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SCHOOL OF ARCHITECTURE, BUILDING AND DESIGN 
THE DESIGN SCHOOL 
FOUNDATION IN NATURAL BUILD ENVIRONMENT 
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NAME: Ang Wei Yi 
STUDENT ID NO: 0317885 
FILMS SELECTED: Dramedy (500 Days of Summer & The Fault in Our Stars) 
WORD COUNT: 1293 words 
ENGLISH 2 (ELG 30605) 
WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT 1: COMPARE – CONTRAST ESSAY 
LECTURER: CASSANDRA WIJESURIA 
SUBMISSION DATE: 19TH SEPTEMBER 2014 
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Prewriting 
Title: Contrast between the 500 Days of Summer and The Fault in Our Stars 
Thesis statement: 
The four points of difference between two films that I want to contrast are the main theme, 
the character personality, the ending of the love story between two main characters and the 
lessons learned from the film. 
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1. Major themes 
• the contrast of idealism vs. realism 
• the realities of terminal cancer 
2. Character personalities 
• Summer is selfish 
• Hazel is selfless 
3. The endings of the love story between two main characters 
• sad ending 
• bittersweet ending 
4. Lessons learned from the film 
• know the reality from fantasy 
• live in the moment 
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Contrast between the 500 Days of Summer and The Fault in Our Stars 
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500 Days of Summer is a 2009 American romantic comedy-drama film written by 
Scott Neustadter and Michael H. Weber, directed by Marc Webb, looking at real life 
relationships and how they can breakdown and mean different things to the other person. On 
the other hand, The Fault in Our Stars is another romantic drama-comedy film of boy-meets-girl, 
for Hazel and Augustus first meet at a cancer support group. Hazel has stage-four thyroid 
cancer. A new drug has bought her some time, but her constant companion is an oxygen tank 
and the illness is still terminal. Augustus lost a leg to cancer, but at the beginning of the film 
he is in remission. Their love story is overshadowed by impending death. I found that there 
are huge differences between both of the selected films although they were written by the 
same screenwriter, Scott Neustadter. Therefore, the four points of difference between two 
films that I want to contrast are the main theme, the character personality, the ending of the 
love story between two main characters and the lessons learned from the film. 
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The main theme is the biggest difference between these two films. 500 Days of 
Summer illustrates the contrast of idealism vs. realism. The example of this theme is Tom and 
Summer’s view on Tom’s favourite movie, The Graduate. Tom sees the movie romantically 
with the ending that love conquers all, which is why the audience connects with him, it is 
what we all have been taught. Although Summer is detached, the only emotional connection 
she achieves is while crying at the end of The Graduate, seeing the realism of relationships. I 
feel like her crying was her relating to that film. In the end of that film, they had just gotten 
married, the adrenaline rush is now over and they stare at each other, like, “Now what?”. 
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They didn’t really love each other like that. Besides, Summer leads on Tom by dancing with 
him and then sleeping on his shoulder all while she was already seeing her future husband. It 
is at this point in the film, where it absolutely looks like they will be getting back together. 
While that would have happened in any other romantic comedy, I found it a great little twist 
that it went completely the other way with that classic and heartbreaking expectation vs. 
reality scene. On the contrary, for The Fault in Our Stars, the realities of terminal cancer 
plays a prominent role in this film. This film seeks to downplay the popular idea that battling 
cancer is a noble, heroic, and rewarding act, and it does so primarily by showing the realities 
of cancer. There is nothing particularly noble for Hazel about struggling to breathe and 
knowing her death will hurt others, or anything heroic for Augustus in having had a leg 
amputated, or rewarding for Isaac about losing his vision. Instead the audiences see that kids 
with cancer are just that: kids. What makes them different from other kids is that they are put 
in the terrible position of having to deal with a debilitating and sometimes fatal illness. 
Augustus discusses this idea directly when he tells Hazel about his former girlfriend, 
Caroline Mathers. He talks about the trope of the cancer victim who heroically fights cancer 
until the end, then points out that kids with cancer aren't statistically anymore likely to be 
better people than kids without cancer. Caroline, he explains, became increasingly cruel 
toward him as her condition worsened. Rather than make her a better person, cancer made her 
worse. 
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Summer Finn is not mature enough for real relationships and being selfish. She does 
not believe in labelling relationships and do not want anything serious but she still 
impulsively makes out with Tom. She goes out with him. She shares her most intimate 
thoughts and stories with him. Eventually, everything she does makes Tom yells that 
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everything they are doing is not a friendship. Besides, they even have a very romantic night 
together at the wedding after the break-up. They spend the entire week together happily. Tom 
feels hopeful as Summer invites him to a party at her place. However, he ends up seeing 
Summer showing off her ring and her fiancé to him. She is selfish. It is immediately obvious 
that Hazel is not the typical teenage girl from Indianapolis. By comparison, Hazel is far more 
thoughtful and considerate about her actions than Summer, and she is far more analytical. 
Hazel is selfless. One of Hazel’s defining characteristics is her wish to tread lightly upon the 
world. She desperately wants to mitigate the harm caused by her existence on Earth. For 
Hazel, everything is about perspective and everything that consumes her life is a measure of 
leaving as little hurt as possible behind when, not if, she dies. She knows her parents have 
suffered because of her cancer and that they will grieve when she dies. Besides, she avoids 
making new friends because she considers herself a “grenade” and she does not want to 
inflict any more damage than necessary. When she first meets the dashing Augustus, she 
resists his affection because she does not want him to be another victim when she dies. 
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Moreover, I would like to contrast the difference between the endings of the love 
story between two main characters of both films. 500 Days of Summer ended up sadly. Tom 
confesses that he now realises that all his ideas about love were wrong. The girl who did not 
want to be anyone's girlfriend was now someone's wife. She married to a man who she met 
him in a deli. Tom did not end up with Summer and he moved on. Compared to the 500 Days 
of Summer, The Fault in Our Stars has a bittersweet ending for the relationship between 
Hazel and Augustus. Lidewij tells her that Augustus wrote her a eulogy that he sent to Van 
Houten. The film ends with Hazel reading the eulogy, which states that you cannot choose 
whether or not you will be hurt, but you can choose what hurts you, and that he is happy with 
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his choices. He hopes that she is happy with the choices she made. Hazel says that yes, she is 
happy. 
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Last but not least, the contrast between these two films is the lessons learned from the 
film. We learned to know the reality from fantasy from 500 Days of Summer. Sometimes 
when we are in a relationship, we project our own expectations onto the other person. We fail 
to see the person for who or what they truly are. In 500 Days of Summer, Tom develops a 
mildly delusional obsession over a girl onto whom he projects all these fantasies. On the 
other hand, for The Fault in our Stars, the lesson learned is that we should live in the moment 
because the future always remains an enigma, we must cherish the time spent with people in 
our present. As Hazel beautifully acknowledges, “some infinities are bigger than other 
infinities.” Sometimes we are spontaneously given more or less time with people we care 
about deeply. Hazel is given a smaller “infinity” with Augustus. 
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In conclusion, the main theme, the character personality, the ending of the love story 
between two main characters and the lessons learned from the film are the four points of 
difference between 500 Days of Summer and The Fault in Our Stars that I want to contrast. I 
strongly suggest that if you prefer a wise, warm, funny and touching romantic drama-comedy 
film, The Fault in Our Stars is definitely your first choice as it tells us that "we can and 
should have moments of infinite joy within a limited time”. It is your choice! 
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References 
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1. veemignon. Analysis: (500) Days of Summer. [Website] Retrieved from: https:// 
veemignon.wordpress.com/2013/04/14/analysis-500-days-of-summer/comment-page-1/ 
[Accessed: 19 September 2014] 
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2. Blake Tan. Character Study: Summer Finn. [Website] Retrieved from: http:// 
halfblaked.blogspot.com/2010/08/character-study-summer-finn.html [Accessed: 19 
September 2014] 
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3. Straightedge is Beautiful. (500) DAYS OF SUMMER-THOUGHTS AND ANALYSIS. 
[Website] Retrieved from: http://straightedgeisbeautiful.wordpress.com/2011/05/22/500- 
days-of-summer-thoughts-and-analysis/ [Accessed: 19 September 2014] 
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4. Karen Hua. Voices: 5 life lessons from 'The Fault in Our Stars’. [Website] Retrieved 
from: http://college.usatoday.com/2014/06/07/voices-5-life-lessons-from-the-fault-in-our-stars/ 
[Accessed: 19 September 2014] 
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5. Ann Hornaday. ‘The Fault In Our Stars’ review: A terrific addition to the canon of 
doomed young love. [Website] Retrieved from: http://www.washingtonpost.com/ 
goingoutguide/movies/the-fault-in-our-stars-review-a-terrific-addition-to-the-canon-of-doomed- 
young-love/2014/06/04/6e35c38e-ebe8-11e3-b98c-72cef4a00499_story.html 
[Accessed: 19 September 2014] 
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FNBE0214_ENG_Compare and Contrast Essay

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    !!! SCHOOL OFARCHITECTURE, BUILDING AND DESIGN THE DESIGN SCHOOL FOUNDATION IN NATURAL BUILD ENVIRONMENT !! NAME: Ang Wei Yi STUDENT ID NO: 0317885 FILMS SELECTED: Dramedy (500 Days of Summer & The Fault in Our Stars) WORD COUNT: 1293 words ENGLISH 2 (ELG 30605) WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT 1: COMPARE – CONTRAST ESSAY LECTURER: CASSANDRA WIJESURIA SUBMISSION DATE: 19TH SEPTEMBER 2014 ! ! ! ! ! ! !1
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    Prewriting Title: Contrastbetween the 500 Days of Summer and The Fault in Our Stars Thesis statement: The four points of difference between two films that I want to contrast are the main theme, the character personality, the ending of the love story between two main characters and the lessons learned from the film. ! 1. Major themes • the contrast of idealism vs. realism • the realities of terminal cancer 2. Character personalities • Summer is selfish • Hazel is selfless 3. The endings of the love story between two main characters • sad ending • bittersweet ending 4. Lessons learned from the film • know the reality from fantasy • live in the moment !2
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    ! Contrast betweenthe 500 Days of Summer and The Fault in Our Stars ! 500 Days of Summer is a 2009 American romantic comedy-drama film written by Scott Neustadter and Michael H. Weber, directed by Marc Webb, looking at real life relationships and how they can breakdown and mean different things to the other person. On the other hand, The Fault in Our Stars is another romantic drama-comedy film of boy-meets-girl, for Hazel and Augustus first meet at a cancer support group. Hazel has stage-four thyroid cancer. A new drug has bought her some time, but her constant companion is an oxygen tank and the illness is still terminal. Augustus lost a leg to cancer, but at the beginning of the film he is in remission. Their love story is overshadowed by impending death. I found that there are huge differences between both of the selected films although they were written by the same screenwriter, Scott Neustadter. Therefore, the four points of difference between two films that I want to contrast are the main theme, the character personality, the ending of the love story between two main characters and the lessons learned from the film. ! The main theme is the biggest difference between these two films. 500 Days of Summer illustrates the contrast of idealism vs. realism. The example of this theme is Tom and Summer’s view on Tom’s favourite movie, The Graduate. Tom sees the movie romantically with the ending that love conquers all, which is why the audience connects with him, it is what we all have been taught. Although Summer is detached, the only emotional connection she achieves is while crying at the end of The Graduate, seeing the realism of relationships. I feel like her crying was her relating to that film. In the end of that film, they had just gotten married, the adrenaline rush is now over and they stare at each other, like, “Now what?”. !3
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    They didn’t reallylove each other like that. Besides, Summer leads on Tom by dancing with him and then sleeping on his shoulder all while she was already seeing her future husband. It is at this point in the film, where it absolutely looks like they will be getting back together. While that would have happened in any other romantic comedy, I found it a great little twist that it went completely the other way with that classic and heartbreaking expectation vs. reality scene. On the contrary, for The Fault in Our Stars, the realities of terminal cancer plays a prominent role in this film. This film seeks to downplay the popular idea that battling cancer is a noble, heroic, and rewarding act, and it does so primarily by showing the realities of cancer. There is nothing particularly noble for Hazel about struggling to breathe and knowing her death will hurt others, or anything heroic for Augustus in having had a leg amputated, or rewarding for Isaac about losing his vision. Instead the audiences see that kids with cancer are just that: kids. What makes them different from other kids is that they are put in the terrible position of having to deal with a debilitating and sometimes fatal illness. Augustus discusses this idea directly when he tells Hazel about his former girlfriend, Caroline Mathers. He talks about the trope of the cancer victim who heroically fights cancer until the end, then points out that kids with cancer aren't statistically anymore likely to be better people than kids without cancer. Caroline, he explains, became increasingly cruel toward him as her condition worsened. Rather than make her a better person, cancer made her worse. ! Summer Finn is not mature enough for real relationships and being selfish. She does not believe in labelling relationships and do not want anything serious but she still impulsively makes out with Tom. She goes out with him. She shares her most intimate thoughts and stories with him. Eventually, everything she does makes Tom yells that !4
