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AS Coursework – Film Openings
Name: Platt, Olivia
Two Minute Film Opening:
There is evidence of excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
• Producing material appropriate for the target audience and task;
• using titles appropriately according to institutional conventions;
• using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set;
• shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the
camera, attention to framing, variety of shot distance and close attention to mise-en-
scene;
• using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and
appropriate use of shot transitions and other effects.
Film comments:
Good use of titles.Well-edited,nice overlays. Goodclearvoice over.Goodcinematography.Good
choice of musicto buildtension.
Total 49/60 Level: 4

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Film Feedback

  • 1. AS Coursework – Film Openings Name: Platt, Olivia Two Minute Film Opening: There is evidence of excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills. • Producing material appropriate for the target audience and task; • using titles appropriately according to institutional conventions; • using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set; • shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot distance and close attention to mise-en- scene; • using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions and other effects. Film comments: Good use of titles.Well-edited,nice overlays. Goodclearvoice over.Goodcinematography.Good choice of musicto buildtension. Total 49/60 Level: 4