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Draft 3 Feedback Video: -Betteroverall understandingof conventions -Editingfitsconventions -Widerrange of shots -flashingisusedwell -Slowmohas improved -Locationsare conventional andstrong -Speedrampingisstrong -Graphicmatchingis good -Car driftwasgood Digipak: -Colourconsistency -Photoisstrong(Main image) -Fontusedare conventional andstrong -Strongbrand image/connection VideoImprovements: -LIGHTING + Still a problem(Source softbox) -Flashingtoindicate change inscenery(Canbe washedout) -More use of controlledspeedramping -Slowmotionimprovements(More predominant) -Conor’scostume -Use smoke -Utilize lowangles -More use of reversing -Scrap KFC(Doesn’tfit – use nightclubor bar) Digipak Improvements: -Keepcolourconsistencyof Draft2 butwithimage strengthof this
-Recreate mainimage photowithbetterlighting -Combine strengthsof bothdrafts -Boxesare tooscattered(Seekinspiration) findconventions

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Draft 3 feedback and plan

  • 1. Draft 3 Feedback Video: -Betteroverall understandingof conventions -Editingfitsconventions -Widerrange of shots -flashingisusedwell -Slowmohas improved -Locationsare conventional andstrong -Speedrampingisstrong -Graphicmatchingis good -Car driftwasgood Digipak: -Colourconsistency -Photoisstrong(Main image) -Fontusedare conventional andstrong -Strongbrand image/connection VideoImprovements: -LIGHTING + Still a problem(Source softbox) -Flashingtoindicate change inscenery(Canbe washedout) -More use of controlledspeedramping -Slowmotionimprovements(More predominant) -Conor’scostume -Use smoke -Utilize lowangles -More use of reversing -Scrap KFC(Doesn’tfit – use nightclubor bar) Digipak Improvements: -Keepcolourconsistencyof Draft2 butwithimage strengthof this
  • 2. -Recreate mainimage photowithbetterlighting -Combine strengthsof bothdrafts -Boxesare tooscattered(Seekinspiration) findconventions