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    everything they aredoing is not a friendship. Besides, they even have a very romantic night together at the wedding after the break-up. They spend the entire week together happily. Tom feels hopeful as Summer invites him to a party at her place. However, he ends up seeing Summer showing off her ring and her fiancé to him. She is selfish. It is immediately obvious that Hazel is not the typical teenage girl from Indianapolis. By comparison, Hazel is far more thoughtful and considerate about her actions than Summer, and she is far more analytical. Hazel is selfless. One of Hazel’s defining characteristics is her wish to tread lightly upon the world. She desperately wants to mitigate the harm caused by her existence on Earth. For Hazel, everything is about perspective and everything that consumes her life is a measure of leaving as little hurt as possible behind when, not if, she dies. She knows her parents have suffered because of her cancer and that they will grieve when she dies. Besides, she avoids making new friends because she considers herself a “grenade” and she does not want to inflict any more damage than necessary. When she first meets the dashing Augustus, she resists his affection because she does not want him to be another victim when she dies. ! Moreover, I would like to contrast the difference between the endings of the love story between two main characters of both films. 500 Days of Summer ended up sadly. Tom confesses that he now realises that all his ideas about love were wrong. The girl who did not want to be anyone's girlfriend was now someone's wife. She married to a man who she met him in a deli. Tom did not end up with Summer and he moved on. Compared to the 500 Days of Summer, The Fault in Our Stars has a bittersweet ending for the relationship between Hazel and Augustus. Lidewij tells her that Augustus wrote her a eulogy that he sent to Van Houten. The film ends with Hazel reading the eulogy, which states that you cannot choose whether or not you will be hurt, but you can choose what hurts you, and that he is happy with !5
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    his choices. Hehopes that she is happy with the choices she made. Hazel says that yes, she is happy. ! Last but not least, the contrast between these two films is the lessons learned from the film. We learned to know the reality from fantasy from 500 Days of Summer. Sometimes when we are in a relationship, we project our own expectations onto the other person. We fail to see the person for who or what they truly are. In 500 Days of Summer, Tom develops a mildly delusional obsession over a girl onto whom he projects all these fantasies. On the other hand, for The Fault in our Stars, the lesson learned is that we should live in the moment because the future always remains an enigma, we must cherish the time spent with people in our present. As Hazel beautifully acknowledges, “some infinities are bigger than other infinities.” Sometimes we are spontaneously given more or less time with people we care about deeply. Hazel is given a smaller “infinity” with Augustus. ! In conclusion, the main theme, the character personality, the ending of the love story between two main characters and the lessons learned from the film are the four points of difference between 500 Days of Summer and The Fault in Our Stars that I want to contrast. I strongly suggest that if you prefer a wise, warm, funny and touching romantic drama-comedy film, The Fault in Our Stars is definitely your first choice as it tells us that "we can and should have moments of infinite joy within a limited time”. It is your choice! ! ! ! !6
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    References ! 1.veemignon. Analysis: (500) Days of Summer. [Website] Retrieved from: https:// veemignon.wordpress.com/2013/04/14/analysis-500-days-of-summer/comment-page-1/ [Accessed: 19 September 2014] ! 2. Blake Tan. Character Study: Summer Finn. [Website] Retrieved from: http:// halfblaked.blogspot.com/2010/08/character-study-summer-finn.html [Accessed: 19 September 2014] ! 3. Straightedge is Beautiful. (500) DAYS OF SUMMER-THOUGHTS AND ANALYSIS. [Website] Retrieved from: http://straightedgeisbeautiful.wordpress.com/2011/05/22/500- days-of-summer-thoughts-and-analysis/ [Accessed: 19 September 2014] ! 4. Karen Hua. Voices: 5 life lessons from 'The Fault in Our Stars’. [Website] Retrieved from: http://college.usatoday.com/2014/06/07/voices-5-life-lessons-from-the-fault-in-our-stars/ [Accessed: 19 September 2014] ! 5. Ann Hornaday. ‘The Fault In Our Stars’ review: A terrific addition to the canon of doomed young love. [Website] Retrieved from: http://www.washingtonpost.com/ goingoutguide/movies/the-fault-in-our-stars-review-a-terrific-addition-to-the-canon-of-doomed- young-love/2014/06/04/6e35c38e-ebe8-11e3-b98c-72cef4a00499_story.html [Accessed: 19 September 2014] ! !7
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