The author believes the script writing process was a success. Through meetings with a client, the author improved the script by clarifying language, adding character descriptions, and addressing formatting and grammatical issues. The author also tweaked the plot and title based on client feedback. Overall, the author feels the final script meets industry standards and conveys the intended vision to the target audience.

1. ChrisReynolds
Evaluation
To summarise, I believe that the script writing process turned out to be a success. Even
though there were some challenges, I feel I did well to overcome these. Overall, I feel I
produced a good quality script.
Over the course of the script writing process I had several meetings with the client who
helped me to improve my script. In my first meeting the client suggested I replace certain
words to make it more specific. For example, I replaced the word ‘school’ with ‘college’ to
clarify to the audience that my characters were post 16. She also suggested that I add a brief
character description to help introduce the character when they’re first introduced. I did
this by introducing Harvey who is the first to enter the scene and stated his age and what he
looked like.
In the second meeting, the client suggested that I address some formatting issues to make
my script look professional. I did this by cantering the my dialogue and numbering my
scenes correctly. I also corrected some grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. The client
also suggested I change some of the content in my script, for example getting rid of the
extra weapon and changing the game my characters played.
During the process, I decided to change the name of the script from ‘RAGE’ to ‘Trouble in
Paradise.’ I made this change as I felt it would appeal more to the target audience. I also
made a tweak to the plot by adding a cliff-hanger at the end which I feel makes the plot
more interesting a it leaves the audience to wonder what’s going to happen next. In my
third client meeting, the client showed liking to the plot twist so I decided to keep it.
I also ensured that my script met the legal and ethical requirements and it fit within the age
certification of 15. For example, I don’t have any swear words, however there is a moment
where we see a body which we presume is dead. I have also met the 5-10 minute time
requirement which I calculated during the production of my shooting script.
Overall I believe this process was a success and I feel I have generated a script to a
professional standard and I have clearly conveyed my vision of the filminto the script for
the target audience to enjoy. I learned the professional format of the script which I ensured
throughout my script and I feel will help me if I go on to create more scripts in the future. If
I were to do this again, I would want to have more meetings with the client as I felt they
clearly helped me to improve me script.