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CLIENT FEEDBACK
06/12/2019
I gave my first draft of the script to my client to read, after which we had a meeting to discuss it and for them to provide some feedback. The
client was generally pleased with the initial draft and didn’t have too many suggestions. They suggested I added in scene numbers to make
production easier as cast orcrew could be instructed to turn to a specific scene. Additionally, they said a name, email and address would be
necessary on the first page. I made changes to my script according to this feedback, adding in scene numbers and adding my name, email and
address.
08/01/2020
With my final draft of my
script completed, I emailed it
over to the client asking for
further feedback and
questioning on a specific
aspect of the script (dialogue
in scene 10). On the right is
this email correspondence:

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  • 1. CLIENT FEEDBACK 06/12/2019 I gave my first draft of the script to my client to read, after which we had a meeting to discuss it and for them to provide some feedback. The client was generally pleased with the initial draft and didn’t have too many suggestions. They suggested I added in scene numbers to make production easier as cast orcrew could be instructed to turn to a specific scene. Additionally, they said a name, email and address would be necessary on the first page. I made changes to my script according to this feedback, adding in scene numbers and adding my name, email and address. 08/01/2020 With my final draft of my script completed, I emailed it over to the client asking for further feedback and questioning on a specific aspect of the script (dialogue in scene 10). On the right is this email correspondence: