The document summarizes feedback received from an audience on promotional materials created for a sci-fi film project. The feedback was gathered through a questionnaire and helped the creator make changes to clarify the narrative and genre of the film. Key changes included adding title screens and a tagline to provide more context to the story of a woman who can teleport.

2. Throughout making this promotional package,
audience feedback has helped me change my
products to best suit my target audience and
follow the codes and conventions.
After creating the first drafts of all of my products,
I created a questionnaire to hand out to my class.
The results from this helped me make creative
decisions on what I should change or adapt and
which parts were successful.

3. I added this space so the
audience could add extra
comments if they wanted
to.

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Those who did not
understand the narrative said
that there needs to be a voice
over or title screens
explaining the narrative and
that the title of the film
should be changed to
something that links closer to
it.
I decided to add title screens
that explained the basics as I
did not want to give too
much of the narrative away. I
also changed the title of the
film from ‘Sophie’ to
‘Teleporter’ so it is clearer
what the narrative is.

5. MALE FEMALE
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15-2425-34 35+
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The most popular choices for this question
were both my actual target audience,
however, 2 out of 6 thought my products
were aimed at men. Although this is not my
target audience, this is understandable as
sci-fi films are typically aimed at men.

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YES NO MAYBE
The person that said ‘no’
said that it was not their
preferred genre of film as
they are mainly interested
in rom-coms. The person
that said ‘maybe’ said that
they did not know enough
about the narrative and
that I should make it
clearer what the narrative
is.

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6 For this question, I asked the
audience to circle all that they
thought were applicable.
One person chose just ‘Sci-fi’,
two people chose ‘Action’ and
the other three people chose
both ‘action’ and ‘Sci-fi’.
The genre of my film was both
Sci-fi and Action as I wanted
there to be slight violence. I
also wanted my main
protagonist to be able to
teleport and as this is not
something people are able to
do, this makes it sci-fi.

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The audience said that my
products worked well
together as they were all
consistent, however, one
person said I should add a
tagline to connect
everything even more.
I added the tagline ‘Just
when she thought she was
normal…’ to my poster and
magazine front cover. In
my trailer I added the
screen ‘ She thought she
was just like everyone
else…’.

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Those who said ‘maybe’ and
‘no’ said they would if the
narrative was clearer in the
poster. From this feedback, I
added screenshots of my
main protagonist teleporting
to make it clearer.
After

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YES NO MAYBE
The person who said ‘maybe’
said they would if something
about the film was included
on the front cover.
From this I added the tagline
‘Just when she thought she
was normal…’. T his is the
same tagline that I have used
throughout my promotional
package.

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YES NO
I needed to make sure the
music I chose fitted with the
genre I had chosen.
Although everyone said the
music suited the genre,
some said that I should cut
the music to fit the pace.
From this I cut the music so
when the action starts to
happen, the music gets
quicker.