audience feedback 2

1. AUDIENCE
FEEDBACK –
2ND DRAFT
SCOPE VIDS X LOOPS
MEDIA

2. FEEDBACK 1
Our response:
• This is very useful advice.
• I feel that if we didn’t receive this
advice, we’d never be happy enough.

3. FEEDBACK 2
Our response:
• We will attempt to mask out the
other thermostats.
• I’m glad that he likes the
colouring and I’m glad it tells a
story.

4. FEEDBACK 3
Our response:
• I’m surprised that he prefered
the first one.
• I think we might re-add a few
of the scenes that we got rid
of.
• Maybe there are too many
shots of me back to back.
• I’m glad he likes the new title.

5. FEEDBACK 4
Our resonse:
• A lot of the things that he
prefered from the first one, we’re
quite weak visuals and shots so
we won’t be changing a majority
of them back.
• I’m glad he noticed the
thermostat being taken off the
wall.
• We wont be changing the
ending, I like that it makes her
more relatable.

6. FEEDBACK 5
Our response:
• I’m glad we’ve gotten lots of positive
responses.