7. •Nagsasaysay ng kwento, base sa
katotohanan.
•Meron s’yang simula, gitna, at
katapusan.
•Ipinakikita sa mambabasa ang mga
eksena sa madetalyeng paraan.
8. •Sumasalamin sa iba’t-ibang
karanasan ng tao at mga interest
nito.
•May kaiga-igayang pamagat
•May makinis na daloy ng
pagkasalansan ng mga ideya.
•Gumagamit ng “Direct Quotation”
10. THE STARTING POINT OF FEATURE STORY
MUST HOOK THE READERS
SETS THE TONE OF THE ARTICLE
RANGE 1-5 PARAGRAPHS (DEPENDING ON YOUR STYLE)
ESTABLISH YOUR POINT
INTRODUCTION
11. 05
EFFECTIVE INTROS
• MUST ESTABLISH THE POINT
OF THE FEATURE STORY
• HINDI LIGOY,PALABOK,
MEMA
• MAY DATING
12. 05
AVOID
LITERARY
Sa bawat pagtilaok ng manok sa madaling
araw nakadarama ako ng dagling pag-asa.
Habang humahampas ang malamig na
simoy ng hangin ay nabubuo sa akin ang
panibagong lakas.
14. 05
Introduction/Panimula
• Panimulang pangungusap o talata/ lupon ng
mga talata
• Kailangang makatawag pansin sa mambabasa
• Kailangang gumamit ng tiyak at nakahihikayat
na mga salita
• Kailangang angkop sa paksa
• Kailangang tama sa tono ng akda
• Serious, sarcastic, ironic, etc.
15. 05
Uri ng Panimula
• Descriptive
• Narrative
• Direct Quote
• Question
• Startling Statement
• Contrast and Compare
• Twist
16. 05
Descriptive
• Champions three years running now and
proud owner of not one, not two, but three
“three peat” feats in the past 15 years, the La
Salle Lady Spikers remain the gold, nay the
green, standard for UAAP women’s volleyball
greatness.
17. 05
Descriptive – describes a scene/person
Standing at the lunch line, the boy turned to Lucy Lopez and asked, “Will
you be my girlfriend?”
Then he turned to his buddy and started laughing.
Just another cruel joke on the fat kid.
Lucy, who once weighed almost 300 pounds, is used to them. Since
elementary school she has been teased and taunted about her weight.
“I remember being called horrible names in elementary school every time
we went to the playground,” the sophomore said.
But life is changing.
18. 05
Narrative
Filipino English language teacher Cresencia Mapalad and
others are hopeful that they could land teaching jobs in China.
Mapalad told Xinhua in an interview that she got excited when
President Rodrigo Duterte announced that China has opened its
doors to Filipino English language teachers.
Mapalad, who has a doctorate degree in education, used to
teach English in Samar State University in the central Philippines
for decades. When she retired in 2011 at the age of 65, she applied
as dean of the College of Education in Metro Manila College
(MCM) in Quezon City.
19. 05
Question/Startling
I smelled fishy from the start.
All of a sudden, Attractive Gent was rumored to be the new
paramour of Winsome Personality.
It was surprising because AG was supposed to be involved with
Alluring Beauty, while WP is the apple of Sizzling Maverick’s eye.
So why the sudden romance rigodon?
Is it a last-ditch effort to save AG and WP’s sinking
partnership? Well, it kinda worked.
The intriguing scuttlebutt bought the duo a little time. It
wasn’t much, but it was enough to prevent a monumental
disaster.
(PDI)
20. 05
Contrast
Despite climate change, we can still count on April to bring in
the first plitter-platter of rain; a cycle that ushers in springtime in
the west and prods the blooming of showers, in time for our Flores
de Mayo festivities. But April is not just about rain showers. It is
also about shower of blessings.
April showers
by: Joanne Rae M. Ramirez
Philstar
21. 05
Twist
Auteurs usually tap drama to handle and tell serious subjects
and aspects of life. Logic says the genre provides the pensive
mood audiences must take in watching or reading it.
For Pinay Beauty (She’s No White) — which seems to make a
reference (or a pun on) to that Disney character — an official entry
to this year’s Pista ng Pelikulang Pilipino (PPP), Jay Abello uses the
power of comedy to discuss beauty and adds another layer to the
ongoing discourse on race (skin color).
Jerry Donato www.philstar.com
22. 05
Direct Quote – use sparingly. Must be
very powerful quote
“Don’t be mad. I took some pills,” Loren Tadeo cried as she
stopped over the toilet.
A few hours later, the 14-year-old freshman died after series of
coronary arrests.
23. 05
Tools for writing leads
• Repetition
• Short, punchy sentences. Fragments
• Using Dialogue
• Mixing sentences to set a rhythm
• Breaking the rules
24. 05
Repetition
Break. Break. Break. Who doesn’t need one?
She has forgotten to send me the queue. With her hectic
schedule, she has forgotten me.
Will anyone hear me for my cause? I thought I have said my
piece already. Will anybody hear me?
25. 05
Short punchy sentences.
They never thought that she will deliver anything. They have no
inkling of it. All along, they thought she’s just an ugly duckling
that cannot do a thing. A goat in their class, so to speak. Until
after the results of the competition was announced did they
know that she can. Yes, she did! With flying colors, in fact; the
top of her class.
