Audience Feedback for my Media Coursework

1. What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
Life of a gymnast who looses sense of
reality, the extremes she will go
through in order to win.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
Music has been chosen well it goes
very well with the action.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
I don’t see the relevance of gymnastics
as a thriller, something else should be
revealed.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
Gymnastics, nervousness and
excitement of competitions. Maybe
things are getting out of control and
there may be an injury involved.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
Great editing (dissolves, fades), clear
that she was imagining her abilities, or
reiterating. Very good use of colour-
contrasts the costume on black
background.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
More explanation. A bit unclear,
mysterious. Weird soundtrack that
didn’t really suit the video.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
About a gymnast, who is remembering
when she could do tricks?
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
I like the reversing of shots to make it
abstract.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Sound could have been more effective.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
This athlete is trying to overcome a
trauma that happened in the past.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
Can hear many things, well filmed.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Maybe have a face to white to make it
clear that she is thinking back
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
Life of the girl, she is a professional
gymnast who becomes obsessed with
winning the contest.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
I really like the way that the gymnast
was doing everything on the black
background. Very well done.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
I didn’t really get the beginning of the
sequence. Maybe take it out.

2. What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
A gymnast training for her
competition, and imagining herself.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The slow motion shots and mysterious
plot.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Make the plot clearer and the change of
music a bit too sudden.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
About a girl who it remembering how
good she was and how she’s not able to
do the same.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The main actress- professional
gymnast and the moves that she
makes.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
I didn’t really like how the titles
appeared, cut and then show the title.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
It’s a psychological thriller like the
black swan, its all in her hear and she is
losing sanity just to be the best.
Madness though perfection- obsession:
looses grip on reality.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
Beautiful cinematography of the
gymnast. Effective use of slow motion
and great music. Love the lighting.
Love the subtleness of it.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Bad end shot- really bad end shot.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
The girl is trying to remember how to
do something, the movie is about the
girl who had a trauma, after a long time
she is going back to try again.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The contrast between the beginning
and the end. The music made it flow.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Show her thinking more or end with
her opening her eyes.

3. What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
About a psycho gymnast.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
Good to watch, it has really nice angles.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Needs to have a clearer plot line.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
Following on the lines of Black Swan-
obsessed with contest, looses control
of society.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
Black- focussing on her.
Good sound track.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
A bit boring.
No direction forward.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
A gymnast preparing for her
competition, showing how far she will
go to become the best.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The subtle sound effects is very good
conveys sadness.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
The opening shot should have better
continuity.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
About a gymnast with mental issues.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The darkness; and the music.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Needs a clearer picture of what is
happening.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
Psychological thriller. It is all in her
head.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The setting, sound- the changing into
her imagination.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Loss of balance on the first move- lack
of emotion.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
There is gymnast with a dark side-
perhaps and alternate universe.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The studio filmed stuff.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Connect a bit more of a plot shows
more of her mind, what she’s thinking.

4. What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
A gymnast breaking their back.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The flexibility is good and the
mysterious side of it.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
About a gymnast practising, perhaps
obsessed with what she is doing.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
There is good sound editing and the
fluency is good.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Didn’t really understand what the plot
was.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
Didn’t understand the plot line.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
Didn’t understand why there was a
sequence of just the gymnast doing
gymnastics.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
A girl struggling with her loss of grip
on reality. We follow a girl to a
tournament as she loses her grip on
reality.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The shots against the black were great.
Along with the music makes is fluid.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
The first 30 seconds could have been
cut, didn’t fit with the rest of the film.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
Music goes really well.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?

5. What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
The girl is thinking about her
competition.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
The music and the set of the girl on the
black background.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?
There could have been a more
consistent sound track.
What do you think the basic plot of the
thriller is?
She lost her memory and she’s trying
to find it back.
What do you think are the key
strengths of this thriller and why?
Background music is very soft, and it
works well.
How do you think this thriller could be
made even ore effective and why?