The client meeting was useful for refining the script. The client liked the scenes without dialogue to build atmosphere and tension, so the scriptwriter added more detailed descriptions of these scenes. The client also liked the focus on small character-driven actions, so more details were included. However, the recurring newsroom scene was deemed too difficult, so it was replaced with a creative blue light to pique curiosity. Overall, the scriptwriter believes the final script meets the client's standards and target specifications of a 10-minute short film suitable for their intended audience and certification. Lessons were learned about the importance of thorough pre-production planning.

1. Evaluation
The meetingIhad withmyclientswere veryuseful.Withinthemwe wentovermyscriptmultiple
timesandchangedvariousthingstomake sure thatmy scriptwas at a peakstandardand wasas
suitable formyideaas possible.Formyideamyclientlikedhow Iwantedtohave a lot of scenesto
be no dialogue atall,thiswasfor atmosphere andtensionpurposessofromthiswhatI didinmy
scriptwas detail these sceneswithindepthdescriptionof how Iwantedthemtobe seen.Theyalso
likedmywantof a focuson small actionslike takingoff hisshoesorplacingitemsdowntoshow the
characters traits,fromthisI alsoaddedextradetail toput a real emphasisonthis.However,what
my clientdidn’tlikewasthe ideaof havinganewsreportscene showingthe newsroomeverytime,
we decidedthiswasgoingtobe toohard. So,from that whatwe decidedonwasusinga creative
style of notshowinganythingonthe TV at all but insteadablue light,we bothagreedthathisgives
the scenesevenmore of a curiosityandaddsto the atmosphere.
For my scriptI feel Ihave metthe standardsstatedby client,asI have addedall of what they had
wantedingooddetail andto a highstandard of quality.Ialsofeel Ihave metthe target of the brief,
that beingtocreate a scriptfor a ten-minute shortfilmthatwill be screenedandsubmittedtoshort
of the week,myscriptlastsjustaroundthe ten-minute markmeaningIhave done whatIneedto
have done.AndI alsothinkmyscript hasmet mytarget audience nicelyas well.The scriptshowsthe
atmosphere of tensionanddarkseriousundertonesmeetingthe wantsformydark mysterygenre
loversandI have alsomade sure nothingisin itto be unsuitableformy15-age ratedcertificate.
I thinkmyscript isof industryformatstandardsasI have addedkeyscene detailsexplainingwhat
scene itis anda descriptionof italsowiththe time of dayit will be set,Ihave addedneededstage
directionsthatare easyto followbutstill have gooddescriptionsof whatneedstobe done andit
alsoformattedof that of a standardscriptyou wouldfindwhilstworkingonafilm.myscriptalso
meetsitslegal andethical requirements,Ihaven’taddedanythingthatcouldjeopardise the
screeningof myfilmandI have steeredclearof anythingthatwill offendgroupsorindividualswith
any hate,offensive language tocertainpeopleorthingssuchas the inappropriate use of children.
Overall,Iam happywiththe endresultsof myscript andit issomethingI’mproudtosay I produced.
If I hadthe chance to go back and start againI woulddefinitelystartthe writingof itearlierthanIdid
as I feel if Ihad I couldhave made an evengreaterscriptandone that I wouldbe evenmore proud
of.From scriptwritingIhave learnthowimportantthingsinpre-productioncanbe,Ialreadyknewit
was butfrom thisI have learntevenmore of how significantitis,thinglikerealisingthe importance
of havingitall as if I hadn’thad one thingI wasn’table to carry on withothertasks,to me this
showedjusthowimportantitall was.