FCE: Essay Writing Checklist

Before you write

Finish these instructions.
   Make a ________________.
   If you write a question, answer it too. This is your ideas time. When you
   are writing, you can concentrate on the language you use.
   Spend at least ____________ minutes on your plan.
   This will save you time later and improve the organisation of your essay.
   Use the plan to make sure you ______________________ correctly and
   relevantly.

While you are writing

   ‘Write’ each sentence in your mind before you put it on paper. This will
   make your work easier to read.
   Don’t write on every line. Leave a space and you will be able to correct
   yourself or add extra information later. Compare:
In this box I am writing on every line.     In this box I am not writing on every
    make
If I do a mistake there is very little               make
space for me to correct it. I cannot        line. If I do a mistake there is space
add extra information if I need to. It is
sometimes difficult to read.                for me to correct it. I can add extra

                                            information if I need to. It is easier to

                                            read.




Make statements

Be bold with what you want to say. Try not to use too many modals of
speculation or the reader may think you are not sure about the topic.
For example:
Travelling to other countries could be very good for combating racism.
Better = Travelling to other countries is very good for combating racism.




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Introduction
The introduction should be two to three sentences long.
It could include:
   a sentence or two about the topic in general;
   a sentence telling the reader whether the essay will look at one or both
   sides of the issue;
   a question which you will answer in your essay.


Highlight any useful words or phrases from these examples.
   Nowadays, tourism is becoming more and more important to the global
   economy. But what are the negative effects of tourism?
   Newspapers are full of articles about the effects tourism has on developing
   countries. It brings benefits to their economies and their people.
   During the last thirty years tourism has been increasing in my country.
   There have been many benefits to this.


Conclusion
The conclusion should be two to three sentences long.
It should include:
   a summary of your main points;
   your opinion;
   a reference to the original question (try to rephrase it);
   NO new information.


Here are some conclusions from essays on the topic “Tourism causes more
problems than it solves.” Which one is the most appropriate? Why?
   To conclude, I strongly believe that tourism solves more problems than it
   causes.
   In conclusion, I think it is great to share your life with other people from
   around the world.
   To sum up, in my opinion there are more disadvantages than advantages
   to tourism for poor countries because tourists do not consider the effects
   of their holidays on the local people.



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Learn words and phrases to link your work together
Write these words and phrases into the correct place in the table.




Putting your ideas in order             Showing results / consequences




Showing reasons                         Showing contrasts




Expressing opinions                     Giving examples




Write a paragraph about why people should (not) learn English. Use as many
linking phrases as necessary. Try to use phrases which are new to you.




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Use formal language

Each of these sentences can be made more formal.
How would you change them?

   1. People don’t think about the damage they cause.


   2. There are lots of things which can affect the economy.


   3. Countries earn loads of money from tourism.


   4. Tourism causes many different kinds of problems.


   5. It is easier to go somewhere on holiday than ever before.


   6. Some people think that tourism is bad for poor countries.


Use the table to summarize the differences between formal and informal
language. The number shows you which example to look at to help you
complete the rule.

Formal Language                        Informal Language

No c_________________.1                C________________ are
                                       acceptable.1

Use f________ phrases like:            It is acceptable to use i___________
                                       phrases like:
    ______________________2
    ______________________3                ______________________2
    ______________________4                ______________________3
                                           ______________________4

Use s______________ words linked       G_____________ words are
to the essay topic whenever you can.5 acceptable.5

Use p_____________ structures if       Generally, use the a__________
you can. This makes the text less      more than the p____________. 6
personal. 6



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Use a range of adjectives
Adjectives likes ‘good’, ‘bad’ and ‘nice’ are useful in informal language, but
there are many better synonyms which you can use when writing a formal
essay.
How many synonyms can you think of for each word?
   good / nice




   bad




Can you improve this sentence?
Travelling to other countries is very good for combating racism.


Check your writing carefully
Read it slowly and check for these things:
   Is your text between 120 and 180 words?
   To get higher marks it should be closer to 180 words. Have you included
   reasons to support your answer? You could also include examples to
   illustrate your points.
   Check your spellings.
   A good way to do this is to read your text backwards. That way you see
   each word individually, instead of seeing what you think is there.
   Have you used the correct prepositions for each noun / verb / adjective?
   Is your essay formal enough?
   Remember to check everything from the table.
   How long are your sentences?
   Can you use a linking word or should you make the sentence shorter?
   Have you used the correct formfor each verb?
   If the verb is the subject of the sentence, make sure it is a gerund.
   For the past simple and past participle, is the verb regular or irregular?
   Check singular / plural forms.
   Do verbs agree? Are the adjectives all ‘singular’? Have you used plural
   forms after ‘one of’ and ‘a variety of’?

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   Have you answered the question?!




