audience feedback 1

1. AUDIENCE
FEEDBACK – 1st
draft
S C O P E V I D S X L O O P S
M E D I A

2. Feedback 1
Our response:
• We also like the cuts on the beat but
want to possibly make it more
interesting and visually pleasing
• We agree that we should get rid of the
thermostat
• Our whole video was filmed on an
iPhone, which he doesn’t know, so we
will need to make it a bit more
cohesive, or make the narrative shots
completely different with a filter
• We are really happy with the heaven
and hell theme as well as the costume,
hair and makeup

3. Feedback 2
Our response:
• We initially had the idea for the
strobing cuts but the execution
didn’t turn out quite how we were
expecting
• We also like the inverted colours
but got quite a lot of negative
feedback about it, so might
change it
• I think the hand on the window is
very effective and just adds that
striking visual.

4. Feedback 3
Our response:
• This was all very positive
• We agree with everything he has said and
appreciate the feedback

5. Feedback 4
Our response:
• We like the range of shots we
have going on but think it could
be a bit more cohesive

6. Feedback 5
Our response:
• Glad that it was capturing their attention
• The food references were aimed more for
our younger audiences who understand the
link to body shaming and Billie’s video
”Therefore I Am” but I think there are a few
too many
• It’s quite conventional for artists to break
character at the end of the music video
which is what we were going for

7. Feedback 6
Our response:
• We agree with the
shaky head at the end
breaking character
• The tree part was one
of our first ideas, but I
can understand that it
doesn’t look as
professional due to the
camera being so far
away and therefore
zooming in was
pixelated

8. Feedback 7
Our response:
• I’m glad it looks professional
• I think the footage wasn’t very shaky,
we used a tripod for most of it
• I’ve already explained the tree bit
• I don’t think we will get rid of the tree
bit but maybe we will reduce the
amount of shots we have of it

9. Feedback 8
Our response:
• I think the “cheeky” narrative bit looks really
striking with the coloured neon lights so we
could play around with it but I doubt it will need
it
• I think the “sunburnt” effect is a bit much but I
like the idea so we will probably play around
with it
• I like the titles
• We will sort out the timing
• Hand dragging down would look good