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European Journal of Social Sciences – Volume 10,
Number 2 (2009)

Done by :
SAADIYAH DARUS & KHOR HEI CHING
School of Language Studies and Linguistics
Faculty of Social Sciences and Humanities
Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia




                                                   2
Educational system in Malaysia – based on Razak
Report (1956)
Malaysian educational structure
a) Primary education – 6 years
b) Secondary education – 5 years
c) Sixth Form education – 2 years
Prior to Razak Report, medium of instruction
a) National school – Malay
b) National type (Chinese & Tamil) – native language
English & Malay – compulsory subjects to learn



                                                  3
Secondary level of education
a) Lower secondary level
- - 3 years (Form 1 - Form 3)
b) Upper secondary level
- - 2 years (Form 4 & Form 5)
Secondary level - medium of instruction is Malay
Vernacular students will have to endure effects from
the changes of medium of instruction
Chinese students from vernacular school – English
and Malay are taught in primary level as one
subject respectively

                                                    4
When they enter Form One – all subjects are taught
in Malay except for English and Mandarin subjects
English has become L2 in Malaysia
From being the medium of instruction in schools
since pre-independence, it has now become a
compulsory subject that students need to take
(Asmah, 1997)
Chitravelu et al. (2004:12) talk about the position of
English as an L2 and its importance to “…enable
Malaysians to engage meaningfully in local and
international trade and commerce”
Thus, students need to be proficient in English and
being able to write well in English is definitely an
advantage for their future

                                                         5
Out of the four skills, writing is the most complex
aspect but it is a crucial skill for students to learn
Students who have the ability and competency in
writing in English will be able to express themselves
effectively
Moreover, they will have more privilege when
applying for any job compared to other students
especially in private sectors and companies that
are involved at international level



                                                         6
The Form One Chinese students in vernacular
schools need to master three languages – their
native language, Malay and English
Out of these three languages, English is neglected
and not being paid attention to
They are not very much exposed to English and do
not have sufficient training in the language




                                                     7
To investigate errors in essays written in English by
Form One Chinese students in a public school in
Perak




                                                        8
What are the four most common errors in their
written English essays?




                                                9
There can be a huge difference between English
writing by native speakers (NS) and English writing
by English as a second language (ESL) learners
ESL learners have more than one language while
they are composing as compared to NS
Since they have more than one language in hand,
it brings more problems
ESL learners tend to switch those languages
interactively, causing some confusion in the
structure and meaning


                                                      10
As several studies have reported,
a) L2 writers use their L1 to plan their writing for text
    generation (Cumming, 1989; Jones & Tetroe,
   1987),
b) Transfer their L1 knowledge to L2 writing contexts
   (Edelsky, 1982; Friedlander, 1990; Lay, 1982), and
c) Develop ideas and produce text content and
    organization (Lay, 1982)
In short, L2 writers always make use of their L1 first,
while composing in the L2 before translating it to L2
This shows that L1 influence the L2 writer in their
process of writing in L2 and the influences can be
positive or negative
                                                          11
PARTICIPANTS

  70 students from two Form One classes in a
  selected public school in Perak
  They came from Chinese vernacular schools with
  Mandarin as the main language of instruction
  They scored on average a grade B or C in their
  „Ujian Penilaian Sekolah Rendah‟ (UPSR) and other
  monthly English tests




                                                      12
Errors in language learners‟ performance including
writing process have long become the subject of
interest among teachers, linguists and syllabus
planners
According to Corder (1967), error can be defined
as a systematic, consistent deviance characteristic
of the learner‟s linguistic system at a given stage of
learning
Meanwhile, Dulay et al. (1982) define error as :
“…the flawed side of the learner‟s speech or writing
They are those parts of conversation or composition
that deviates from selected norm of mature
language performance.” (Dulay et al., 1982: 138)

                                                         13
All of these students came from Chinese speaking
family
They write in Mandarin for many occasions
especially in informal situations
They only use English during their English classes or
when needed to




                                                        14
WRITING SAMPLE

 Following Halliday and Hassan (1976) who stated
 that writing allows writers to demonstrate their ability
 to construct a string of well-connected sentences
 that are grammatically and logically correct, the
 students were asked to write a short essay
 The writing sample for the study - 70 essays written in
 English by these 70 students




