2. Voodoo/Occult sub-genre (pitch 1)
• Good research into the sub-genre.
• Wide variety of films have been analysed.
• Wide variety of research into setting, camera work, sound and editing.
• The plot of our pitch wasn’t very detailed.
• We need to develop our plot by being more specific.
• We need to give more information to why we have chosen to use a non-linear
OTS.
• We need to go into more detail about out USP (unique selling point).
3. Killer/psychological sub-genre (pitch 2)
• Good amount of research went into the conventions of this sub-genre.
• Our plot was a lot more detailed and specific in comparison to our first pitch.
• Good detail into why we chose to use a non-linear OTS.
• We could have put more detail into the conventions of the plot.
• More detail was needed when we were stating wether we were going to
challenge or reinforce the conventions.
• We need to choose a more original plot for our second pitch.
