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1. From our closed group on facebook, the
comments, said that people can see the narrative
but it is not the clear this then tells us that we
should, then go and put icons in the video which
will make the video more clear so people can
establish the narrative our video, and the video is
a narrative video
From this part of our feedback, we found the
audience like the footage that is used, therefore
this gives us the indication that we should keep
the footage that we have used and not change it
as this may result in upset to our target
audience. This is a positive kind of feedback we
gained back meaning that we can focus our time
else were like making the narrative more clear
From this part of our feedback we found that
there are ways in which we can improve our
music video. Certain people suggested that we
should use a black and white affect, this may
be because they feel it is iconic to a indie
genre. People also said the timing of the edit,
as some of the lip syncing was out of time, and
this doesn’t make the video look professional.
Therefore with these changes we can make
the video more iconic but also make the video
look more professional.