The document provides feedback on several shots from a film noir project. For shot one, the feedback noted it effectively used shadows, smoking, and an extreme close up to meet film noir conventions, though it could be shortened. Shot two was well framed and used low angle, shadows, and lighting to introduce a character and build atmosphere, but also could be shortened. Shots three through five continued effective use of light and shadows for transitions between shots, though shot three's length was debated as potentially creating importance for the character. Shot six introduced a character but was noted as not fitting with the others due to incorrect costume.