26. 05
Making sentences to set a rhythm
Ginulat n’ya ang buong mundo. Ginulat. N’ya.
Saan nga ba dapat lumugar ang isang bata sa mundo
ng kahirapan? Saan ba. Sa mundo. Ng Kahirapan.
The world is round. The. World. Is. Round.
28. 05
Rather than..
With America engaged in a war in Iraq,
many students know U.S. military men
who have lost their lives.
League town lost one of its own last
month when Nicolas Barrera was
killed in Iraq.
29. 05
Try this enhancement…
When Lucia Dela Rama didn’t hear from her son, Alfredo,
for a week, she knew something was wrong. Maybe it was a
mother’s intuition, but she knew.
And when she saw two officers walking toward her
door, her worst fear was confirmed.
“The officers said they were sorry to deliver the news,
but Alfredo died with honor,” she said.
“Dying with honor? How does that help? My heart was
breaking. My boy was gone.”
31. 05
•Basically, it is a summary of what the story
is going to be about.
•It’s the 5 Ws and H that you didn’t answer
in the lead.
•It’s the thesis sentence of your story.
What is a nut graph?
32. 05
•She has no premonition. No sign. No clue.
That the day she had decided to visit her
aging parent from her ancestral home, to
give them due respect, would be her last.
She never knew it. She never will.
Consider this lead
33. 05
November 6, Sunday, when her husband received an urgent
call from someone in the hospital. It was not a familiar
voice. Not his wife’s. And upon hearing the voice of the
nurse, Mr. Jovy Cariňo knew it was serious. The voice on the
other line said his wife was at the emergency room and
needed to be transferred to the Intensive Care Unit (ICU);
she had met an accident.
Sample nutgraph
34. 05
After a strong lead and an informative
nut graph…
Use the transition/quote formula
or
The Story telling formula
35. 05
Susi ang Transisyon/pangatnig
Panahon: simula, sumunod, pagkatapos,
sa huli, pagwawakas
Pagkakasunod -sunod: Una, ikalawa,
ikat’lo…
Rason: Dahilan sa, sapagkat
Paghahambing: katulad ng
Kontrast: Ngunit, subalit…
39. 05
End your story with…
A powerful quote
Or
Tie the ending back to the lead
40. 05
Pagsulat ng Pamagat
• Make your title move. Use figurative
language.
• Make use of pun/ play with words.
• Use a sub-title
41. 05
Pagsulat ng Pamagat
• Blowing Bubbles in Bacoor
• Come again in Camiguin
• Looking for fun in Lucban
• Realizing Rizal
• Anting-Anting ng Antipolo
• Reaching Rizal’s Realism
42. EFFECTIVE TITLES
• CATCHY MEANS MAKING THE
READER SAYS
• "I WANT TO READ THIS"!
• EFFECTIVE TITLES SPEAK!
GIVING THE READERS AN IDEA
WHAT IS THE FEATURE ABOUT.
43. 05
NO TO TITLES
• VAGUE
• INCORRECT
• BORING • CLEAR
• COMPLETE
• CORRECT
46. 05
THE SUPERMAN OF THE POOL
How 10-year old Fil-Am beat Michael
Phelps record
47. 05
SAY HELLO TO KITTY
HELLO KITTY AT 40:THE CAT THAT CONQUERED THE WORLD.
ANG KIKAY NA PUSA
KITTY KITA : PAANO NAHUMALING NI HELLO KITTY ANG MGA
BATANG PINOY
48. 05
Things that we should forget:
1. effective title has 3-5 words
(kahit ilan basta naiintindihan ang story)
2. Must sound literary (iwasan :
Gulong ng Palad)
49. COPYREADING AND HEADLINE WRITING
TEACHER III
BALAYAN WEST CENTRAL SCHOOL
REGINE P. OQUIALDA
• RSPC 2023 (Filipino - 5th Place)
• DPSC 2023 ( Filipino - 1st Place)
• Congressional District 2023 ( Filipino - 1st)
• District 2023( English - 2nd, Filipino-1st)
• DSPC 2019
• - (Filipino 10th Place)
• District 2019( English 2nd, Filipino - 1st)
• DSPC 2018 Qualifier (English)
• District 2018 (English - 1st)
50. TEACHER III
BALAYAN NATIONAL HIGH SCHOOL
KENACIN L. ULANDAY
EDITORIAL WRITING
2022-2023
• DSPC – 4th place, Editorial Page
• RSPC – 7th place, Editorial Page
2019-2020
• RSPC – 10th place Editorial Page
• - Online Publishing Editorial Page, 2nd
place
• - Over-all Online Publishing, 2nd place
• NSPC Qualifier- Editorial Page
2018-2019
• RSPC Qualifier – Editorial Page, 25th place
• NSPC Qualifier, Editorial Page, 11th place
51. SPORTSWRITING
TEACHER III
SAN PIRO NATIONAL HIGH SCHOOL
JORICK L. ARELLANO
2022-2023
DSPC 2ND Place Sports Section
2019-2020
• DSPC 3RD PLACE Sports Section
• 2019 REGIONAL QUALIFIER –SCHOOL
PAPER CATEGORY
COACH /RANK 3, SPORTS WRITING
(FILIPINO CATEGORY)-
