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“DEDICATED”
By
Harvey pounds
Street Address
City, ST ZIP Code
Phone
Email
EXT. ROAD - NIGHT
The Scene opens with a car parked up with the driver’s window down, the
camera creeps closer to the car and then we see that there are 4 people in
this small car.
INT. INSIDE CAR - NIGHT
Camera moves into the car, Jamie is the driver with Samuel sat in the
passenger and Joshua and Bradley sat in the back
JAMIE
Right okay, this is the meeting point
SAMUEL
How far?
JAMIE
Just round the corner, not that far
JOSHUA
Good because I swear if I have to run as far as I did last time I'll kill
one of you
JAMES
Don't try steal someone's phone again
JAMIE
Alright just remember this place alright?
EXT. ROAD - NIGHT
The car drives down the street towards the houses
JOSHUA
That is a nice house
JAMIE
That's why we aren't going there
The car drives on some more then stops in a dark area
JAMIE
It’s these five here
INT. INSIDE CAR - NIGHT
Jamie turns around to get recognition for what he said and sees Bradley
asleep in the backseat
JAMES
Are you taking the piss?
SAMUEL
What?
JAMES
He's fallen asleep again
SAMUEL
Wake him up then
(Joshua hits Bradley on the leg and he springs to life)
BRADLEY
Huh?
JAMIE
Do you remember the meeting point?
BRADLEY
Oh, are we already here?
SAMUEL
Someone needs to keep an eye on him at all times
EXT. ROAD - NIGHT
They all get out of the car and put on gloves, then they all put something
over their face's and then they all tap the top of the car with their hand
and walk off
JAMIE
10 minutes
JOSHUA
Same as always
INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY
The same group of friends plus a new character (James) are in a living room
playing Xbox and talking.
JAMIE
What’s the problem then?
SAMUEL
I just don’t have the money
JOSHUA
Wait, sorry what don’t you have the money for?
SAMUEL
A car
JOSHUA
I think we all need money really
BRADLEY
Yeah my job barley even pays me
JAMIE
Let’s just rob a bank then
SAMUEL
(Sarcastic)
*laugh* Yea that’s not a bad idea
JAMES
Yeah, like we could rob a bank
JAMIE
Can’t be that hard, people do it all the time
JOSHUA
People also go to prison for it
BRADLEY
Just don’t rob a bank then
JAMIE
What do you mean?
SAMUEL
Bradley mate, we are joking you know
BRADLEY
I’m just saying rob something smaller and you’ll probably get away with it
JOSHUA
You’ve watched way too many films
JAMIE
When you say something smaller what do you mean like a shop or something?
SAMUEL
Or a house?
BRADLEY
Yea a house I guess
JAMIE
That’s not a bad idea
JAMES
Yeah but I think we’d still get caught
SAMUEL
Not if we did it right
JOSHUA
And how do we do it right?
JAMIE
Just plan, like a lot.
INT. HOUSE – DAY
Jamie and James start walking through the house
JAMES
This probably won’t end well
JAMIE
It should be fine
JAMES
I mean it’s not a good idea though
JAMIE
It’s a good way to get money
JAMES
Yea but not if we get caught
JAMIE
We won’t
INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY
A few days has passed since the last scene, it’s just Bradley and James in
the living room, there’s a table in the middle of the room. Jamie, Samuel
and Joshua then walk in holding paper and pens.
JAMIE
Right let’s get to it
JOSHUA
How bad of a crime is this?
SAMUEL
Pretty bad I’m not gunna lie
JAMES
Okay, so we are actually doing this?
JAMIE
Well hopefully with your plan it will work out
JOSHUA
Alright, let’s hear it
SAMUEL
We need a pretty good idea of what we are doing
JOSHUA
Yea we really don’t want to get caught
JAMES
Well I think it’s stupid but I’ve got an idea
BRADLEY
What’s your plan then?
JAMES
Okay so we rob multiple houses in a night but only take a little bit form
each house.
JOSHUA
So high risk low reward?
JAMES
Yes
JOSHUA
What’s the point, we might as well go all out.
JAMES
If we think it through enough and make sure nothing can go wrong it will
work out better
JAMIE
But why only take a little?
JAMES
Well are you planning on getting caught?
