The document summarizes feedback received from peers and teachers on an initial screening of a video project. It shows feedback cards highlighting what worked well and what could be improved. The feedback indicated that the lighting was sometimes dark, there was too much green screen usage making it less effective, too many mid shots resulting in a lack of variety, and the narrative was not clear enough. The document then outlines changes made for the final screening video, such as improving lighting through editing, reducing green screen time, adding more shot variety, and making the narrative clearer.

1. Through the process of our initial screenings I have learned a lot
from our audience feedback. In this presentation I will show
feedback cards we received from peers and teachers and show
how we made improvements. Overall I think our final video was
a big step forward from the first one and was very successful.

2. WWW
- Fast editing worked well
- It was cut to the beat
EBI
- Quite dark in places
- It was repetitive and needs more
narrative.
- All mid shots
WWW
- Use of the green screen worked well.
- Framing was good.
- Good performance shots and editing.
EBI
- Lighting could be better
- A lot of green screen
- More variety of shot types

3. WWW
- Green screen works well
- Confident performance
- Well synced
EBI
- Variety of shot types
- Hands disappear on green screen
- More narrative
- Narrative not clear
From our feedback cards we discovered that people thought that our
video was good and looked like a pop video but that our lighting
wasn’t good at times, there was too much green screen in the video so
it became less affective, there were too many mid shots so we needed
more variety, and our narrative wasn’t easy to understand because
there wasn’t much of it.

4. Before – initial screening
Before – initial screening
After – final screening
After – final screening

5. Before – initial screening After – final screening
Rather than re-filming, we decided we would edit the lighting on the editing machine.
We put a brightness and contrast effect on the clip and brightened it. This saved time
as we had a limited time to finish the project and it also made a big improvement.
Before – initial screening After – final screening

6. Before green screen comes up 9 times in
45 seconds

7. After – Green screen only
appears 6 times in 45
seconds.
We decided to take some of the green screen
shots out and only keep in the ones we really
liked, this gave the video more variety.

8. Before – we stood in different formations but all
our shots were mid shots including our solos so it
became repetitive.

9. After – we filmed close ups and
long shots.
We re-filmed in front of a black screen
with more variety of shot types and the
change of colour on the screen gave it
even more variety.

10. Before – started with them looking at her but it wasn’t really clear what was
happening.

11. After – included more
narrative.
We started the story with her walking into school
and made the story of them sending her nasty texts
making it clearer to the audience what is going on.