3. [A]s our tools for manipulating digital models
improve, the model stops marking loss and takes on
a clearer role as a strategic representation, one
which deliberately omits and exaggerates and
distorts the scale so that we can work with the parts
that matter to us.
- Julia Flanders, “The Productive Unease of 21st-
century Digital Scholarship”
5. critical making in the classroom
CC: łukasz łuszczek (Flickr)
As my students build—both collaboratively and
creatively—they are also reshaping, and that very
reshaping is an interpretative process. It is not
writing, or at least not only writing. And it is
certainly not only thinking.
- Mark Sample, “Building and Sharing”
18. Contact
Twitter: @keving_smith
Email: kgsmith2@gmail.com
Web: kevingeraldsmith.com
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Editor's Notes
So I have three primary frameworks that I think are useful :
First, critical making as it has been described by McGann, Ramsay, and Rockwell – and how that is taken up by people like Jentery Sayers, Mark Sample, and Matt Kirschenbaum. This also relates to the “resistance in the materials” of Nowviskie and the “productive unease” that Flanders describes in creating digital models of texts.
So I have three primary frameworks that I think are useful :
First, critical making as it has been described by McGann, Ramsay, and Rockwell – and how that is taken up by people like Jentery Sayers, Mark Sample, and Matt Kirschenbaum. This also relates to the “resistance in the materials” of Nowviskie and the “productive unease” that Flanders describes in creating digital models of texts.
Structural
Rhetorical
major project I have looked at for guidance:
Trey Conatser describes teaching an XML-based FYW course at Ohio State in 2013. You can read about that in JDH 2.2 “Changing Medium, Transforming Composition”
-while his project mirrors mine in many ways, a key critique I have of Conatser’s approach is that he pre-defined the markup schema according to his goals for each writing assignment.
-I think this is unnecessarily prescriptive and runs counter to my theoretical framework (both critical making and exploratory markup)
major project I have looked at for guidance:
Trey Conatser describes teaching an XML-based FYW course at Ohio State in 2013. You can read about that in JDH 2.2 “Changing Medium, Transforming Composition”
-while his project mirrors mine in many ways, a key critique I have of Conatser’s approach is that he pre-defined the markup schema according to his goals for each writing assignment.
-I think this is unnecessarily prescriptive and runs counter to my theoretical framework (both critical making and exploratory markup)
For example, in his primary source analysis, Conatser requires students to make the following formulation at least once in their documents:
In at least one paragraph match evidence (details) from the primary source with the interpretations you draw from them:
<seg type="ev_interp">
Two major projects I have looked at for guidance:
Trey Conatser describes teaching an XML-based FYW course at Ohio State in 2013. You can read about that in JDH 2.2 “Changing Medium, Transforming Composition”
-while his project mirrors mine in many ways, a key critique I have of Conatser’s approach is that he pre-defined the markup schema according to his goals for each writing assignment.
-I think this is unnecessarily prescriptive and runs counter to my theoretical framework (both critical making and exploratory markup)
-Finally, Wendell Piez’s description of an “exploratory markup” that results in a bottom-up design of a model or schema. That is, the schema is modeled after the actually-existing tags.
-This will let students tag freely, then we can discuss together how we model a schema off of what we need.
-I’ll say here I’m modeling my approach off of my understanding of how the ECDA has proceeded with their customization.
-Finally, Wendell Piez’s description of an “exploratory markup” that results in a bottom-up design of a model or schema. That is, the schema is modeled after the actually-existing tags.
-This will let students tag freely, then we can discuss together how we model a schema off of what we need.
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- ultimately, I’ll be building the visualization side of things with XSLT, but for now,
Here you can see the different segments I marked up throughout the document, each has a simple rollover that can be customized to explain the type of segment or provide citational information.
You can see color shifts in the document—green and red are organizational cues and summarizing sources; brown and blue dominate the middle and end of the document, here these tags signify argumentative synthesis and explicit connections to a future project.
One can imagine some other methods being employed here—visualizations, manipulations of the textual data with python or another coding language, etc.
Really just beginning to play with the transformational possibilities, but as of now I’ve color coded span tags and created rollover effects that prompt the rhetorical moves and/or sources tagged in the document
The plan is to link these three(or maybe even more) stylesheets together as a way of layering the text. Students can choose to make certain markup choices explicit in certain views and not others — again, underscores the mediated nature of all texts
A faceted approach allows for what Manovich calls “visualization without sampling,” which can be useful both for comparative purposes: how are these two student texts alike/different; and also as a method of distant reading: to compare across a large corpus of student texts, or the oeuvre of a single author;
Do certain types of assignments result in certain rhetorical moves or strategies for students?