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Evaluate your improvements made and weaknesses that still
persist in your writing style. Discuss the following elements of
writing style:
Type your response in a word file. Include your full name (Jada
Nelson), your professor’s name (Professor Hope), the course
number (ENG1105) and the word count in the upper left-hand
corner, Double-space your draft.
a. Paragraphs and transitions: providing one main point per
paragraph instead of mixing ideas, using strong topic sentences
and smooth transitions.
(The information to use)
Paragraphs for the most parts have been good but I've
struggled with transitioning to a new paragraph. Otherwise, I
don't really mix ideas when I have a certain topic in mind for a
paragraph.
b. Sentences: using sentence-combining skills and different
types of sentences for effect.
(The information to use)
This has been somewhat rocky for me just because of
the word requirements. I've been trying my best at it but I have
let a few sentences slide just so I've been able to reach the word
requirements.
c. Word choice: carefully choosing the best words, using
appropriate diction.
(The information to use)
I feel like my wording has been good most of the
course except for the second essay (proposal essay). I'm not
really sure why I struggled so much with the essay. For the most
part my word choice has been decent.
Write in complete sentences, and provide specific examples to
illustrate your discussion. The essay must be between 500-750
words.
Write 5 paragraphs please.
Paragraph 1:
Introduction
Paragraph 2:
A. Paragraphs and transitions: providing one main point per
paragraph instead of mixing ideas, using strong topic sentences
and smooth transitions.
Paragraph 3:
B. Sentences: using sentence-combining skills and different
types of sentences for effect.
Paragraph 4:
C Word choice: carefully choosing the best words, using
appropriate diction.
Paragraph 5:
Conclusion
NOOOOOOOOOO PLAGIARISM!!!!!!!!!!!!
· APA formatting: Resources and citations are formatted
according to the current APA style and formatting. See
Evidence and APA.
· Number of resources: Minimum of 6 scholarly sources.
Distinguished submissions will likely exceed this number.
· Length of paper: 6–8 typed, double-spaced pages.
Additionally, a title page and references page.
· Font and font size: Times New Roman, 12 point.
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Undergraduate Pathways ENG1105
ESSAY EXAM RUBRIC QUESTION #____
Name:______________________
CONTENT “A” PAPER “B” PAPER “C” PAPER “D/F” PAPER
Addressing Type
of Essay Question
Accurately identifies the essay
terms being used in the question;
designs answer that specifically
addresses the question; precisely
and lucidly discusses the subject
under the terms for examination
Definite recognition the essay terms
being used in the question; designs an
answer which addresses the terms;
correctly discusses the subject under
the terms for examination
Identification of the essay terms being
used is questionable; answer structure
somewhat addresses the question by
referencing the subject under the terms
for examination
Identification of essay terms being used
is not evident; structure of answer does
not indicate understanding of how terms
should be addressed; subject of question
is not examined according to essay terms
Focus of Answer Every part of the question is
correctly and thoroughly appealed
to in the answer. Writer gives only
insightful, precise examples without
adding irrelevant or distracting info
Most elements of the question are
correctly appealed to in the answer.
Writer attempts to use only applicable
examples to develop answer; reader is
not distracted by irrelevant detail.
Some of the question is appealed to,
though other pieces are not addressed
with examples or accuracy. Writer may
use some irrelevant or poorly chosen
details to support the answer.
Question seems to be either
misunderstood and/or significant
elements of the question are not
appealed to. Writer chooses weak or
irrelevant details that distract from the
overall ability to answer the question.