                                                       15
INSTRUMENT

 In order to identify the errors, an error classification
 scheme developed by Darus et al. (2007) was
 adapted in this study
 It consists of 18 types of errors as follows :
 a) Tenses
 b) Articles
 c) Subject verb agreement
 d) Other agreement errors
 e) Infinitive

                                                            16
f) Gerunds
g) Pronouns
h) Possessive and attributive structures
i) Word order
j) Incomplete structures
k) Negative constructions
l) Lexical categories (preposition)
m) Other lexical categories
n) Mechanics
o) Word choice
p) Word form
q) Verb to be
 r) Malaysian typical words
                                           17
Markin 3.1 software (Holmes, 1996-2004) was used in
the process of identifying the errors in the students‟
essays
The software was chosen because it enabled
researchers to obtain accurate classification and
statistical analysis of errors




                                                     18
RESEARCH PROCEDURE

 Students were asked to write a short essay (in the
 range of 80 – 300 words)
 The topic of the essay was My Family
 They were given one week to write their essays
 before researchers collected them for text analysis
 Essays collected were typed so that they were
 computer readable
 The errors of each essay were identified using
 Markin 3.1 software based on the error classification
 Scheme

                                                       19
Table 1




          20
Table 1 shows the total number of errors for each
category of grammatical errors as well as its
percentage and mean value
10,147 words were analyzed that consist of
approximately 145 words for each essay
The results of the mean values show that four
common errors are mechanics (2.73), tense (1.73),
preposition (1.29) and subject-verb agreement
(1.24)



                                                    21
4 COMMON
  ERRORS


       Mechanics
       Tenses
       Preposition
       Subject-Verb Agreement


                                 22
19.1% of total number of errors
In the area of spelling, punctuation and
capitalization
Spelling – „read‟ vs „rid‟ (mainly due to phonetics
perception)
Punctuation – commas (,)
a) I feel happy to have a lovely family, and I hope
    my family will always happy
b) There are my father, mother * eldest sister and
    me

                                                      23
Capitalization
a) My mom occupation is a House Wife
b) My brother is a Form two student




                                       24
12.1 % of total number of errors
English verbs change according to aspect of time
(present, past, future and continuous tense)
For example :

I go to the market      Saya pergi ke pasar
I will go to the market Saya akan pergi ke pasar
I went to the market   Saya telah pergi ke pasar
I am going to the      Saya sedang pergi ke pasar
market

                                                    25
The verb „pergi‟ in the sentences did not indicate
time
Time was shown separately by auxiliary verb and
particles such as „akan‟, „telah‟, „sedang‟
 - Difficult for students to understand the idea of
   tense usage
Errors identified :
a) Every night we watching TV         [watch]
b) I study in SMJK Yuk Chong          [am studying]



                                                      26
9.0 % of total number of errors
 Errors includes omissions, additions and wrong
 selections
 For example - Chinese and Malay preposition „di‟
 refers to „in‟, „at‟ and „on‟ in English
Dia bekerja di Kuala       He works in Kuala Lumpur
Lumpur
Salmah bekerja di          Salmah works at the post
pejabat pos                office
Dia letakkan buku itu di   He puts the book on the
atas meja                  table
                                                      27
Therefore students were incapable of choosing the
correct prepositions when more than one English
prepositions corresponds to a single Chinese or
Malay prepositions




                                                    28
8.7% of total number of errors
Errors includes difficulties in distinguishing the verb
„is‟ or „was‟ with „are‟ or „were‟
Confuse with some nouns such as „people‟ or
„homework‟

I go to school           Saya pergi ke sekolah
She goes to school       Dia pergi ke sekolah
They go to school        Mereka pergi ke sekolah


                                                          29
Example :
a) My family have five members                [has]
b) There is five family members in my house   [are]




                                                 30
Errors are caused by :
1) Interference of L1
2) Inadequate understanding of grammatical rules
   of English
This study shows that the four most common errors
made by the Chinese students are mechanics of
writing, tenses, preposition and subject-verb
agreement
In general, the finding of this study shows that the
Chinese students were very much influenced by the
L1 in their process of learning English
                                                    31
Suggestions :
 1) Teacher should emphasize on how the
    concepts are handled in English, Malay and
    Chinese
 2) Teachers should highlight certain rules in L1 and
    Malay that are inappropriate to be used when
    they write in English




