Website Draft for Luna Lux

1. Website Screen Shots Draft 2
By Kayleigh Umfreville

2. Welcome page

3. Welcome Page
 From getting feedback and from peers they said that the
welcome page was too boring and didn’t really invite the
users in to use the website. Also one of our teachers
thought that having an “X” to go on to the next page is
very negative, which is something that we would like to
avoid.
 From this feedback we started from the beginning as this
would be easier to come up with a new idea. We
decided that we wanted to play on the Garden of Eden
side to link with the theme of the album as this would
help promote it. The ivy is appearing in sections to make
it look like it is growing towards the door, the same effect
is applied to the feet. This will help to invite the users to
click on the door to the next page.

4. Home Page

5. Home Page
 The feedback that we got on this page was that the
background was too dark for the artists image. Also there
wasn’t much about the artist which would help to sell her
image.
 From this we changed the background to a lighter
background, but from looking at other artists website they
always have a big close up of the artist on the
homepage. From us to help develop to homepage further
it would be to add a close up of Luna Lux.
 We added little Polaroid photos of the artist that appear
when you click on to the next page as this would help
with her star image, and make her look fun. However, our
teacher said that what she is wearing in these photos is
very bland and to make it better her clothes need to
stand out more.

6. Me Page

7. Me Page
 On this page we have changed the background to
make the website consistent to make it look more
professional.
 Also we changed the writing of Luna Lux as we think
that the new one that we have added looks more like
a hand writing and it is very distinctive, so people will
know who it is by the hand writing.

8. Music Page

9. Music Page
 The only things that we changed on this page was
the background to make it consistent.
 We haven’t received any constructive feedback on
this page as they think it is fine.

10. Connect Page

11. Connect Page
 We haven’t changed anything on this page as we
haven’t got any feedback for it.

12. See Page

13. See Page
 To make the website consistent we added a Polaroid
picture saying “Enjoy” as this would help make the
website more personal for the consumer.

14. See Page

15. See page
 On this page we added little facts about her
childhood for her fans to get personal with her, which
is something that most fans wish to achieve.
 Then we added more inspirations which link to her
music. This will show fans why she has wrote certain
lyrics, which will help them to give meaning.

16. See Page

17. See Page
 We didn’t have this page before, so we added all of
our behind the scenes to give fans something more
to watch, which will help to make the website more
interesting for them to use. This also will lead to
them wanting to keep coming back to the website as
they can watch new videos that will continually be
out on there.
 To improve this page we need to come up with new
video ideas that are fun (like vlogger games) This will
help to make Luna look fun and interesting, will help
to persuaded to come them to see her in concert.

18. Shop Page

19. Shop Page
 On this page we have added new products to give
the consumers more of a selection to buy from.
 Also when the proceed to the check out there is a
little message saying “Thank you” from Luna in her
hand writing making the website again more
personal.
 Plus at the end of the page there is a link to buy
ticket which helps to promote her tour.

20. Shop Page

21. Shop Page
 Originally we didn’t have this page but from looking
at other artist pages they always have a link to buy
their your tickets.
 She is supporting Ed Sheeran when he goes on tour
this year, as this will help to promote her name and
get people to listen to her music.
 She is playing at the festival Barn on the Farm, as
this is the type of festival that upcoming artists will
play to get their names out. Previously Hozier and
Jame Bay have played at this festival, which will give
it a good name.

22. Contact Page

23. Contact Page
 Again we didn’t have this page before, but we added
it to make the website more interactive for the
audience.
 To make this page better we could add in pictures
from the competition to show what other fans have
done.

24. Contact Page

25. Contact Page
 We haven’t changed anything to this page as we
have not received any feedback to make it better.