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AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: PLATT Olivia
Planning – Comments and mark out of 16/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 49/60
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 15/20
Question 1: Answered using powerpoint and slideshare. This is a proficient
answer detailing how conventions have been used throughout. Conventions have
been broken down in goof detail however, no examples of real media texts given
to help back up your points.
Question 2: Answered using a vodcast, good piece to camera. A proficient
answer going into good detail about representation of social groups.
Question 3: Answered excellently using emaze. CBS Films identified as a suitable
distribution company for this film. Good reasons given as to why, backed up with
good examples.
Question 4: Answered using powerpoint and slideshare (originally answered
using ‘goanimate’ but site no longer works, student re-did work). A proficient
answer. Good reflection of male and female audiences. Great inclusion of ABC1 or
4Cs scales to show more depth to your answer.
Question 5: Answered using prezi. A proficient answer using in class feedback
plus own questionnaire results analysed well.
Question 6: Answered as a text video. An excellent answer using white boards to
show your skills at the start and end of the year. Good addition of clips to help
demonstrate your points. You could have added background music to the video.
Question 7: Answered using a podcast. An excellent answer providing good
reflection from preliminary task to final task.
Candidate has used proficient skill in the use of digital technology and ICT in the
evaluation. Proficient ability to communicate throughout. Overall a high proficient
body of work, well done.
Total 80/100

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Platt olivia as cw evaluation and overall feedback sheet

  • 1. AS Coursework Overall Marks Name: PLATT Olivia Planning – Comments and mark out of 16/20 For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 49/60 For full comments please see the production marks sheet Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 15/20 Question 1: Answered using powerpoint and slideshare. This is a proficient answer detailing how conventions have been used throughout. Conventions have been broken down in goof detail however, no examples of real media texts given to help back up your points. Question 2: Answered using a vodcast, good piece to camera. A proficient answer going into good detail about representation of social groups. Question 3: Answered excellently using emaze. CBS Films identified as a suitable distribution company for this film. Good reasons given as to why, backed up with good examples. Question 4: Answered using powerpoint and slideshare (originally answered using ‘goanimate’ but site no longer works, student re-did work). A proficient answer. Good reflection of male and female audiences. Great inclusion of ABC1 or 4Cs scales to show more depth to your answer. Question 5: Answered using prezi. A proficient answer using in class feedback plus own questionnaire results analysed well. Question 6: Answered as a text video. An excellent answer using white boards to show your skills at the start and end of the year. Good addition of clips to help demonstrate your points. You could have added background music to the video. Question 7: Answered using a podcast. An excellent answer providing good reflection from preliminary task to final task. Candidate has used proficient skill in the use of digital technology and ICT in the evaluation. Proficient ability to communicate throughout. Overall a high proficient body of work, well done. Total 80/100