                                                        32
Common Errors in Written English Essays

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Common Errors in Written English Essays

  • 1.
  • 2. Source : European Journal of Social Sciences – Volume 10, Number 2 (2009) Done by : SAADIYAH DARUS & KHOR HEI CHING School of Language Studies and Linguistics Faculty of Social Sciences and Humanities Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia 2
  • 3. Educational system in Malaysia – based on Razak Report (1956) Malaysian educational structure a) Primary education – 6 years b) Secondary education – 5 years c) Sixth Form education – 2 years Prior to Razak Report, medium of instruction a) National school – Malay b) National type (Chinese & Tamil) – native language English & Malay – compulsory subjects to learn 3
  • 4. Secondary level of education a) Lower secondary level - - 3 years (Form 1 - Form 3) b) Upper secondary level - - 2 years (Form 4 & Form 5) Secondary level - medium of instruction is Malay Vernacular students will have to endure effects from the changes of medium of instruction Chinese students from vernacular school – English and Malay are taught in primary level as one subject respectively 4
  • 5. When they enter Form One – all subjects are taught in Malay except for English and Mandarin subjects English has become L2 in Malaysia From being the medium of instruction in schools since pre-independence, it has now become a compulsory subject that students need to take (Asmah, 1997) Chitravelu et al. (2004:12) talk about the position of English as an L2 and its importance to “…enable Malaysians to engage meaningfully in local and international trade and commerce” Thus, students need to be proficient in English and being able to write well in English is definitely an advantage for their future 5
  • 6. Out of the four skills, writing is the most complex aspect but it is a crucial skill for students to learn Students who have the ability and competency in writing in English will be able to express themselves effectively Moreover, they will have more privilege when applying for any job compared to other students especially in private sectors and companies that are involved at international level 6
  • 7. The Form One Chinese students in vernacular schools need to master three languages – their native language, Malay and English Out of these three languages, English is neglected and not being paid attention to They are not very much exposed to English and do not have sufficient training in the language 7
  • 8. To investigate errors in essays written in English by Form One Chinese students in a public school in Perak 8
  • 9. What are the four most common errors in their written English essays? 9
  • 10. There can be a huge difference between English writing by native speakers (NS) and English writing by English as a second language (ESL) learners ESL learners have more than one language while they are composing as compared to NS Since they have more than one language in hand, it brings more problems ESL learners tend to switch those languages interactively, causing some confusion in the structure and meaning 10
  • 11. As several studies have reported, a) L2 writers use their L1 to plan their writing for text generation (Cumming, 1989; Jones & Tetroe, 1987), b) Transfer their L1 knowledge to L2 writing contexts (Edelsky, 1982; Friedlander, 1990; Lay, 1982), and c) Develop ideas and produce text content and organization (Lay, 1982) In short, L2 writers always make use of their L1 first, while composing in the L2 before translating it to L2 This shows that L1 influence the L2 writer in their process of writing in L2 and the influences can be positive or negative 11
  • 12. PARTICIPANTS 70 students from two Form One classes in a selected public school in Perak They came from Chinese vernacular schools with Mandarin as the main language of instruction They scored on average a grade B or C in their „Ujian Penilaian Sekolah Rendah‟ (UPSR) and other monthly English tests 12
  • 13. Errors in language learners‟ performance including writing process have long become the subject of interest among teachers, linguists and syllabus planners According to Corder (1967), error can be defined as a systematic, consistent deviance characteristic of the learner‟s linguistic system at a given stage of learning Meanwhile, Dulay et al. (1982) define error as : “…the flawed side of the learner‟s speech or writing They are those parts of conversation or composition that deviates from selected norm of mature language performance.” (Dulay et al., 1982: 138) 13
  • 14. All of these students came from Chinese speaking family They write in Mandarin for many occasions especially in informal situations They only use English during their English classes or when needed to 14
