This draft of an advertisement shows early progress toward a final product, but is incomplete and lacks detail. Possible improvements include adding more reviews from reputable sources to make it seem more realistic. The logo of the institution will also be added. While the simple style fits indie music stereotypes, the advert needs to be finished with additional editing before it is complete. The latest draft has implemented some of these changes, such as including reviews and the institution logo. Further edits are still required, including finalizing the album cover preview, to achieve the realistic style aimed for in depicting an indie band.

1. This was our first draft of our advert. This draft of our final product shows
the progression and the direction in which we aim to take to strive
towards our final product. The obvious fault with this draft is the fact that
it isn’t finished yet as tings are missing from it and overall it has a very
empty feel and needs more detail. Possible solutions to fix this problem
would to (with continuous editing) add more reviews from well known
reviewing sources perhaps to give it a more realistic feel. Another thing
that will be added to this advert will be our institution logo next to the
iTunes logo to again give it a more realistic feel. I feel what has went well
with this advert is the fact that it follows the stereotype of an indie bands
advertisement for their albums. These stereotypes include things like the
simplistic feel that the album as a whole has. We thought that making sure
that we did not make the advert too flamboyant was essential as this
would in turn fail to meet our main target of making our advert as realistic
as possible.
This is our latest draft of our advert. It is apparent that once again it is not
finished and yet again more editing needs to be done to finally have our
finished advert. The things that were previously mentioned such as
making more reviews and adding our own institution logo have been
achieved and overall in our opinion this gives it the realistic outlook that
we are aiming for. New features have been started on the advert for
example, we scrapped the idea of having tour dates to the let of the lead
singer of the band face and went with moving the net more towards the
centre and this has been done to ensure that we do not pack our advert
with unnecessary detail as this would fit our genre of music more and the
stereotypes that come with it. We have also made changes to the advert
as to the bottom centre of the advert we will include a small picture of the
album cover to give the viewer a better inside to the feel of the album as a
whole.