2. FRONT PAGE
Some of the feedback that I received on my front
page was to shape my body copy text around the
image which is something I will take into
consideration as at the moment I feel like the text
is covering up the photography and the prop
which means it's blocking conventions from my
audience. More feedback I received was that my
barcode needed to be centered either left or right
and the price needed to be above it to ensure my
audience are well informed of the price. I also
noticed that I needed more variety in images.
I also received some positive feedback as well on
my front page, this was that my main artist fitted
the genre well because of his motif's and costume.
As well as this I had a well established house style,
which was red and black. My focal image had a
direct mode of address which is an important
convention.
3. CONTENTS PAGE
Feedback that I received for my contents page was
to make sure my gaps and layout was consistent as
my text boxes weren't aligned properly. Another
comment that was made was that my title should
be spread out more which will make it easier to
read and more visible for my audience. More
feedback that I received which was similar to my
front page was that I needed a variety of images.
Some positive feedback that I received was that my
title font was consistent as was my house style
however because I haven't filled in any of my body
copy there was no text to give feedback for.
4. DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD
As my double page spread is quite bare there
wasn't a lot to give feedback for this shows that I
need to manage my time better during practical
lessons. However an important technique that
came to my attention was that I should always
keep my text parallel to my key image so that it
compliments the photograph better. This comment
was made here with my text boxes which cover the
image instead of complimenting it. More feedback
that I received for this page was to make my title
bolder and less spaced out as text in magazine
layouts is uses quite close together which is
something I picked up from existing material.
