The client provided feedback on improving the flow of words and phrasing in the initial script. In a follow up meeting, the client explained how to properly format the script with numbers down the left side to coordinate with the shooting script. While pleased with meeting expectations, the writer recognizes the story could have been less predictable and stereotypical if they had the chance to start over, but learned how to properly format and distinguish a script from a shooting script through this process.

1. Evaluation
Within my first meeting with my client we discussed that she liked
the layout and storyline, but we looked at changing a few of the
words and phrasing to make it flow better.
In the next and last meeting the client explained where and how to
format the numbers down the left hand side of the script to
correlate to my shooting script.
Overall I think I have met the needs and expectations of the client,
brief and my target audience.
My script and shooting script, after adjusting a few formatting
errors are up to industry standard and meet the legal and ethical
requirements.
I am over all very pleased with my script and shooting script and
the storyline is what I was going for and achieves what I wanted it
to achieve. If I had to opportunity to start over I would try and
make the story a bit less predictable and stereotypical because some
parts seem fairly similar to other films. Throughout this Christ
writing process I have learned how to fully format a script and what
is shooting script is and how they work.