good players do not get enough facilities
9. and equipments to improve their skills and eventually they loose their interest.
10. Universities can play substantial role in shaping this upcoming talent by
11. providing good trainers and equipments which is otherwise too expensive to
12. afford. Also it will attract other students towards sports and inculcate
13. importance of physical fitness in them.
14. Universities should produce genious in all fields rather than only
15. concentrating on progress of scholars. Hence, I feel that universities should
16. allot equal amounts of money to liabrary as well as sport activities.
too short, the essay speaks more about why students don’t engage in sports and the
need for promoting sports than about allocation of funds. chunk from the question
repeated verbatim
Insufficient support (arguments) regarding why you agree or disagree.
Some expression, grammar and spelling, punctuation and article errors abound.
The essay is easy to follow but appears hurried, of the writer running short of time.
Content: 5 Organisation: 6 Language; 6 Grammar & Mech 5 Overall Band5.5
Betterthan average- failstoreadthe requirementscarefully;hisargumentsneedimprovement
