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6 Cold Email
Openers That
You Should
Stop Using
Now
www.salesprofit.in
An email opener is the initial text that
aims to capture recipient's attention
But why are email openers
important?
Because it's the first text your prospect
will read after opening your email
and they will decide whether they want
to read the email further or delete it
What is an email opener?
So don’t waste your
valuable text by using these
6 cold email openers
Generic Greeting
Statements
“Dear First Name, I hope you’re having a
great day/week”
“Hi First Name, Hope you are doing well”
“Hello First Name, I trust this message
finds you in good health”
These openers are overly formal and
impersonal.
They don't add any value to your cold
email .
Long-Winded Self
Introduction
“I am the regional sales manager of XYZ
Corp, a leading company in....”
“My name is XYZ and I handle sales and
marketing at ABC Ltd”
“Let me introduce myself, I’m ABC and I
represent XYZ Pvt Ltd”
These introductions are too focused on the
sender, not the recipient.
This info is already there in your signature
Apologetic Tone
“Sorry to bother you”
I know you’d be busy, but I just wanted to
take a moment of your time...”
“I hope I'm not intruding, but...”
Openers with an apologetic tone create a
negative impression and shows lack of
confidence in the value of the message
Your emails seems as less important or
of low priority
Irrelevant Personalization
“Hey, I saw you attended [University
Name]”
“I saw you liked [Person]'s post on
LinkedIn about [Unrelated Topic]”
“I saw you have X years of experience in
organization development”
Mentioning something about the prospect
that doesn't connect with the solution you
provide doesn’t work
Personalizations like these doesn't answer
why you’re reaching out to that prospect
Robotic Personalization
“Hi [First Name], I saw you’re a [their
exact LinkedIn designation] at [Company
Name]”
“Hi [First Name], Your recent work at
[Company Name] as a [Job Title] caught
my attention”
“Hello [First Name], I see that you've been
with [Company Name] as [Job Title] for
[Time Period]”
Usually such personalization is done by
scraping bulk database from LinkedIn and
putting it into an email automation software
Shows overly usage of merge tags
General Follow Up Email
Openers
“Did you read my last email ?”
“Bumping this to the top of your inbox”
“Just following up on my last email”
These types of openers are overly used in
follow-up emails and are often seen as
nagging or intrusive.
Dosen’t provide any reason to respond
Repost
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6 Cold Email Openers to Avoid.pdf

  • 1. 6 Cold Email Openers That You Should Stop Using Now www.salesprofit.in
  • 2. An email opener is the initial text that aims to capture recipient's attention But why are email openers important? Because it's the first text your prospect will read after opening your email and they will decide whether they want to read the email further or delete it What is an email opener?
  • 3. So don’t waste your valuable text by using these 6 cold email openers
  • 4. Generic Greeting Statements “Dear First Name, I hope you’re having a great day/week” “Hi First Name, Hope you are doing well” “Hello First Name, I trust this message finds you in good health” These openers are overly formal and impersonal. They don't add any value to your cold email .
  • 5. Long-Winded Self Introduction “I am the regional sales manager of XYZ Corp, a leading company in....” “My name is XYZ and I handle sales and marketing at ABC Ltd” “Let me introduce myself, I’m ABC and I represent XYZ Pvt Ltd” These introductions are too focused on the sender, not the recipient. This info is already there in your signature
  • 6. Apologetic Tone “Sorry to bother you” I know you’d be busy, but I just wanted to take a moment of your time...” “I hope I'm not intruding, but...” Openers with an apologetic tone create a negative impression and shows lack of confidence in the value of the message Your emails seems as less important or of low priority
  • 7. Irrelevant Personalization “Hey, I saw you attended [University Name]” “I saw you liked [Person]'s post on LinkedIn about [Unrelated Topic]” “I saw you have X years of experience in organization development” Mentioning something about the prospect that doesn't connect with the solution you provide doesn’t work Personalizations like these doesn't answer why you’re reaching out to that prospect
  • 8. Robotic Personalization “Hi [First Name], I saw you’re a [their exact LinkedIn designation] at [Company Name]” “Hi [First Name], Your recent work at [Company Name] as a [Job Title] caught my attention” “Hello [First Name], I see that you've been with [Company Name] as [Job Title] for [Time Period]” Usually such personalization is done by scraping bulk database from LinkedIn and putting it into an email automation software Shows overly usage of merge tags
  • 9. General Follow Up Email Openers “Did you read my last email ?” “Bumping this to the top of your inbox” “Just following up on my last email” These types of openers are overly used in follow-up emails and are often seen as nagging or intrusive. Dosen’t provide any reason to respond
  • 10. Repost If you found value from this post
  • 11. For more such content that will help you become better in B2B sales Follow us