We received initial feedback on our music video which helped us improve it by changing some ideas and simplifying the storyline. We changed the plot from a breakup to showing a girl's feelings through different drafts. The final feedback suggested using more locations and camera shots, but we lacked time to add more.

1. We were all very pleased with our first initial feedback. Looking back at this feedback shows
us as a group how there was some of ideas we felt like we needed to change however we
was able apply this all to our work. I think we took all our concerns on board so we could
improve our music video. I think the fact our music video had such a simple story line, made
it a lot easier for an audience to understand.
Some of the changes we made to the music video was that we changed our idea a few
times, we were trying to make our music video simple but effective so we changed the plot
from the girl and boy
breaking up to the girl
drying the reason we
decided to change our idea
is because we felt this was
easier to show through a
music video.

2. The feedback we received on our final draft is that we should of used a lot more locations
and camera shots the reason we wasn’t able to include more because we didn’t have
enough time in order to add more locations.