1. Draft Script
Ext.
(The Scene opens with a car parked up with the driver’s window down, the
camera creeps closer to the car and then we see that there are 4 people in
this small car.)
Int.
(Camera moves into the car, Jamie is the driver with Samuel sat in the
passenger and Joshua and Bradley sat in the back.)
Jamie
Right okay, this is the meeting point
Samuel
How far are the houses?
Jamie
Just round the corner, it's not far
Joshua
Good because I swear if I ever have to
Ran as far as I do last time I'll kill one of you
Samuel
Well don't try steal someone's phone again.
Jamie
Alright just remember this place okay?
Ext.
(The camera is left in the road as the car drives on towards the houses.)
Joshua
That is a nice house
Jamie
That's why we aren't going there
(The car drives on some more then stops in a dark area)
Jamie
It’s these four here
Int.
(Jamie turns around to get recognition for what he said and sees Bradley
asleep in the backseat.)
Jamie
Are you taking the piss?
2. Draft Script
Samuel
What?
Jamie
He's actually fallen asleep again
Samuel
Wake him up then
(Joshua hits Bradley on the leg and he springs to life)
Bradley
Huh?
Jamie
Do you remember the meeting point?
Bradley
Oh, are we already here?
Samuel
Someone needs to keep an eye on him at all times
Ext.
(They all get out of the car and put on gloves, then they all put something
over their face's and then they all tap the top of the car with their hand
and walk off.)
Jamie
10 minutes
Joshua
Same as always
