Activities to help teachers prepare students for the writing paper of the Cambridge First and Cambridge Advanced exams.
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Cambridge English Exams: The Writing Paper (IH Bydgoszcz Cambridge Training Day 2016)
1. Cambridge English Exams
The Writing Paper
Sandy Millin
IH Bydgoszcz, Director of Studies
http://sandymillin.wordpress.com/examwriting
Success with Cambridge English
13th February 2016
2. What problems do your learners
have with writing?
What do you think they need to
know?
3. Nice Not nice
Sue O’Connell, Think Smart – Developing Thinking Skills for IELTS students
(IATEFL Liverpool 2013)
4. Idea generation
Photo from ELTpics by @acliltoclimb, under a Creative
Commons Attribution Non-Commercial license
PotatoTalksfromThinkingintheEFLClass
5. Rubric role plays
Writer
You’re a writer and you’re meeting the editor of Theatre World
magazine to discuss a review they want you to write.
Think about what information you need from the editor to make
sure you write the review they want to see.
Reader
You’re the editor of Theatre World magazine and you’re meeting
a writer to discuss a review you want them to write.
Think about what you want to see in the review and what will
make you publish it in your magazine.
IdeafromDavidPetrie
6. Rubric role plays
Reviews needed!
Have you been to the theatre recently? If so, could you
write us a review of the play you saw? Include
information on the characters, costumes and story and
say whether you would recommend the play to other
people.
The best reviews will be published next month.
8. Essay structure
Travel broadens the mind and widens our horizons (FCE)
Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at
least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of
ways.
Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not
the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow-mindedness,
which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn
from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better than in their own
country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great
deal to foreign travel.
Another benefit is that more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights
and visit its most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and
become more knowledgeable in a way which is simply not possible with the Internet or
television.
To conclude, I strongly believe that if we travel with an open mind, our horizons will be
widened even further.
ReadyforFCE,SBp120
9. Intro
• Most people think that…
• However,…
• Personally, I think this has
benefited our society in a
number of ways.
Paragraph 1
• Firstly,…
• Consequently,…
Paragraph 2
• Secondly,…
• Another benefit is
that…
• As a result, …
Conclusion
• To conclude,…
Linking words
10. Linking words
My dog had died
that morning.
I wasn’t as sad
as I expected.
He did not plan
to.
He had not
discussed the
matter with her.
I’m studying
English.
I want to travel.
and
but
because
11. Linking words
• He had not discussed the matter with her and
he did not plan to.
• My dog had died that morning, but I wasn’t as
sad as I expected to be.
• I’m studying English because I want to travel.
Now rewrite the sentences with other linking
words.
13. Checklists
• Does your introduction include your main argument
and indicate the topics of your paragraphs?
• Does your conclusion refer back to the introduction?
• Is the register consistent and formal/neutral?
• Have you included suitable linking words? (If any of
your sentences start with But ....., And...., Because..... ,
please change them by using the linking your teacher
gave you )
• Have you supported your arguments by
examples/justification? Will the reader be generally
informed about your view on the topic?
Pavla Milerski, Exam Writing seminar
17. Cambridge English Exams
The Writing Paper
Sandy Millin
IH Bydgoszcz, Director of Studies
http://sandymillin.wordpress.com/examwriting
Success with Cambridge English
13th February 2016
Editor's Notes
Questions from David Petrie
Take a piece of paper, draw the table. Listen and write the seven words. Decide quickly!
Dictate list quickly!
computer, shopping, competition, drama, writing, disco, snow
Compare to a partner. Then justify.
Activity shows students that the same thing can be seen in different ways – not just one right way to do things.
Need a potato!
Do this activity: http://www.helblinglanguages.com/images/stories/book/thinking/potato_talks.pdf - Potato talks / Thinking in the EFL Classroom by Tessa Woodward p174-175
Other ideas: http://sandymillin.wordpress.com/2013/04/11/think-smart-developing-thinking-skills-for-ielts-students-sue-oconnell-iatefl-2013/ She said:
“If you let students work for five minutes or so on an activity, for the first third of the time, the ideas are fairly routine, the next third are more unusual, and the final third are more original and complex. Therefore, you must encourage students to defer editing (ideas first, then monitor) and don’t stop the idea generation process. There are two stages: possibility (all possible) and practical (what is actually relevant). It’s useful to have a quota and a time limit.“
Stole this idea from David Petrie
Works especially well with teenage students, by putting them in the shoes of the reader and writer
Do role play before they see the rubric
By doing the role play first, it:
Gives you different ideas of what to write
Gives you a better idea of the target reader
Makes you ‘experience’ the abstract – especially good for younger students who don’t have such a range of life experience
Lets students express attitudes and feelings
Provides a break from routine
Also stolen from David Petrie
These are the five FCE text types. I’ll show you two. What are they? How do you know?
essay
report
Draw two more.
Compare to the pictures
What goes into each paragraph? Pavla Milerski’s activity
Put the essay in order
Check on screen
Analyse structure further – what is the function of each paragraph? Intro1st benefit2nd benefitConclusion – no new ideas!
How are the benefits paragraphs structured?Main idea of paragraph, supporting points, (summarising the idea of the paragraph)
Steal useful phrases
Could teach them a fixed structure…
Or teach them more about different linking words.
Link the sentence halves using and/but/because
Then:
What others do you know? Encourage students to rewrite the sentences using other linkers in the same category (addition, contrast, reason). Don’t forget to look at punctuation.
For more on linking words of contrast: http://sandymillin.wordpress.com/2013/11/16/contrast-linkers/
How can you make this sentence longer and raise the level of the language? 2 minutes to make as many changes as you can. Share.
Can also manipulate sample paragraphs or whole pieces of writing, perhaps using samples from the handbook and looking at the comments
http://www.telescopictext.com/ can be used to add an extra level of challenge
Give students a checklist to check their writing – what would you include in an essay checklist?
If you’ve done the rubric roleplay, you can also refer back to that.
3-4 general areas to work on – highlight places in the text. Get SS to correct it and give it back to you. Correct other things yourself for them.
Keep a record of writing comments – give students a copy, and use criteria
What are your ideas?
Did any of these activities help you with any of the problems your students are having?