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Shot one
Feedback given: Met the
conventions of film noir through
the use of the shadows and the
smoking. Good use of an
extreme close up.

Improvements: Possibly cut
down the length of the shot as
it lasts a while.
Shot two
Feedback given: Well framed shot,
good use of a low angle.
Introduces a main character. Good
lighting and use of shadows. Good
build up of atmosphere.

Improvements: Possibly cut down
the length of the shot.
Shot three, four, five
Feedback given: Good use of light
and shadows. Shadows are a key
convention of film noir. Good
transitions into each shot.


Improvements: Possibly make shot
three slightly shorter although we
disagreed with this as we felt this
created a greater importance for
the character.
Shot six
Feedback given: Good
introduction of a main
character. Good use of lighting
and shadows.

Improvements: Could re-film
this shot as it doesn’t fit in with
the rest of them as she is not in
the correct costume.

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Audience feedback

  • 2. Shot one Feedback given: Met the conventions of film noir through the use of the shadows and the smoking. Good use of an extreme close up. Improvements: Possibly cut down the length of the shot as it lasts a while.
  • 3. Shot two Feedback given: Well framed shot, good use of a low angle. Introduces a main character. Good lighting and use of shadows. Good build up of atmosphere. Improvements: Possibly cut down the length of the shot.
  • 4. Shot three, four, five Feedback given: Good use of light and shadows. Shadows are a key convention of film noir. Good transitions into each shot. Improvements: Possibly make shot three slightly shorter although we disagreed with this as we felt this created a greater importance for the character.
  • 5. Shot six Feedback given: Good introduction of a main character. Good use of lighting and shadows. Improvements: Could re-film this shot as it doesn’t fit in with the rest of them as she is not in the correct costume.