JAMIE
Obviously not
JAMES
Exactly, that means that we can take a little so that it’s not obvious
theft, everyone loses money
SAMUEL
So it basically doesn’t look like anyone was ever there
JAMES
Yeah
SAMEUL
That could work
JAMIE
I mean yea but it’s not gunna get us a lot of money
JAMES
That’s why we do them fast and through the night, get like 10 houses a
night
JAMIE
Right well that’s not gunna be easy
SAMUEL
It’s the best idea we’ve got so write it down
INT. HOUSE HALL WAY – NIGHT
All characters are getting ready to leave putting on hoodies and gloves. As
they all get ready Jamie walks around the corner with a piece of paper with
a lot of writing. He walks past everyone and opens the front door.
JAMIE
Everyone ready?
SAMUEL
Yep
JAMES
Let’s go
JOSHUA
Where did Bradley go?
The toilet flushes upstairs and then a few seconds later Bradley walks down
the stairs while everyone looks at him.
BRADLEY
We off then?
JAMIE
Yea c’mon
INT. INSIDE CAR – NIGHT
As they drive around the three in the back seats are looking over the
paper, Bradley is sat is the middle with it across his lap
BRADLEY
So which house are we going to first?
JAMIE
We looked around here the other week and it looks like a lot of people
leave there back doors open, we could be wrong but it’s worth a try
SAMUEL
How many houses are we getting tonight?
JAMES
Well we might as well start off small then as we get better we can do more
JOSHUA
You really have thought about this a lot haven’t you?
JAMES
Yea, I did
JAMIE
Right these are the houses we scouted
SAMUEL
Nice, they will definitely have some money to spare us
JAMES
Okay so this is important, this is the meeting point. If we don’t all make
it back to the car in the time we will all meet here
JAMIE
If there is only 1 person back at the car run to the meet point, if there
are a few of us back at the car drive it over
JOSHUA
Okay I mean only you can drive so make sure you are back
JAMIE
I will try my best
INT. INSIDE CAR – NIGHT
They drive the car to a different part of the neighbourhood then slowly and
quietly come to a stop. As they car stops the lights turn off engine cuts
out
JAMIE
Okay get your stuff together
BRADLEY
So which house am I going too?
JAMES
Number *14a* (Will change due to location)
JAMIE
It says on the plan which house you go too
BRADLEY
Oh yeah
SMAUEL
Let’s go then
EXT. IN THE STREET – NIGHT
The car is parked off centre to a street light, we see everyone get out of
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My script draft 2

  • 2. EXT. ROAD - NIGHT The Scene opens with a car parked up with the driver’s window down, the camera creeps closer to the car and then we see that there are 4 people in this small car. INT. INSIDE CAR - NIGHT Camera moves into the car, Jamie is the driver with Samuel sat in the passenger and Joshua and Bradley sat in the back JAMIE Right okay, this is the meeting point SAMUEL How far? JAMIE Just round the corner, not that far JOSHUA Good because I swear if I have to run as far as I did last time I'll kill one of you JAMES Don't try steal someone's phone again JAMIE Alright just remember this place alright? EXT. ROAD - NIGHT The car drives down the street towards the houses JOSHUA That is a nice house JAMIE That's why we aren't going there The car drives on some more then stops in a dark area JAMIE It’s these five here INT. INSIDE CAR - NIGHT Jamie turns around to get recognition for what he said and sees Bradley asleep in the backseat JAMES Are you taking the piss?
  • 3. SAMUEL What? JAMES He's fallen asleep again SAMUEL Wake him up then (Joshua hits Bradley on the leg and he springs to life) BRADLEY Huh? JAMIE Do you remember the meeting point? BRADLEY Oh, are we already here? SAMUEL Someone needs to keep an eye on him at all times EXT. ROAD - NIGHT They all get out of the car and put on gloves, then they all put something over their face's and then they all tap the top of the car with their hand and walk off JAMIE 10 minutes JOSHUA Same as always INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY The same group of friends plus a new character (James) are in a living room playing Xbox and talking. JAMIE What’s the problem then? SAMUEL I just don’t have the money JOSHUA Wait, sorry what don’t you have the money for?
