2. Negative Feedback of First Draft Front cover looks a bit random. Doesn’t look professional These are two different pages so keep them separated See how it will look with the black background just on the headings of the editorial pillars Alot of white space. Fill it up
3. Positive Feedback of First Draft Good images and pages matches with the editorial pillars Use of colours are good. Coordinated with the front cover The use of resizing images and page numbers to make it stand out is really catchy The setting out of this is professional and looks attractive Looks attractive and professional
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5. I will only have the black background on the ‘FEATURES’, ‘REVIEWS’, ‘NEWS’ and ‘GIGS’ and make my white text black instead
6. next to my film tape I will add a black background describing what the images are from and contact details