  • 15. WRITING SAMPLE Following Halliday and Hassan (1976) who stated that writing allows writers to demonstrate their ability to construct a string of well-connected sentences that are grammatically and logically correct, the students were asked to write a short essay The writing sample for the study - 70 essays written in English by these 70 students 15
  • 16. INSTRUMENT In order to identify the errors, an error classification scheme developed by Darus et al. (2007) was adapted in this study It consists of 18 types of errors as follows : a) Tenses b) Articles c) Subject verb agreement d) Other agreement errors e) Infinitive 16
  • 17. f) Gerunds g) Pronouns h) Possessive and attributive structures i) Word order j) Incomplete structures k) Negative constructions l) Lexical categories (preposition) m) Other lexical categories n) Mechanics o) Word choice p) Word form q) Verb to be r) Malaysian typical words 17
  • 18. Markin 3.1 software (Holmes, 1996-2004) was used in the process of identifying the errors in the students‟ essays The software was chosen because it enabled researchers to obtain accurate classification and statistical analysis of errors 18
  • 19. RESEARCH PROCEDURE Students were asked to write a short essay (in the range of 80 – 300 words) The topic of the essay was My Family They were given one week to write their essays before researchers collected them for text analysis Essays collected were typed so that they were computer readable The errors of each essay were identified using Markin 3.1 software based on the error classification Scheme 19
  • 20. Table 1 20
  • 21. Table 1 shows the total number of errors for each category of grammatical errors as well as its percentage and mean value 10,147 words were analyzed that consist of approximately 145 words for each essay The results of the mean values show that four common errors are mechanics (2.73), tense (1.73), preposition (1.29) and subject-verb agreement (1.24) 21
  • 22. 4 COMMON ERRORS  Mechanics  Tenses  Preposition  Subject-Verb Agreement 22
  • 23. 19.1% of total number of errors In the area of spelling, punctuation and capitalization Spelling – „read‟ vs „rid‟ (mainly due to phonetics perception) Punctuation – commas (,) a) I feel happy to have a lovely family, and I hope my family will always happy b) There are my father, mother * eldest sister and me 23
  • 24. Capitalization a) My mom occupation is a House Wife b) My brother is a Form two student 24
  • 25. 12.1 % of total number of errors English verbs change according to aspect of time (present, past, future and continuous tense) For example : I go to the market Saya pergi ke pasar I will go to the market Saya akan pergi ke pasar I went to the market Saya telah pergi ke pasar I am going to the Saya sedang pergi ke pasar market 25
  • 26. The verb „pergi‟ in the sentences did not indicate time Time was shown separately by auxiliary verb and particles such as „akan‟, „telah‟, „sedang‟ - Difficult for students to understand the idea of tense usage Errors identified : a) Every night we watching TV [watch] b) I study in SMJK Yuk Chong [am studying] 26
  • 27. 9.0 % of total number of errors Errors includes omissions, additions and wrong selections For example - Chinese and Malay preposition „di‟ refers to „in‟, „at‟ and „on‟ in English Dia bekerja di Kuala He works in Kuala Lumpur Lumpur Salmah bekerja di Salmah works at the post pejabat pos office Dia letakkan buku itu di He puts the book on the atas meja table 27
  • 28. Therefore students were incapable of choosing the correct prepositions when more than one English prepositions corresponds to a single Chinese or Malay prepositions 28
  • 29. 8.7% of total number of errors Errors includes difficulties in distinguishing the verb „is‟ or „was‟ with „are‟ or „were‟ Confuse with some nouns such as „people‟ or „homework‟ I go to school Saya pergi ke sekolah She goes to school Dia pergi ke sekolah They go to school Mereka pergi ke sekolah 29
  • 30. Example : a) My family have five members [has] b) There is five family members in my house [are] 30
  • 31. Errors are caused by : 1) Interference of L1 2) Inadequate understanding of grammatical rules of English This study shows that the four most common errors made by the Chinese students are mechanics of writing, tenses, preposition and subject-verb agreement In general, the finding of this study shows that the Chinese students were very much influenced by the L1 in their process of learning English 31
  • 32. Suggestions : 1) Teacher should emphasize on how the concepts are handled in English, Malay and Chinese 2) Teachers should highlight certain rules in L1 and Malay that are inappropriate to be used when they write in English 32