  • 4. SAMUEL A car JOSHUA I think we all need money really BRADLEY Yeah my job barley even pays me JAMIE Let’s just rob a bank then SAMUEL (Sarcastic) *laugh* Yea that’s not a bad idea JAMES Yeah, like we could rob a bank JAMIE Can’t be that hard, people do it all the time JOSHUA People also go to prison for it BRADLEY Just don’t rob a bank then JAMIE What do you mean? SAMUEL Bradley mate, we are joking you know BRADLEY I’m just saying rob something smaller and you’ll probably get away with it JOSHUA You’ve watched way too many films JAMIE When you say something smaller what do you mean like a shop or something? SAMUEL Or a house? BRADLEY Yea a house I guess
  • 5. JAMIE That’s not a bad idea JAMES Yeah but I think we’d still get caught SAMUEL Not if we did it right JOSHUA And how do we do it right? JAMIE Just plan, like a lot. INT. HOUSE – DAY Jamie and James start walking through the house JAMES This probably won’t end well JAMIE It should be fine JAMES I mean it’s not a good idea though JAMIE It’s a good way to get money JAMES Yea but not if we get caught JAMIE We won’t INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY A few days has passed since the last scene, it’s just Bradley and James in the living room, there’s a table in the middle of the room. Jamie, Samuel and Joshua then walk in holding paper and pens. JAMIE Right let’s get to it JOSHUA How bad of a crime is this? SAMUEL Pretty bad I’m not gunna lie
  • 6. JAMES Okay, so we are actually doing this? JAMIE Well hopefully with your plan it will work out JOSHUA Alright, let’s hear it SAMUEL We need a pretty good idea of what we are doing JOSHUA Yea we really don’t want to get caught JAMES Well I think it’s stupid but I’ve got an idea BRADLEY What’s your plan then? JAMES Okay so we rob multiple houses in a night but only take a little bit form each house. JOSHUA So high risk low reward? JAMES Yes JOSHUA What’s the point, we might as well go all out. JAMES If we think it through enough and make sure nothing can go wrong it will work out better JAMIE But why only take a little? JAMES Well are you planning on getting caught? JAMIE Obviously not JAMES Exactly, that means that we can take a little so that it’s not obvious theft, everyone loses money
  • 7. SAMUEL So it basically doesn’t look like anyone was ever there JAMES Yeah SAMEUL That could work JAMIE I mean yea but it’s not gunna get us a lot of money JAMES That’s why we do them fast and through the night, get like 10 houses a night JAMIE Right well that’s not gunna be easy SAMUEL It’s the best idea we’ve got so write it down INT. HOUSE HALL WAY – NIGHT All characters are getting ready to leave putting on hoodies and gloves. As they all get ready Jamie walks around the corner with a piece of paper with a lot of writing. He walks past everyone and opens the front door. JAMIE Everyone ready? SAMUEL Yep JAMES Let’s go JOSHUA Where did Bradley go? The toilet flushes upstairs and then a few seconds later Bradley walks down the stairs while everyone looks at him. BRADLEY We off then? JAMIE Yea c’mon
  • 8. INT. INSIDE CAR – NIGHT As they drive around the three in the back seats are looking over the paper, Bradley is sat is the middle with it across his lap BRADLEY So which house are we going to first? JAMIE We looked around here the other week and it looks like a lot of people leave there back doors open, we could be wrong but it’s worth a try SAMUEL How many houses are we getting tonight? JAMES Well we might as well start off small then as we get better we can do more JOSHUA You really have thought about this a lot haven’t you? JAMES Yea, I did JAMIE Right these are the houses we scouted SAMUEL Nice, they will definitely have some money to spare us JAMES Okay so this is important, this is the meeting point. If we don’t all make it back to the car in the time we will all meet here JAMIE If there is only 1 person back at the car run to the meet point, if there are a few of us back at the car drive it over JOSHUA Okay I mean only you can drive so make sure you are back JAMIE I will try my best INT. INSIDE CAR – NIGHT They drive the car to a different part of the neighbourhood then slowly and quietly come to a stop. As they car stops the lights turn off engine cuts out JAMIE Okay get your stuff together
  • 9. BRADLEY So which house am I going too? JAMES Number *14a* (Will change due to location) JAMIE It says on the plan which house you go too BRADLEY Oh yeah SMAUEL Let’s go then EXT. IN THE STREET – NIGHT The car is parked off centre to a street light, we see everyone get out of the car