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First Magazine Finish:
Feedback from Audience:
following my finished magazine, fellow classmates and other audiences
reviewed my magazine and gave me their comments on post-it notes
After receiving the many feedbacks on
what was good and bad, I decided to
improve my magazine to meet the
criteria of my audience.
I decided to keep my front cover the same as it
has all the usual music magazine conventions
that can attract a reader. Like the one on the
right, Rolling Stone magazine has a wide
audience and therefore is likely to have the
same audience as mine. I copied its black-on-
white theme but reversed it so my front cover is
filled with white font. Furthermore, I included
names of artists on the side and other plugs and
anchorage seen on the Rolling Stone one.
In order to attract my audiences, I used direct
mode of address like Katy Perry to form a
connection with the reader. I made the fonts
large and bold, whilst the anchorage in a graffiti
like font, to relate to modern teenagers,
specifically those who are exposed to urban
lifestyles where social activities thrive. I also
used Ayesha, who is Asian, to reflect the typical
PBRB audience. I didn’t put her in a seductive
pose, as my audience can be as young as 15 or
16.
I decided to improve my DPS because a lot of people didn’t like the dark theme and the restricted
space of the pulled quote. I took inspiration from this Ciara spread from Daze which has a similar
audience as mine, as their audience spans a wide range due to the vast topics they cover. I took
notice of the simple CIARA masthead on top with a short subtitle; except I made mine bigger to
mimic my article’s topic. Her pulled quote separates the article in half by taking up space, so I took
inspiration from that too. What I did differently was that I didn’t put other small picture inputs.
This helps attract my audience, which would ideally be 16-22 year olds, as they are old enough to
grasp and read articles with focus: they are not children, they do not need pictures and colour to be
given an incentive to read. This is accompanied by the use of semi-formal language, with the
occasional slang, to support the interests of both 16 year olds to the older ages.
Again, this is Daze magazine, so they have quite similar audiences to mine. I tried to attract my
audience by showing a variety of artists available in the magazine. I highlighted Kobe and Sarah’s
pictures with page numbers, as PBRB is mostly dominated by African Americans and favoured by the
same ethnic youths. I also found from my initial research that females tend to listen to PBRB more
than males. So the bigger picture focuses on Sarah so girls can relate and have a connection with her,
whilst the men may possibly be attracted by Sarah too. If not, they also have the option to check out
Kobe’s interview instead. I also used capital headings so that people can easily identify what areas o
the magazine interests them more. I also added a faux giveaway insert so people can generate more
interest and the magazine possibly gains brand loyalty.
Aside from improvements... how else
did you attract them?
BUZZ WORDS
I used the words “Exclusive!”, “new” and “latest” to attract a reader. This
makes them think that they will be missing out on some information, that
other magazines wont have, if they do not purchase the magazine. This is
further accompanied by the list of artists and competition mentioned on
the front cover: this might strike interests on a vast audience.
COLOURS
The use of colour is important. I kept to a strict, black and white theme for
most of the time, except in the contents page where the competition box
is a pink-ish gradient. I did this to match the picture of Sarah and create a
consistent matching theme. The black and white photo of Kobe contrasts
well, as it balances the page out. By using a black and white theme, this
creates a balanced interest for both male and female readers. However,
the prominence of pink in the contents page may suggest the ratio of
female to male demographic of PBRB listeners, which I found from my
initial survey.

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Evaluation Question 5

  • 2. Feedback from Audience: following my finished magazine, fellow classmates and other audiences reviewed my magazine and gave me their comments on post-it notes
  • 3. After receiving the many feedbacks on what was good and bad, I decided to improve my magazine to meet the criteria of my audience.
  • 4. I decided to keep my front cover the same as it has all the usual music magazine conventions that can attract a reader. Like the one on the right, Rolling Stone magazine has a wide audience and therefore is likely to have the same audience as mine. I copied its black-on- white theme but reversed it so my front cover is filled with white font. Furthermore, I included names of artists on the side and other plugs and anchorage seen on the Rolling Stone one. In order to attract my audiences, I used direct mode of address like Katy Perry to form a connection with the reader. I made the fonts large and bold, whilst the anchorage in a graffiti like font, to relate to modern teenagers, specifically those who are exposed to urban lifestyles where social activities thrive. I also used Ayesha, who is Asian, to reflect the typical PBRB audience. I didn’t put her in a seductive pose, as my audience can be as young as 15 or 16.
  • 5. I decided to improve my DPS because a lot of people didn’t like the dark theme and the restricted space of the pulled quote. I took inspiration from this Ciara spread from Daze which has a similar audience as mine, as their audience spans a wide range due to the vast topics they cover. I took notice of the simple CIARA masthead on top with a short subtitle; except I made mine bigger to mimic my article’s topic. Her pulled quote separates the article in half by taking up space, so I took inspiration from that too. What I did differently was that I didn’t put other small picture inputs. This helps attract my audience, which would ideally be 16-22 year olds, as they are old enough to grasp and read articles with focus: they are not children, they do not need pictures and colour to be given an incentive to read. This is accompanied by the use of semi-formal language, with the occasional slang, to support the interests of both 16 year olds to the older ages.
  • 6. Again, this is Daze magazine, so they have quite similar audiences to mine. I tried to attract my audience by showing a variety of artists available in the magazine. I highlighted Kobe and Sarah’s pictures with page numbers, as PBRB is mostly dominated by African Americans and favoured by the same ethnic youths. I also found from my initial research that females tend to listen to PBRB more than males. So the bigger picture focuses on Sarah so girls can relate and have a connection with her, whilst the men may possibly be attracted by Sarah too. If not, they also have the option to check out Kobe’s interview instead. I also used capital headings so that people can easily identify what areas o the magazine interests them more. I also added a faux giveaway insert so people can generate more interest and the magazine possibly gains brand loyalty.
  • 7. Aside from improvements... how else did you attract them?
  • 8. BUZZ WORDS I used the words “Exclusive!”, “new” and “latest” to attract a reader. This makes them think that they will be missing out on some information, that other magazines wont have, if they do not purchase the magazine. This is further accompanied by the list of artists and competition mentioned on the front cover: this might strike interests on a vast audience.
  • 9. COLOURS The use of colour is important. I kept to a strict, black and white theme for most of the time, except in the contents page where the competition box is a pink-ish gradient. I did this to match the picture of Sarah and create a consistent matching theme. The black and white photo of Kobe contrasts well, as it balances the page out. By using a black and white theme, this creates a balanced interest for both male and female readers. However, the prominence of pink in the contents page may suggest the ratio of female to male demographic of PBRB listeners, which I found from my initial survey.