Support for
Assertion of
Judgment
Develops and supports judgment
masterfully through relevant,
effective examples and sound logic;
does not simply assert something is
true, but proves the point being
made
Develops and supports judgment
through effective, relevant details,
examples and sound logic; makes
assertion of judgment and makes solid
attempts to prove opinion
Supports judgment through some
examples; one or two instances of faulty
logic; asserts judgment but only partially
proves opinion as written
Weak development and support: lacks
reasons, or contains irrelevant,
ineffective examples; logic is generally
faulty; assertion of judgment and
attempts to prove are inaccurate and/or
unconvincing
WRITING “A” PAPER “B” PAPER “C” PAPER “D/F” PAPER
Style Writing is superior to collegiate-
level in content, arrangement and
style, showing rich variety and
elegance in its sentence structures
and word choices
Writing is more than merely adequate
for collegiate-level work, showing
some variety and elegance in its
sentence structures and word choices
Writing is adequate for the collegiate
level but shows little variety and
elegance in its sentence structure and
word choices
Writing is not adequate for the collegiate
level; no variety or elegance in its
sentence structure; word choice is
generally bland and cliché
Organization Unified and consistent pattern of
organization with an apt
introduction, graceful transitions
and a vigorous conclusion
Unified pattern of organization with
an introduction, transitions and
conclusion
Displays a pattern of organization with a
distinguishable beginning, middle and
end
Lacks a distinguishable sense of order to
the content: no beginning, middle or end
discernable
Unity/Coherence Entire essay demonstrates
coherence and unity; essay has a
controlling and sustained sense of
purpose & an exceptionally mature
level of though
Entire essay demonstrates coherence
and unity; has a controlling sense of
purpose and mature level of thought
for the most part
With only a few exceptions, essay
demonstrates unity and coherence; has
some sense of controlling purpose
Overall essay lacks unity and coherence
between sections; purpose of essay is
nearly or completely indistinguishable;
lacks maturity of thought
Mechanics Essay averages 1 error or fewer per
page in usage and punctuation rules
covered thus far in the course
(including spelling)
Essay averages 2 errors per page in
usage and punctuation rules covered
thus far in the course (including
spelling)
Essay averages 3 errors per page in
usage and punctuation rules covered
thus far in the course (including spelling)
Essay averages 4 or more errors per page
in usage and punctuation rules covered
thus far in the course (including spelling)

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  • 4. Writer attempts to use only applicable examples to develop answer; reader is not distracted by irrelevant detail. Some of the question is appealed to, though other pieces are not addressed with examples or accuracy. Writer may use some irrelevant or poorly chosen details to support the answer. Question seems to be either misunderstood and/or significant elements of the question are not appealed to. Writer chooses weak or irrelevant details that distract from the overall ability to answer the question. Support for Assertion of Judgment Develops and supports judgment masterfully through relevant, effective examples and sound logic; does not simply assert something is true, but proves the point being made Develops and supports judgment through effective, relevant details, examples and sound logic; makes assertion of judgment and makes solid attempts to prove opinion Supports judgment through some examples; one or two instances of faulty
  • 5. logic; asserts judgment but only partially proves opinion as written Weak development and support: lacks reasons, or contains irrelevant, ineffective examples; logic is generally faulty; assertion of judgment and attempts to prove are inaccurate and/or unconvincing WRITING “A” PAPER “B” PAPER “C” PAPER “D/F” PAPER Style Writing is superior to collegiate- level in content, arrangement and style, showing rich variety and elegance in its sentence structures and word choices Writing is more than merely adequate for collegiate-level work, showing some variety and elegance in its sentence structures and word choices Writing is adequate for the collegiate level but shows little variety and elegance in its sentence structure and word choices Writing is not adequate for the collegiate level; no variety or elegance in its sentence structure; word choice is generally bland and cliché Organization Unified and consistent pattern of organization with an apt introduction, graceful transitions
  • 6. and a vigorous conclusion Unified pattern of organization with an introduction, transitions and conclusion Displays a pattern of organization with a distinguishable beginning, middle and end Lacks a distinguishable sense of order to the content: no beginning, middle or end discernable Unity/Coherence Entire essay demonstrates coherence and unity; essay has a controlling and sustained sense of purpose & an exceptionally mature level of though Entire essay demonstrates coherence and unity; has a controlling sense of purpose and mature level of thought for the most part With only a few exceptions, essay demonstrates unity and coherence; has some sense of controlling purpose Overall essay lacks unity and coherence between sections; purpose of essay is nearly or completely indistinguishable; lacks maturity of thought Mechanics Essay averages 1 error or fewer per page in usage and punctuation rules
  • 7. covered thus far in the course (including spelling) Essay averages 2 errors per page in usage and punctuation rules covered thus far in the course (including spelling) Essay averages 3 errors per page in usage and punctuation rules covered thus far in the course (including spelling) Essay averages 4 or more errors per page in usage and punctuation rules covered thus far in the course (including spelling)