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Essay writing checklist

  • 1.
    FCE: Essay WritingChecklist Before you write Finish these instructions. Make a ________________. If you write a question, answer it too. This is your ideas time. When you are writing, you can concentrate on the language you use. Spend at least ____________ minutes on your plan. This will save you time later and improve the organisation of your essay. Use the plan to make sure you ______________________ correctly and relevantly. While you are writing ‘Write’ each sentence in your mind before you put it on paper. This will make your work easier to read. Don’t write on every line. Leave a space and you will be able to correct yourself or add extra information later. Compare: In this box I am writing on every line. In this box I am not writing on every make If I do a mistake there is very little make space for me to correct it. I cannot line. If I do a mistake there is space add extra information if I need to. It is sometimes difficult to read. for me to correct it. I can add extra information if I need to. It is easier to read. Make statements Be bold with what you want to say. Try not to use too many modals of speculation or the reader may think you are not sure about the topic. For example: Travelling to other countries could be very good for combating racism. Better = Travelling to other countries is very good for combating racism. http://sandymillin.wordpress.com Compiled by Sandy Millin
  • 2.
    FCE: Essay WritingChecklist Introduction The introduction should be two to three sentences long. It could include: a sentence or two about the topic in general; a sentence telling the reader whether the essay will look at one or both sides of the issue; a question which you will answer in your essay. Highlight any useful words or phrases from these examples. Nowadays, tourism is becoming more and more important to the global economy. But what are the negative effects of tourism? Newspapers are full of articles about the effects tourism has on developing countries. It brings benefits to their economies and their people. During the last thirty years tourism has been increasing in my country. There have been many benefits to this. Conclusion The conclusion should be two to three sentences long. It should include: a summary of your main points; your opinion; a reference to the original question (try to rephrase it); NO new information. Here are some conclusions from essays on the topic “Tourism causes more problems than it solves.” Which one is the most appropriate? Why? To conclude, I strongly believe that tourism solves more problems than it causes. In conclusion, I think it is great to share your life with other people from around the world. To sum up, in my opinion there are more disadvantages than advantages to tourism for poor countries because tourists do not consider the effects of their holidays on the local people. http://sandymillin.wordpress.com Compiled by Sandy Millin
  • 3.
    FCE: Essay WritingChecklist Learn words and phrases to link your work together Write these words and phrases into the correct place in the table. Putting your ideas in order Showing results / consequences Showing reasons Showing contrasts Expressing opinions Giving examples Write a paragraph about why people should (not) learn English. Use as many linking phrases as necessary. Try to use phrases which are new to you. http://sandymillin.wordpress.com Compiled by Sandy Millin
  • 4.
    FCE: Essay WritingChecklist Use formal language Each of these sentences can be made more formal. How would you change them? 1. People don’t think about the damage they cause. 2. There are lots of things which can affect the economy. 3. Countries earn loads of money from tourism. 4. Tourism causes many different kinds of problems. 5. It is easier to go somewhere on holiday than ever before. 6. Some people think that tourism is bad for poor countries. Use the table to summarize the differences between formal and informal language. The number shows you which example to look at to help you complete the rule. Formal Language Informal Language No c_________________.1 C________________ are acceptable.1 Use f________ phrases like: It is acceptable to use i___________ phrases like: ______________________2 ______________________3 ______________________2 ______________________4 ______________________3 ______________________4 Use s______________ words linked G_____________ words are to the essay topic whenever you can.5 acceptable.5 Use p_____________ structures if Generally, use the a__________ you can. This makes the text less more than the p____________. 6 personal. 6 http://sandymillin.wordpress.com Compiled by Sandy Millin
  • 5.
    FCE: Essay WritingChecklist Use a range of adjectives Adjectives likes ‘good’, ‘bad’ and ‘nice’ are useful in informal language, but there are many better synonyms which you can use when writing a formal essay. How many synonyms can you think of for each word? good / nice bad Can you improve this sentence? Travelling to other countries is very good for combating racism. Check your writing carefully Read it slowly and check for these things: Is your text between 120 and 180 words? To get higher marks it should be closer to 180 words. Have you included reasons to support your answer? You could also include examples to illustrate your points. Check your spellings. A good way to do this is to read your text backwards. That way you see each word individually, instead of seeing what you think is there. Have you used the correct prepositions for each noun / verb / adjective? Is your essay formal enough? Remember to check everything from the table. How long are your sentences? Can you use a linking word or should you make the sentence shorter? Have you used the correct formfor each verb? If the verb is the subject of the sentence, make sure it is a gerund. For the past simple and past participle, is the verb regular or irregular? Check singular / plural forms. Do verbs agree? Are the adjectives all ‘singular’? Have you used plural forms after ‘one of’ and ‘a variety of’? http://sandymillin.wordpress.com Compiled by Sandy Millin
  • 6.
    FCE: Essay WritingChecklist Have you answered the question?! http://sandymillin.wordpress.com Compiled by Sandy Millin